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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART...2
ak-wo mai...wo...
she tried to run from there...but naitik hold her hand tighly...
nk-agar tumhe help hi chahiye thi...toh maang leti yu jhoota natak karne ki kya zaroorat thi...
akshara again look at him...but suddenly naitik's all friend came there...so he loose his grip...and akshara quickly ran from there...
shaurya-kya hua naitik ? usne kuch kiya kya ?
nk-nahi...
he excuse himself from there...and came back to his home...
( he lives with his mother...maa bete ki ek choti si duniya )
gayatri-munna ! chal aa jaa kuch kha le...
( aur ghar par bhi naitik babu ka gussa kaha shaant hone wala tha )
nk-mujhe nahi khana...
gayatri start came behind him...
" kuch hua hai kya college me ? "
but he angrily went to his room...lock his room from inside...
gy-theek hai...mat bata jab gussa shaant ho jayega toh khud hi bahar aa jayega...
here naitik angrily remove his shirt...and lay on the bed while closing his eyes ( start thinking about akshara )...again a little smile came on his face...
nk(st)-ye ladkiyaan bhi naa...na jaane kya kya karti hai...par jo bhi tha...wo ladki thi bahut pyaari...
he turn to the other side...and saw three miss calls...he pick up his mobile...
nk-ye...mohit mujhe kyu phone kyu kar raha hai ?
he call back to mohit...
nk-tune phone kyu kiya tha ?
mo-pehle ye bata tu theek toh hai naa?
nk-yaaa...i am ok...bas uss ladki ne dimaag kharab kar diya tha...
mo-accha wala ya phir bura wala ?
nk-ye accha bura kya hota hai ?
mo-matlab ye ki pyaar wala dimaag kharab kiya hai...ya phir gusse wala ?
nk-tu jaanta hai...mai inn ladkiyo se jitna door hu utna hi bhala hu...
mo-toh phir antra ko friend kyu banaya ?
nk-dost hai wo hamari...school time se jaante hai hum usko...khair wo sab jaane de...tu ye bata ki phone kyu kar raha tha ?
mo- yaad dilane ke liye...ki aaj combined study ke liye shaurya ke ghar aana hai...
nk-kya study yaar...jab pehle paper hi kharab ho gaya...btw aaj toh hum antra ke ghar jaane wale the
mo-haa par shaurya ne pehle call kar liya...tu time se aa jana
nk-yup !
and cut the phone...
IN EVENING...
NAITIK came out from his room...where as gayatri was doin some work...he came n hug her from behind...
nk-i am sorry maa...
gy(smile)-bas tujhe yahi kehna aata hai...
nk-aur kya kahu...aap mujhe itne acche se samajhti jo hain...
gy-mere beta itna pyaara jo hai...tujhse jo ladki shadi karegi...wo bahut khush rahegi...
nk(irritated)-bas phir se shuru ho gaya na aapka...par mujhe koi shadi nahi karni...
gy-theek hai tu yu shadi ke naam par chidh mat...
naitik kiss her on her cheeks " bye maa...mai shaurya ke ghar jaa raha hu "
gy-bye !
with this naitik went from there...
after some time...
all frinds again meet at shaurya's house...
and sitting together in hall...
nk-tune aaj hi hum sab ko yaha kyu bula liya?
sh-wo...wo antra ke ghar par guest aaye hue the...kyu antra ?
an{confused)-mere yaha
shaurya gave a glare to her...
an-ya...ya aaj dad ke officce se kuch log aane wale the...isliye
mo-accha kiya...warna antra ke ghar me hum pagal ho jaate
all laught at antra...🤣
nk-ab padhne chale ? mai apne aage ke paper barbaad nahi karna chahta
alok-pehle kuch kha le...
naman-pata nahi aaj shaurya ke ghar par kuch milega ya nahi...
an-ha toh pehle jaldi se dinner karwa do...
sh-karwa deta hu...par usse pehle mujhe tum sab se kisi ko milwana hai...
nk-kisse ?
sh-ek miunte...
he call someone...and with his voice...a girl came outside from kitchen...
all became shocked to see her...(specially naitik )
nk-ye yaha kya kar rahi hai ?
sh-sorry yaar...maine tum sab ko bataya hi nahi...meet my cousin AKSHARA...
gang(together)-cousin ?
naitik became happy ( sirf mann hi maan me ) waise toh aisa face banaya...maano he is not interested...
