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Heya peeps...
Its an OS written by an MDG fb group member...i am posting it here with her permission..
Plz do give ur reviews...lets encourage her to write more

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Background Check:
The re-entry of Yamini, Virat's ex-girlfriend had turned his life upside down. He tries his best to avoid her but she constantly nags him to be a part of her life. So, in order to get some peace, Virat promises Yamini to spent 2 hours of his entire day with her upon the condition that she will not disturb him all day. Yamini agrees to this. On Zuber's end, he is completely in love with Avanti and is waiting for the right time to propose her.
Now, with all the roller coaster going on in their lives, everybody is disturbed. Amidst all the craziness, confusion and frustration, Virat and Avanti realize their feelings for each other. Since Yamini's re-entry in Virat's life, he notices changes in Avanti's behaviour towards him. She stays away from him as much as she can and avoids him. Also, Virat notices Zuber's growing concern for Avanti and Avanti reciprocating it as well. Taking all this into consideration, Virat concludes that Avanti hates him and decides to never confess his feelings for her. On the other hand, Avanti is curious about Zuber's growing concern for her but misunderstands it as mere friendship. Avanti realizes her feelings for Virat because she is jealous seeing him with Yamini. Avanti concludes Virat still loves Yamini and decides never to confess her feelings for him. But still, Virat and Avanti feel a very strong connect between them...

Scene 1:

(Its Zuber's birthday party and Zuber plans to propose Avanti today. Everybody's enjoying the party. Virat looks really good all suited up. He is eagerly waiting for Avanti to arrive at the party. Finally Avanti comes to the party with Kavya and DJ looking absolutely gorgeous in a red one piece. Virat is completely blown away by her. Avanti notices Virat looking at her. Both of them have an eyelock. Just as Virat was going to approach her, Yamini comes in between.)

Yamini: Virat tumhe yaad h yeh hamara song tha dance karne ke liye. Chalo na, let's dance.
Virat: Yamini, tumhare do ghante khatam ho gaye h. Please don't disturb me.
Yamini: Uss do ghante khatam hone m aur mins bhaki hai. Chalo na, let's dance.

(Virat gives an exasperated look to Yamini and then looks at Avanti. Avanti who is witnessing all this is clearly upset. She walks away from there and goes to the bar to get a drink. Just then, Zuber notices her and is completely mesmerized by her. Zuber approaches her.)

Zuber: Hey beautiful!
Avanti(happily): ZEE! Happy Birthday!

(Avanti gives Zuber a big hug)

Zuber: You are looking gorgeous, Avanti! smile emoticon
Avanti: You ain't less, Zee!
Zuber: Meri iss grand party m, meri sabse favourite insaan akeli q hai?
Avanti: Mood nai hai! But Zee, what an amazing party!
Zuber: What do you mean mood nai hai? Come on, let's dance!
Avanti: But Zee, I don't...
Zuber: No but's, no if's. Come on, let's dance.

(Zuber and Avanti start dancing. Virat sees this and his heart breaks into thousand pieces. Avanti and Virat look at each other while dancing with Zuber and Yamini respectively. Just then, the host of the party, Tanya Malhotra walks up on the stage. She knows all the story and hates Yamini. She is here to help Virat and Avanti atleats confess their feelings)

Tanya: Hello all you lovely people! Thankyou so much for coming to the party! Here's a toast to my dear, dear friend Rishabh Zuber! Happy birthday, darling!

(Everybody in the room start applauding. Tanya calls zuber on stage)

Tanya: But this party is getting a little dry! But fikar not I have an idea! Let's make a unique cuple dance. The girls will form the inner circle and the guys will form the outer circle. The guys will dance with girl in front of them. The twist is that once the music stops, the partners will change!
Zuber: Cool game, Tanya! But being the birthday boy, I get to choose my first lady, alright?
Tanya: Cool! Go ahead!
Zuber: I'll be dancing with my favorite person in the party, Ms. Avanti Bansal!

(Avanti is a little embarrassed and reluctant. But then she notices virat looking jealously at Zuber. Avanti decides to say yes! Finally they all start dancing! Virat is looking at Zuber and Avanti jealously. Avanti is very happy)

Avanti(to herself): good decision, Avanti. Bohot jhaala liye tumne mujhe Virat Singh Thakur. Ab tumhari baari.
Virat(to himself): Bohot hogaya! I can't take it anymore!

(Finally after dancing with almost every guy and girl in the party, Virat and Avanti partner each other. Virat pulls Avanti extremely close to him and holds her tightly. They are dancing romantically. Tanya makes sure the music is not changed for sometime.)

Virat(in a whisper but sternly): Mujhe 10 mins m terrace pe milo. Tumse urgent baat karni hai.
(saying this virat goes away)

Avanti: abhi kya baat karni h isse?

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Scene 2:

(On the terrace)
Avanti: Kya hai? Q bulaya mujhe yaha?
(When virat turns avanti is a little taken aback. His eyes are red in anger. Virat comes near Avanti and holds her tightly)

Virat: Tumhari himmat kaise hui Zuber k saath dance karne ki? Wo bhi itne close hoke? Ameer aadmi dekhna nai k uss par chad jaogi na tum?
Avanti(freeing herself from Virat): Tumhe usse kya? Haan? Main chahe Zee ke saath nachu, khelu, gaau? Tumhe isse kya? Tum tumhari girlfriend k saath din baar rehte ho, maine tumhe kuch bola? Toh tumhe kisne haq diya h meri life m interfere karne ka?

(listening to all this, Virat calms down)

Virat: Avanti look I'm really sorry. Main zara gusse m tha!
Avanti(faking a laugh): oh! obviously! tumhe gussa aagaya aur tumhe toh pura haq hai na mujhe kuch bhi kehne ka! pehle mujhe hurt karo fir aake sorry bolo! tum kabhi nai badal sakte.

(Avanti goes from there)

Virat(blocking her way): Avanti, please sunno meri baat. mujhe gussa aaya qki main tumhe kissi aur k sath nai dekh sakta. Tum mujhe itne dino e avoid kar rai ho Tum toh aaj kal mujhse fight bhi nai karti. Kyu kar rai ho tum aisa? Mujhe aadat hogayi hai tumhari, Avanti. My life is incomplete without you!
Avanti: Tumhara yeh drama ka aur gol gol baato ka koi asar nai hoga mujhpe, Virat! Samjhe tum! aur tum se dur na jau toh kya karu haan? Tumhari wo girlfriend ne mukje kaha tha ki main tum dono k beech m na aau. main koi naukarani hu, ki jo aaye mujhe do baate bol kar chala jaaye. Aur q suunu main do baate, wo bhi tumhare liye?

(Avanti starts crying and hitting Virat. Virat lets her do it so that she can take out all her frustation, After a while, Avanti stops hitting him and looks at him. Virat holds Avanti's face and wipes her tears)

Virat: I love you, Avanti!
Avanti: It's too late now!
Virat: It's never too late!

(Saying this Virat kisses Avanti. After sometime, Avanti kisses Virat Back)

Avanti: I love you too, Virat! I love you too!

(Saying this both of them hug. All this is noticed my Zuber and Yamini whom Tanya had sent to the terrace with some excuse. Zuber is sad but happy for Avanti. Yamini walks away from there fuming in anger.)

Avanti: sabse pehle tum tumhari uss tattoo wali girlfriend ko bagao!
Virat(Laughing): okay meri maa!

(saying this Virat kisses Avanti's forehead and they both hug again)

...THE END...

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