*{COMPLETED}*MG-SS-CHECKMATE/ Epilogue@ pg-48,on 29/MAR/2016

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Dear readers: This is a suspense story. If you read it please read it carefully, because there are so many clues each and every updates😉. It has few parts so please take your time and read it.😳


CHECKMATE


Prologue


The entire room was prevailing cold silence, it was silent before storm. This storm will bring nothing but destruction.

A sudden knocked broke the silence, the man in late twenties, where standing near the clear window where whole city was visible. He held his wine glass more tightly to his grip for the answer as if his life depends on it.

A man who came he was just employee. His boss was waiting for the answer but thinking about the after mate consequence of the answer, bring shiver on his spine. the word came out from his mouth "We stopped her food" as per his boss order they didn't let her touch food or single drop of water four days, he continues "but still she haven't revealed anything, yet"

Stop!

Everything stop!

The wine glass which he is holding in his hand it breaks into thousand pieces in second. He lefts the room without caring to dressing his wound which is oozing blood.

He almost enters her room breaking the door.

Before she could see the person, he grabbed her fistful of hair, pulling her from the bed.

She winched in pain but instead of removing the hair he put more pressure. Bring her so close to his body that there was no space to pass air. She tried to push him but instead of her soft body more crushed on his chiseled body.

She hates him! Even the air she which pass through him, she would rather choose death than to breath in that air.

She didn't stop pushing him, hitting him which was just futile.

"Geet" just one word make her stiff, there so much love, concern "look at me"

Love! She smiled at her thought. Because he can never love anyone. He was cruel, monster, malicious

He can never love anyone except him. He was heartless.

When she didn't listen to his word made him angrier. Pulled her to make her look at him.

"Please" first time in life he begged

Her lips curved into a wicked smile. She was so happy that God has fulfilled her wishes. She was waiting for this so long, he will be begging. How many years she had waited for his begging. At last her wish was fulfilled.

"Please, tell me where are they "he pleaded, his Geet was always kind hearted.

"Beg, I want you to cry and beg like I had" Geet said with smile, her smile always bring smile on other face, but this smile was for loathsomeness toward him. But today as if he doesn't know this Geet, she was not his Geet.

There was only revenge and hate.

With every passing second he was losing control.

He just pulled out the gun and hold it on her forehead "Geet, this is the last time I am saying where are they"

"Go one, what are you waiting for" Geet hold his gun more tightly,there was no fear in her eyes

"WHERE ARE THEY" he shouted angrily.

She smile wickedly "To hell"

Which brought her tight slap on cheek, fall on ground.

Geet touched her lips it was bleeding before falling to unconscious her lips curved malicious smile of her victory, and for his deafeat.

"Maan Singh Khurana, CHECKMATE"







P.S- The word "Checkmate" in chess comes from the Persian Phrase "Shah Mat", which means "The King is Defeated"




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awsm concept...jus loved it...Geet hates maan...and maan tourtring Geet...both r in pain...waiitiing fr story to unfold...updt soon
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue

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hi fathima
congrats for new story
seems a different one
maneeet revenging each other ..
the prologue is quite interesting ..
once in love now turned haters
whom maan is searching ?their kids ..

waiting for updates
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WONDERFUL
so geet able to defeat him
he want to know about whom

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Wowww new story ..
Nice start ..Geet hates maan & avenging Maan ..Curious to know abt whom maan was asking to geet ..
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though I m not a MG fan, I like them though, and this story is interesting, would live to read it further.. Do p.m me when U update it
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Interesting prologue..cant wait 4 more
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Nice prolouge
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