sh-akshara abhi ek week pehle hi yaha aayi hai...
alok-par tum ne hume pehle kyu nahi bataya ?
sh-mai chahta tha ki akshara hum sab se dosti khud se kare naa ki iss wajah se ki wo meri sister hai...par jab mere sabse pyaare dost ko iski wajah se gussa dekha...toh maine socha ki mai hi tum sab ko isse introduce karwa du...
naitik smile a little bit...
antra came forward " hi akshara i am antra "
akshara smile and shake her hand with antra "
mohit...alok...and naman too came forward and introduce themself with hand shake...
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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All became happy with new entry in their group...but naitik is still sitting on his place...
akshara dissappointly look at shaurya...who assure her through his eyes...
sh-ammm...naitik ?
nk-hmmm...
sh-toh ab kya karna hai ? punishment kaa...
nk-punishment ? kis ki
sh-bhool gaya...hamare group me jo galti karta hai...use hum punsihment dete hain...
akshara(shocked)-dadu mere liye punsihment...
nk(interrupted in between )-yes punishment...
he stood from his place...and came in front of akshara...akshara looking down...and naitik look at her directly...
nk-friends toh kya punishment di jaye...miss akshara ko...?
sh-isse khana banwa lete hai...
akshara nodded her head in " YES "
nk-nahi...ye toh bahut choti si saza hai
an-toh phir song gaane ke liye...
nk-nahi...
alok-toh ek videogame competetion kar lete hai...
ak-mujhe nahi aata hai...
nk(smile)-toh phir theek hai...inki saza ye hai ki aaj ye poori raat bhar study karengi...
akshara got a courage to look in naitik's eye...
naitik too lost in her eyes...
an-par itni choti si saza...
with this naitik came in reality...
nk-haaa...kya ?
alok-usne kaha...itni choti si saza...
nk-meri poori baat toh suno...akshara ji ko apna exam ka nahi balki mere exam ka learn karna hai...
all became shocked with naitik's punishment...
sh-par ye apna nahi padhegi...toh fail ho jayegi...
akshara's eye filled with tears...
ak-its ok dadu...galti maine ki hai...toh mai punishment ke liye bhi ready ho...
akshara forward her hand in front of naitik...and he put his book on her hand...
she take that book and went to her room...
ak(angrily)-samajta kya hai wo apne aapko...yaha mujhe apni padhai samajh nahi aa rahi...aur mai uska paper yaad karu...my foot...
she put naitik' book on study table...and start learning her course...
here naitik and gang came in shaurya's room...all set in their selective places...
alok shauya n mohit on bed...
antra nd naman near window...
and naitik near the study table...
all were busy in their study...
naitik silently open the cupboard...and start searching something...
shaurya sa this..." kya dhoondh raha hai ?"
nk-kuch nahi bas ek book
sh-mujhe bata de kaun si wali ?
nk-mai dhoondh lunga
sh-ok...
here akshara neither reading her course nor naitik's...
she slept there...
NEXT MORNING...
all were sleeping on their respective places...when alarm clock rings...
naitik suddenly got up with the voice...
nk-tum sab bhi jaldi utho...aaj ka paper dena hai ya nahi...
shaurya too wake up " tu ja kar naha le " phir ek ek karke hum sab bhi aate hai...
naitik take out his towel and coming to the bathroom door...when at the same time...akshara too came there with her towel...
nk-ammm...pehle tum...chali jao...
ak-ji nahi...pehle aap chale jaiye...
nk-mai keh raha hu naa...
ak-mai baad me chali jaungi...
nk-pls...
this time akshara did'nt spoke anything...and went in the bathroom...
naitik stood there by supporting of wall...and waiting for his turn...
after some time...
akshara take bath...and came outside...saw naitik is stood there closing his eyes...without saying anything she was going from there...but when she put her wet hair back ( jhatke se ) water drops came on naitik's face...and he suddenly open his eyes...
