MaNan ss Mending her broken heart part 6 pg 9 updated 3/6/15 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc.
I loved it.
Plz continue soon.😊
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Part 5


next morning nandini reached the college she was wearing blue skin tight jeans with bright yellow kurta hairs tied in a pony tail ...




looking elegant she stood leaning on her car ... after 5 min manik came there he was wearing a white t shirt with black jeans...



he parked his car in the parking
manik (smiling): g morning ... u r looking beautiful...
nandini : thank u
both manik and nandini were quite ... Nandini was driving ...

and manik was stealing glances at her

manik( thinking): the old nandini is back the smiling girl I saw

yesterday vanished again ...

after sometime manik thought to break the silence and start the conversation ...

manik: so... how do u like US .

nandini (lost): its ok like all the other places I have been to new and scary ...

manik(confused): scary why...


nandini came out of her thought n realized what she just said...
nandini : ohhh nothing ...

manik felt something is fishy about nandini 's behavior ... But thought of not bringing it up..
.
manik: did u had ur breakfast already...
nandini : no... why?
manik: because I brought breakfast for us...
nandini (smiling): oh really... (giggling)what did u bring sandwich

... Or jam bread

manik(smiled): hahahahah v.funny well if u don't want it's f9

but I brought chicken pratha...
nandini looked at manik...
nandini : well I didn't say I won't eat...
manik smiled opened his bag and took out his lunch box and gave the rolled pratha to nandini ...



nandini : thank u...

she took a bite...

nandini : its yummy who cooked ... or did u bought it... its super nice thanks...
nandini was driving and eating at the same time ...like a small kid...

manik flashback... (morning 6:00 )

manik entered nyoniak's room... nyoniak was sleeping... manik

went there and got on the bed...

manik(whisper): mom...

nyoniak: ...

manik: mom...

nyoniak:...

manik(shook nyoniak a bit): mom...

nyoniak turned the other side and slept again...

manik ( loud): MOMMM

Nyoniak shocked wakes up ... turn on the light's ...

nyoniak: mani... what happened... r u ok...

manik: ya mom m absolutely f9...

nyoniak( half sleeping): then why r disturbing me ...

manik: mom ... plzzz can u do me a favour ...

nyoniak:hmmm ...

manik: plzzz cook me breakfast...

nyoniak suddenly shocked and opened his eyes...
...
nyoniak(worried): mani ... r u ok...

manik: with a big smile m ok mom plzzz na get up or I'll get late...

manik dragged a sleepy nyoniak to the kitchen...

nyoniak: ok what to u want ... sandwich ok milkshake...

manik: arghhh mom if I need a sandwich or a milkshake i

would have as made myself or asked the servants...

nyoniak: then what do u want ur highness...
manik: well chicken pratha mom style...

nyoniak: mani r u mad u woke me up 6:00 am to cook pratha

manik: come on mom plzzz ... Nandini like Punjabi food so for her...
manik ( put the hand on his mouth): beta manik u spilled the beans...

nyoniak(smirking) : ohhh so my son woke me up to cook food

just to impress a girl...

manik (puppy look): come on mom...patel(servant) prepared

everything u just have to cook...

nyoniak: ok ok now don't give me that look... go get ready...

manik jumped and hugged .. nyoniak

manik: love u ... u r the best mom...

flash back end

soon they reached the place it was big school ...

manik and nandini went in they gave tuition to few kids and

had some fun games and activities with them...

it was almost 2 pm ... they finished the work and were now

packing up..

manik: it was such a hectic day...

nandini : yes it was..

manik nandini were about to leave when some called from the behind...

voice: hi T N what are u doing here ...

manik and nandini truned. There was a Chinese boy standing there...

nandini (surprised): hey sam wow u here...

sam: ya T N now m studying in the high school here...

nandini : wow nice so what r u studying...

sam: well after me getting taught by how can I study

something else m doing creative arts...

nandini : well nice that's good..

manik was just staring at them like what r they talking...

nandini suddenly realized that manik was there ...

