Manan FF // The Impulsive Soul-Mates// Ch22 link updtd on pg152 29/7 - Page 112

Originally posted by: musicismylife

Your story is just superb!
Lovely chapter. Full of emotions...
I guess now the. hard part will come which will break Nandini when he'll ask her to abort the baby 😔

The way you describe every emotiin is perfect..

Originally posted by: aarvi-manan

sorry for commenting tooo late...but maine kal se hi apki story read karna start ki h...n i must say its really very interesting,amazing,its a blast of emotion,love,anger,fun all that...

yesterday i read ur chapter 10 that is "after effects"... & omg that was amazing...means hot + cute... d way u describe manan's moment hatts off to u...

it was dammm cute when manik asks for permission to kiss her n to take off his clothes, & then said sorry if "maine tumhe jyada wait kraya ho to"... oh my god thats dammm cute

n then going to take precaution...hahahaha kitna cute tha...but at d same time it was hot too...

and ya 1 more thing... i hv a big crush on PARTH...so while reading ur story, i was just imagine PARTH doing such cute things of NITI...hahahaha i know this is too much,but sorry i cant control it...

(naughty me) hahaha

comment kuch jyada hi lamba ho gya...aap bor ho jaogi padte padte...

i m continuing with my reading n u keep writing...

next chapter k liye b comment jarur karungi...hahaha