how to wish?? AY fic

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hey guys i m attempting my first Ay fic.....pls do comment....😊

How to wish???

It was Yuvi's birthday!!! He was dresses smartly in a cool black jacket and black jeans. Everyone wished him happy birthday except one girl……….Ashi!!! She looked at him as he was invisible and was minutely observing a tree next to her. Maybe thinking how many microorganisms it had!! 🤣🤣

He looked at her many times wishing she would wish him…but no she stood there obstinately. Yuvi got very angry.. Even on such a special day she ignored him. It really hurt him so very much that he decided not to talk to her forever…..well as we know he won't be able to do that easily but still he said so…

Ashi, on the other hand kept thinking how come in the world did her brains stop working and why she was not even able to wish him…why was she so scared???? Ashi ..who would scare even a giant stopped to think worried about herself??? Had she turned into someone so silly?? ummm maybe Tia's soul had gone into her….(just joking dont kill for this)😆

Ashi: hey bhagu!! Help me whats happening to me?? Why am I behaving like this??? Why cant I even go and wish him???😳

Bhagu: ashi……….

Ashi(totally scared) : aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……..who was it????😆

Bhagu: it me ashi ur bhagu…..

Ashi: ha! What!!! 😲

Bhagu: ya u called me for help so i came…..

Ashi(in her own world) : oh! Wow ! thanks!!! Well ya I mean did u hear my question I wont be able to repeat it again……😆

Bhagu: ok I have ur solution……

Ashi(startled): really!!!!! Wow wats it???😛

Bhagu: simple just do something that noone has done for him on his birthday….something related to music!!!

Ashi(brightening up): hmmmm…that's cool!! I think I know exactly what to do……😊

Bhagu: u know why u have not been able to wish yuvi ..its all bcoz u love him…..simple again….

Ashi(confused) : me loving yuvi???? Hmmmm well I don't know……

bhagu: see ur confused so that's why ur guts may have melted away…..dont worry just stick to ur plan everything will be alright.

Ashi(smiling): Hey Bhagu!!! Thanksssss…….well it has to become alright afterall where ashi is there have no fear…..(gearing up)😃

In his room, yuvi was playing his guitar and was just muttering under his breath. " damn her" 😡

"Hey yuvi will u stop it….i m trying to concentrate…..", said sid irritated

"sorry sid carry on just irritated by something", said yuvi

"irritated by something or someone", said sid, smiling😉

"sid do ur work"

Well that someone really had spolit his day…..couldnt even come to wish him…😭

Its was night…. the birthday had almost ended…but still ashi made no attempt to wish yuvi……😭

"This was his worst birthday…", thought yuvi ruefully😭😕

"hey hi someone gave me this message to giv it to u"

"thanks"

PLS COME TO THE GARDEN…..

Well who could it be????

Happy birthday to u…

Happy birthday to u…

Happy birthday to dear yuvi happy birthday to uuuu!!!!

And then Ashi turned after playing the song …………..👏

And said; " hey yuvi happy birthday!!!!!" pointing down to her t-shirt …yuvi could see these words printed on her t-shirt……

Smiling he said " thanks ashi…it took u so much time to say this one line………ur one big time dodo" and then he hugged her!!!!!😛😳🤗

"hey I was …..how could she say she was scared…umm well I was waiting for the right time….ya …that why so late…."😉

"what right time Ashi u know how have I felt the whole day…..u never understand people's emotions…."😡😳

"hey its not like that……………………….."