nandini : ohh sorry I forgot to introduce u ...sam this is manik

my classmate and manik this is sam my ex-student...

sam: hi sir ...

manik: hi ... Call me manik sir sounds old..

sam: hey T N now that u r here I want to show u my gallery

plzzz come na plzzz

nandini looked at manik for approval he smiled they both

followed sam to a big room filled with amazing paintings

nandini went forward and was checking each and every

painting keenly ... manik and sam were standing near the door

...when something clicked manik...

manik: hey sam ...

sam:yes si... I mean manik ..

manik: how do u know nandini ... and why do u call her T N

sam: ohhh that... actually I use to stay in Malaysia few years

back and she was my art teacher there ... Such an amazing

artist and a more amazing person ... and T N actually for

Malaysians teacher nandini murthy will be a bit difficult to

call so we call her T N ...

manik: ohhh like that...

there was silence after some time sam continued ...

sam: she was not only a teacher she looks very strict outside

but she is very kind and nice inside ...

manik (smiling): well I know that ...

nandini came to them ...

nandini : what r u guy's talking about...

sam:nothing manik was just...

manik: nothing ...

nandini : well sam I must say u did a great job ...

sam: well who's the teacher...

nandini smiled ...

manik: ok now lets have pic...

they all clicked a pic

nandini : sorry sam have to go now but will come to see u again ...
sam: yes sure T N... I really miss Ab also ...he was super fun ...

I still remember how he used to annoy u and then make u
laugh again...

nandini smiled on that

manik (thinking): now who is this Ab...

manik and nandini reached the car...

manik: nandini if u don't mind can I drive plzzz...

nandini : ya sure why not...

nandini and manik sat n the car suddenly it started raining...

nandini (shouted happily ): its raining ...

manik shocked with the sudden reaction ...

manik: well ya we don't live in a desert u know...

nandini (puppy face): but its raining and I love rain...

manik smiled at the sudden change ...

manik:so what should we do now ...

nandini : hmmm eat jalebi...

manik: what?? Eat jalebi...

Nandini : ya jalebi u don't know its Punjabi sweet...

manik: off course I know what it is but were will we get jalebi here ...

nandini : well I know where ...

manik :where

nandini :near our college there's the big red building just beside that is Punjabi resturant there...

manik: ok ...

nandini was staring outside the window and enjoying the rain...

manik was driving and simultaneously looking at nandini and smiling

manik (thinking): this girl is so wired so difficult to understand

every day I see a new side of her ... but I love difficult things

and if I get to know a new girl everyday life will be super

adventurous ...

Soon manik and nandini reached the place ... nandini and manik

got down the car...they went in and sat no a table near the

window... The waiter came...

nandini : two plate jalebi and two rabri...

manik: but ...
nandini : that's all ...

wa: ok mam ur order will be here in 10 min...

nandini :ok

the waiter left...

manik: why did u order for me ...

nandini : well u know why...

manik: how will i...( flash back nandini : I cannot eat alone) ohh

yeah I remember ... but I don't like sweets much ...

nandini (shockingly) : r u kidding me ... then u have to try this

...trust me u will love it

manik ( smiling): ok ...

while w8ing nandini was looking outside the window... her face

got few rain drops manik took her pic


after sometime the waiter came with the food

nandini had a big smile on her face manik smiled looking at her

... manik picked up a fork and knife to eat the jalebi

nandini : r u serious u r going to kill the jalebi...


manik: what ?? well eventually it gona die we gona eat it right...


nandini : come on who eat jalebi with fork and knife ...

manik: then tell me professor nandini how should I eat it...

nandini : waiter...

wa: yes mam

nandini :can I have two glasses ...

the waiter came back with the glasses ... nandini poured some

rabri in the glass then punt few jalebies in it and poured rabri

on top again ...

nandini : ok done now eat ...




manik was just staring at her face with a are-u-serious look...

nandini : come on u will like it... plzzz eat...

manik took a spoon and took bite...

suddenly his expression from worried to changed into amazed ...
manik: its delicious ...

