Manan FF // The Impulsive Soul-Mates// Ch22 link updtd on pg152 29/7

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Interesting!! Continue soon. Please PM me. Thanks 😊
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Hi everyone, I am Nandini Murthy,23 yrs old from Ahmedabad. I am the daughter of Nand Kishore Murthy and Ragini Mehta . I am the fruit of their love and so is my name i.e. Nand-ini. But Appa's no more with us, he passed away when I was 10 and since then we, matlab me and Mom have been living with Nanu and Naani in Ahmedabad. I am Nanu's princess. Although he never really approved of Mom and Appa's love story and their marriage but I am like the apple of his eye, totally pampered and spoilt by him. He wants me to get married and I have somehow reluctantly given in to his decision.

Impulsive ..me no ways that is definitely the word for me. I am like the most sorted girl ever but it is since I invited trouble in my life I have developed his habits. He has rubbed off me in all the wrong ways possible. Not that my life has only one trouble but most definitely the centre of all troubles is only one.

No points for guessing it is Manik Malhotra

Amm.. I guess someone just remembered me. Chuck it

Hi guys I am Manik Malhotra, 26yrs old based in Mumbai. I have always been in Mumbai not just because I live in this city but happen to love this city. My personal life is more or less sorted. Mom Dad separated years ago I don't even remember when exactly. Dad's a sweetheart more like a friend. He lives in California. It's over a year since I last met him but we keep in touch n Mom, I don't like to talk about her much. About my profession I am the MD and founder of one of India's fastest growing Fashion Houses "AURA"along with my old time buddies Cabir and Mukti. It's a good time now and we are looking forward to enter the international arena soon.

Naahh.. Impulsive me no ways..yes I live in the moment but I am more like planned and organized. But yes with this girl in my life all my plans and organizational skills have gone for a toss for sure.

Prologue:

Lost in my thoughts I was moving to my room and when suddenly a hand pulled me in to the guest room.

Manik, I screeched in irritation being so sure it was him.

He twirled me around to pin me against the wall gently and put his hand at the back of my waist so that I don't get hit hard. My immediate reflex action resulted in putting my hand on my tummy to assure if it is fine and as I get my senses back from the sudden jerk I gave a dirty look at him.

"Manik leave me"

He held both my hands captive and came close to me.

"You are coming with me.", Manik told me for the nth time.

"In your dreams. I will never come with you and now just leave me" (trying desperately to jerk his hands off me " Agar Nanu ko pata chal gaya na k tum kaun ho, he will not leave you", I tried to threaten him.

"Toh bata do, tell him all you want, waise bhi tumhe toh mazaa hi aagyega na If I get killed by your Nanu... so go ahead. Mere paas bhi bahut kuch hai unhe bolne k liye. "He darted back my threat to me with a victorious smirk on his face. I hated that grin of his. I looked away not wanting to see his face. My silence gave him another reason to talk.

"So basically why are you getting married to that joker, when that jerk is fooling around with another girl??"

"He has a name let me remind you ..Dhruv Patel and anything relating to him is none of your bloody business. "I told him clenching my teeth.

"You are absolutely right.. But everything relating to you is my bloody business", he mimicked my tone

I tried to look away from him but just couldn't. He came close to me and whispered in my ears.

"U look very hot in this attire."

I was wearing a golden yellow heavily embroidered lehenga choli for my Sangeet function but he remarked as if I was standing in a swim wear in front of him. I would have done the honors of killing him only if my hands were free.

He looked at me intently and I found myself getting captivated in his gaze and forgot my struggle to free myself. I never understood why I let him affect me so much.

Ouch!! I shrieked when I felt my stomach twinge a little. He immediately slid his right hand under my dupatta to feel my bare tummy and caressed it with utmost care and half cupped my face with his left hand.

Are you okay?? Is there something wrong?? Should I call the doctor?? He said in such a caring tone that it horrified me.

Does he know?? But how is it possible?? I bit my lower lip unable to figure out the reason for his concern. I couldn't let him take over me so I used both my hands and pushed him away from me.

"I can never be.. so far tum mere ass pass ho and now don't you ever dare come close to me". I had already put myself at a safe place away from him.

"So I still affect you.", his lips has stretched enough to flash his teeth out. He was purposely grinning at his victory.

There is no point in arguing with this moron, I thought as I stormed out of the room.

I tried calming myself down but how could I? My life was a complete mess. Firstly I was pregnant. Secondly I was going to marry someone who was not the father of my child and also who was in love with another girl and finally my love who had given me all the possible reasons to hate him.

So guys this is my new FF on MaNan ..plz tell if you like it or not. I have principally introduced only MaNan but the others will eventually come in as the story progresses.

Your comments will decide the speed of my uploading so let me know ur views good or bad watever it is😊😊

Edited by sujal1fan - 10 years ago
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Prologue is intresting
Waiting for d twists nd turns
Post the chap asap! 😉
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wow
looks supa interesting
will b waiting fo d update

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amazing start..keep the same pace and momentum...love it)!!!!! Excitedmeinedda!!!! Post soon !!!!
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Wow amazing prologue!! So Nandini pregnant? With manik's child?? Can't wait.. Update soon. Pls PM me if you plan to. 😊
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Thanx guys ...will try yo upload soon
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Do continue and pm me when you write your story
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yaar plz cont it soon its amazing oh god nandu is pregnant wid manik's child (hope it is ) n getting married to dhtuv omg super interesting plz cont it soon

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