And so they fought as usual…….love to that……specialist in that aren't they……🥳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww awwwwwwww awwwwwwwwwwwwww sanaaaaaaaaaa 🤗 🤗 🤗....this is one of the cutesttttttttt fic i have ever readdddddd 😳.its sooo adorableeeeeee 😳 😳 .....i mena i was tlaking of an innocent ashi today only and here is an overdoze of her innocenceee...awwwwwww.... 🤗 🤗.i totally adoreeeeeeee tis avtaar of hers coz its so rare and its so very real u cant always be sure of yourself u cant always be in control u cant always be sensible...these sillyness these unsureity these hidden emotions which always confused her 😳...all of them added the real touch to her 😳 and made her much more like the gurl next dooor with whome we can related 🤗

and well where yuvi and her mum were concerned she had always hidden her feelings and was always confused about the extent of her love for them 😳..and thats wat added the beauty to both these relationships..the uncertianity the unpredictableness it all made it so real.....and obviously how could she was just gone up to him and wished him...i mean she would have been caught right there coz just a look at the birthday boy wld hav caused her blush scarlet deep☺️☺️☺️ .....and well her voice would hav definately given away her secret ☺️..so obviously she had to move with caution coz she cant risk letitng psycho know how much she loved him☺️☺️....awww...i loveeeee this sillyness this madness this running away from each other☺️...yet in the end findning each other back☺️ 🤗....

and obviously asho not iwshing him on his birthday has to has to has to ruin the day completly for him.....awwww....poor yuviiiii 🤗🤗🤗.he was shooo eagerly wiating for her to wish him🤗🤗....but psycho its not her prob okie...she always looses her senes when it ocmes to u coz u invade every bit of her thoughts then☺️...i loved that "damn her" bit.....awwwwwwww....he was trying so hard not to think about her but still his thoughts would stry only in her directionv☺️...i mean come on its his birthday and he wasnt enjoying one bit of it but was just wishing that she comes up and wishes him happy birthday...that one moment would be enough to make his day his whole year ahead special☺️☺️.....awww...loveeeee himmmm.... 🤗.....they always pretended to be unconcerned uneffected by each other but their love always had ways to show up🤗

and loved the dialouge with bhagguuuuu😳...it was shoo cuteeeee....and what an advice...do somehting which no one else has done for him😳...and he even made her see that she was scared hesitent coz she loved him too much and wanted to make it realy special for him☺️....loved that line...."thats y ur gutts hav melted away"👏👏..awesme expresion..and ofcorse the style of iwshing him was shooooooooooo cuteeeeeeee😳..i mean see even her she showed her innocence even then she feared her voice might nt support her and hence she rather chose to engrave those words on her t.....awww....🤗....love her funky ways man🤗🤗and yuvi was sho sho elatedddddddddd and he finally got his huggyyyyyy for which he was yearning since forever🤗.........and ofcorse how can they not end a special day with a special and memorable fight to seal the moment with a memory of a lifetime laughter☺️

awesme sanaa its too toooooo too awesmeeee👏👏...u are a faab writer doesnt seem u wrote ur first ever fic👏 👏...i love it totallyyyyyyy🤗🤗..thankuu shoo much for sharing and that too on such festive ocassion😳🤗.we are so full on celebrating ashi's birthday😳🤗🤗...and you treat us with thissssss😳.awww...seems like birthday definately is the talk of rf😳...and kyun na hoo...after all its our dear devil's twentieth birthday🤗

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWWWWWWWWWWWSOOOOOOOMMMMMMMEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! Sanaa that was soooooooo good!!!!!!!!! Kya scene hai. Yaar tumne itni achhi tarhaan se emotions show kiye hain. Rocking yaar. Continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thannkkkkkkkkkkksssssssssssssss yaar😳 😳 😳

smriti u look like u r gettin very sentii.... 😆 😆 such a long post......thanx for it... 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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lolz sanaa by now you should be aware that long long longyyyyyy posts are my speciality 😳 😳 ...i dont know whether people enjoy it or not it must be a huge bore to read 😆...but trust me when am writing i dont realize its become so hugeee 😳 and i love it like this only 😳..sowie bor boring 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 hey nothing like dat smriti....actually ws havin fun readin ur post which look like a fic itself... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ossom 👏 👏 👏 grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8 wrk
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey sanaa,its awesome re 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooooooow 👏 awsume !!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanksssssssssssss everyoneeeeeeee........

i reli think got very senti abt yuvi's b'day which is round d corner!! 😆 😆 😳

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