nandini : see told u ...

manik nandini were eating and enjoying ... after sometime they

finished... They came out of the resturant it was still raining ...
manik: ok time to go back ...

nandini : ya

manik: hey u go I'll just walk to my car ... otherwise u have to

take the turn again...

nandini : hmm ok...
manik was a bit sad hearing the ok.
..
manik started walking his cloth's become a little wet suddenly

he heard a someone calling him...he turned back and saw

nandini was standing there with the umbrella ... She walked

towards him


he walked towards her and held the umbrella they both were in an eyelock...


precap:

1: manik wrote a song and singing
2: nandini get panic attack


sorry guys plzzz don't mind being a punjabi m a big foodie thats why there's a lot about food in my ff 😛😆

Edited by zaroge - 11 years ago
Humzy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohho awsm yaar i loved it when I'm reading it really awsm...
u r such a sweet frnd yaar thnx for pm 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweet moments they are having :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazung...waiting to knw the reason behind nandini behav
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice 1👏👏
update soon...
MeDHellsAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc update.
I loved this nandini. Paunjabi girl.
Mera bhi jalebi and rabri khane ka man kargaya😆
Or yaha barish bhi ho rahi hai.
So on and ol this story is nyc.
Keept writing. Just bcoz of few jerks dnt stop writing. If you do as i say than plz filter your buddy list. Atleast uh ll not be sad.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Nyc update.

I loved this nandini. Paunjabi girl.
Mera bhi jalebi and rabri khane ka man kargaya😆
Or yaha barish bhi ho rahi hai.
So on and ol this story is nyc.
Keept writing. Just bcoz of few jerks dnt stop writing. If you do as i say than plz filter your buddy list. Atleast uh ll not be sad.




thank u some much for u kind words
n i did take u advice n removed all the
jerks 😆😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please do comment n give ur suggestion trust me i had a hard time looking for the pictures


Part 6
manik reached home he parked his car he went in jumping and whistling ... maha g ( manik's servant an old age lady ) was just staring at him

mg: baba u look so happy today what happened..
manik started dancing with her maha g was shocked ...
manik: MG u don't know how happy I m today m
mg: but why baba ...
manik left her and stood in the center of the room and shouted with joy...

manik: CAUSE M IN LOVE ... M IN LOVE MAHA G M IN LOVE ... I LOVE HER ...

mg(surprised): wow baba that's amazing ...GOD BLESS YOU ...

manik went to his room quickly opened his cupboard and took out his guitar and sat in his balcony he was trying to play the guitar but couldn't suddenly he got an idea he took a notepad and pen and started writing when he was done he tried playing the guitar but something was going wrong...

manik: man something is missing ... but what ...ya I got it ...
he took out his laptop put it in front of him connected it to the projector and open the folder name ( MY Star) ... He put it on slide show and nandu's pic's started flashing( which he took during their project) ... on the wall and manik started singing

play the song in the bg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o4mHtJLgMLs


thodi thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..




Hmm... thodi-thodi katthai si uski aankhein
Thodi surme bhari..






uske honthon pe muskurayein
Haaye duniya meri

Ho.. chakhna bhi chaahun
Rakhna bhi chaahun
Sabse chhupake usey..
haaye


Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak toh dikha
Ho.. ho!

Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chaahe badle mein le le tu jaan
Woh hu wo...

manik put his guitar on the side and went near the wall and touched nandu's pic



Yaaron main kaise kahoon, kya hua?
Hosh hai ab kahin hai kahin yeh hawaa
Phirta hoon khud ko bhulaaye huve
Yaad meri mujhe toh dila do zaraa





manik smiled and sang again...


Bematlab sa, jeeta raha tha
Ab mill gayi hai wajah.. haay


Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Mujhe bas ik jhalak toh dikha
Ho.. ho!
Rabba.. Rabba
Mere Rabba Rabba
Chaahe badle mein le le tu jaan
(slidshow stoped at the last picture)

By the time manik finished and he turned back he saw his mom and all the servants standing there awestruck staring at him...