naitik continuosly look at her till then she miserable from his eyes...
he smile and went to take bath...
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Slowly slowly all get ready for their college...akshara made some breakfast for them...and they all ate it...
now its time to go to the college...
OUTSIDE THE HOUSE...
sh-sab ne saath jaane ka plan toh kar liya...par ab jayenge kaise...?
nk-meri car se...
alok-yaar bolne se pehle apni car dekh le...wo punchar hai...
naitik look at the tyres " ohhh ! shit " ab kya kare...
mo-mera aur naman ka toh accha hai...apni cycle zindabaad...
antra-mai toh naman ke saath baith jaungi...
alok-aur mai mohit ke saath...
shaurya-mere paas bhi ek cycle hai...
he went and bring a cycle...
sh-par mujhe ise chalana nahi aata...
naman-koi baat nahi yaar...antra aage baith jayegi...aur tu peeche baith jana...
sh-ok...
naksh-(together) aur mai ?
all looked at them sadly ...
mo-sorry naitik...par mai do logo ko apni iss cycle par nahi le sakta...warna tujhe bhi aage baitha leta...
sh-tu aisa kar iss cycle se aa jaa...aur akshara ko bhi baitha le...
akshara again look at naitik...
nk-tu toh aise keh raha hai jaise mujhe bahut aata hai ise chalana...
all laugh at naitik...
when shaurya remember something
sh-akshara...
ak-ji dadu ?
sh-tujhe toh aata hai na cycle chalana...
ak-hmmm...
sh-toh phir theek hai naa...
ON THE ROAD...
all riding their cycles...
mohit ki cycle par... alok
naman ki cycle par... aage antra aur peeche shurya...
aur akshara ki cycle par peeche naitik...
naman(very tired)-pata nahi mai zinda aaj college jaunga bhi ya nahi...🤣
mo-pehle hi kaha tha mere yaar kam kha kam kha...par nahi tujhe toh aur bhais banna hai...isse accha toh mai antra ko baitha leta...hey bhagwaan college tak meri jaan bacha lo...
and naksh...akshara silently riding her cycle where as naitik silently sat on back...ak's hair fall on his facce...aur poor naitik baar baar use hatata ja raha tha...
suddenly she break her cycle and due to this naitik fall on her...
nk-i am sorry
ak-its ok...aisa kijiye aap mujhe pakad lijiye
nk-no...i mean i am ok
akshara became silent again
but when again he fall...this time he holds her stomach...
akshara's heart skip a beat with naitik's first touch...suddenly she stop her cycling...
nk-kya hua ?
ak-wo college aa gaya...
all friends came their one by one...
naitik came down from cycle...
ak-mai ise park karke aati hu...
nk-hmmm...
akshara smile a little
nk-akshara ?
ak-ji
nk-thanks...
ak-welcome...
she start walking with her cycle but naitik still stood there on his place...
nk(st)-agar ek baar peeche dekha toh...shayad wo mujse gussa na ho
ak(st)-agar wo ruka hoga toh iska matlab usne mujhe maaf kar diya
nk-ek baar palat jao...
ak-peeche palat ke ek baar dekhu kya ??

SO FRIENDS HOPE U ALL LIKE THIS PART...
PRECAP...NAITIK'S SURPRISE BIRTHDAY PARTY...
Edited by hirannaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: --pranu--

update next part na?

ok ji kal tak pakka
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
happu tum yaha par kyu nai aa rahi ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

happu tum yaha par kyu nai aa rahi ?

i have some work
will be back in 2 days.. 😊
good night sweet dreams...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aree kaam toh bata deti...
koi nahi do din baad pakadti hu tummhe
good nite
sweet dreams...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
happu ko khaali kya? 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
jab happu yaha aati hi nahi
na mujhe reason batati hai
toh mai kee kara ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

jab happu yaha aati hi nahi
na mujhe reason batati hai
toh mai kee kara ?

tho tum khaaleti?

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