Nyonika had tears in her eyes ...since manik's dad died she didn't saw him this happy
Nyonika went near manik and hugged him...
manik(smiling): what happened mom didn't u liked the song ... I sang that bad
Nyonika backed of from the hug and looked at manik's face

Nyonika: no its just that its been so long I hear u sing happily ...
all the servants went away ... suddenly Nyonika noticed nandu's pic's from the slide show ... she turned to face manik and manik arched his eye brow in a did-you -like her look...



Nyonika: she is beautiful Mani ... just like a fairy made only for my son...
manik smiled and hugged Nyonika...
latter cabir called manik and asked him that there is a party at XYZ... hotel so he have to come ...
manik got ready and went to his car ... He was driving when he saw a black BMW following him...
but he didn't pay any heed to it ...
he reached the place and went in where fab5 were gathered

cabir: hey bro what's up... Where r u missing no calls no message ...
ohhh actually don't answer we all know ... After the kung fu girl isn't it
manik just smiled ...
manik: what ever ... ok lets go
manik and fab5 were dancing ... When manik went to the bar to sit down for a while ...
manik(to the bar tender): 1 cold apple juice.
the bar tender passed him big glass of beer...
manik: I asked for apple juice man...
bar t: sir that sir(pointing at the person next to manik) asked to give u ..
manik (to the guy): excuse me I don't drink ...
guy: ohh come on man people come in night club to do what ...
manik: not all come to drink ...
guy: ok never mind ...
the guy walked away manik was just looked at him bar tender gave him his juice and he started drinking ...
when suddenly a girl came and touched his shoulder ...
girl: hi handsome ... Care to dance...
manik(smiled): no sorry mam but I don't dance with strangers ...
girl(coming closer): the lets know each other...
manik(smiled): no I mean I don't dance with stranger girls and I already have someone...
girl:ohhh come on I don't see any girl with u here ... Even if u have a girl she won't know that u are dancing with me right...
manik: well actually she is around ( manik pointed towards his heart) and even if she is not m loyal with her...
girl (smiled): u r wired ... well bye ...
manik: bye ...
Fab 5 were just standing behind him listening to the conversation

Mukti(jumping infront of manik): dude who is she ...
manik: who is who?
Alya : manik girl was pretty she approached u n u turned her down.

Druv( interrupting): saying that u already have someone.
cabir: so bro in short WHO IS SHE ?
Manik gave them a U- KNOW- WHO- LOOK
Fab5 (together) : WHAT THE #@$%...
mukti: u r in Love
Alya &Druv(together): u Love That
Cabir : U LOVE THE KUNG FU GIRL...

Manik (with a big smile): well yes guys I AM IN LOVE WITH ... kung .. I mean Nandini ...

Fab4 together jumped on Manik hugging him
Mukti: like finally u got ur so called dream girl
Alya: awww she's so pretty
u will make a great couple
Druv: buddy m soo happy for u ...
Cabir: hold on ?
Manik : what?
Cabir: did u confessed to her
fab4 looking at Manik for an answer.
Manik: r u mad? We just started talking she is so reserved ... whole 1st week of college she didn't even talk to anyone .finally she started talking to me in u want ... me in to end up in hospital...
Druv: why would u end up in hospital by confessing u love...
mukti: arre idiots... didn't u see what she did to harshad ...
cabir: ohhh so the great MANIK MALHOTRA is scared of a girl...

Manik (angrily ) :cabir ...(calm) its not that yar i think something happened with her that's wht she have issue mixing up with people she stay alone ...
Alya: hmmm i think u r right Manik take ur time ...but we r soo happy for u
Manik: thank guys... n thanks for understanding


after some time all of them left from there in their cars manik left from there he was coming out when he felt someone following him... he turned but no one around ...
he was driving back home when he saw the same bmw again he became suspicious ...

Precap
Nandini get's panic attack
Fab 5 shocked



any guesses why nandu got panic attack n who is following manik 😲

Edited by zaroge - 11 years ago

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