TR FanFic: Destined To You [Chapter:9 Updated On Pg:102] - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkytekwani

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waiting for updates

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note
first i would like to thank all the people who like my story, comment or even only read it.
i really appreciate your response

i would like to clear few things, that this story is solely written by me if is there any similarity between characters or story is purely co-incidence

and i warn you guys again that i m not a writer, so there will be lots of mistakes in it.

okey now enough of my bak-bak
chapter 1 is in next post on next page
i hope you enjoy reading it
Edited by princess_tara - 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

It was a bright morning in Mumbai everybody was busy in daily chores but one soul was sitting in his room lost,this brightness has no effect in his life. he none other than our hero Rey he was feeling many emotions at same time, he was in inner conflict, lets see what is the cause of so many emotions.



Rey was sitting in his room with picture of taani in hands, he was talking to it, "it has been 3 months since your engagement maine tumse promise kia tha k I will move on in my life" he said it while stroking the picture with pure love.



"I was trying to full fill your promise with honesty but kal jo kuch bhi hua us k baad mujhe samjh nahi araha k what should I do now" he said tears and confusions ware clearly visible in his eyes.



Flashback


Rey was going to a caf to meet a business consultant who was an old friend of Simmi. Now a day's his only goal was to set his dance academy to prove his dad that he is capable of it and to make his Taani proud, his Taani??? What was he thinking she was not his anymore. He was the one who gave her hand to Vishesh. He shook his head to clear his thoughts and enter the cafe.



He took a seat and start searching here and there to see if she come or not, "Simmi ne ye kanha phasa dia mujhe, uski friend ko mai kaise pehchanu ga mene thori na dekha hai usse but nahi madam ko tou date pe jana tha Nil k sath I m sure ye in logon ka hi plan hoga mujhe phir kisi ladki k sath set krne ka but mai is bar bhi in ka plan kamiyab nahi hone dunga."Rey thought determined to not let anyone take Taani's place in his heart. So what she was not with him he can live his whole life with her memories.



His thoughts broken by a female voice, "excuse me Are you Reyansh??"



"Yes, and you must be Shreya right" he asked, she nodded in yes. They shook hands. "Take a seat" Said Rey. She took the seat before of him. They start discussing all financial problems they can face during building the dance academy. After discussing that they place their orders. Start chatting about random things.



"So Reyansh tell me something about yourself" asked Shreya.



"You can call me Rey, Well what you want to know about me???" he was hoping that she should not flirt with him.



"Kuch bhi hmm... acha chalo ye hi bata do k tum single ho ya nahi... let me guess itne handsome ho girlfriend tou zaroor hogi right???" She asked in a playful voice. Here we go again thought Rey.



"Umm... Shreya I don't know k mere friends ne tum sey kya kaha hai but let me clear one thing I m not interested in any kind of relationship I m single and very happy with that"he said in a clear voice.



A bit confused she asked "what do you mean??"



"Well mere friends kuch time se mujhe kisi ladki k sath set krne ki try kr rahe hain even after my constant denial. I m sure they sent me here alone so that they can set me with you but I m not at all interested" After listening this she start laughing, "why are you laughing" now it was Rey's trun to get confused.



"I m laughing because your friends can't set me with you because I m already engaged" listening this he take a sigh of relive.



"Thank god I was so scared k phir se wahi lecture tmhe bhi dena pade ga jo mai hr us ladki ko deta hun jo mere close anay ka try krti hai" Rey said a bit relaxed now.



"But You don't have to be scared of me, I m engaged, see I m also wearing my engagement ring" she showed Rey. He was continuously staring at that ring. A series of memories passed through his mind how he got invitation of Taani's engagement, how broken he was, how he try to win her back and finally after her denial how he give her hand in Vishesh's hand. "isn't it beautiful" he was snapped back to reality by Shreya's voice. "Hey what happen are you alright????" she asked after seeing him lost.



"Ya it is very beautiful, actually woh kya hai na meri gir... I mean to say meri ek friend ki bhi abhi engagement hui thi few months back uski ring bhi same aisi thi"said Rey mentally slapped himself at what he was going to say.



"That's not possible." Rey gave her confused and questioning look. "what I mean to say is that yeh ring Mehta family ki khandani ring hai jo k saalon sai as a blessing generation to generation pass ho kr ayi hai yeh baat Vishesh I mean mere fiance nay khud mujhe btai hai. Tmhari friend ki ring same aisi nahi ho sakhti." Rey was clearly bored he was not at all interested in this story of Mehta family but listening Vishesh's name his head snapped towards Shreya. Thousands of thoughts run in his mind Vishesh was engaged to taani but Shreya is saying Vishesh us ka fiance hai. He is cheating with Taani... "kya hua phir kanhi kho gaye ek tou tm sochte bauhat ho"said Shreya. Rey was thinking what he should say to her. Finally decide to tell Shreya everything clearly.



"Umm Shreya ek baat kahu don't mind ok Vishesh acha ladka nahi hai woh tmhe dhoka deraha hai not only you but who Taani ko bhi dhoka deraha hai" she was going to speak but rey cut her. "let me complete yeh Vishesh hai right???"he asked her showing his picture which was snapped at Taani's engagement. She nodded in yes. "See this same Vishesh got engaged with my friend Taani. I was also present there that is why I remember this ring" Rey said try to make her understand. after listening this she take sigh of relieve.



"Oh now I understand first Vishesh mujh ya Taani ko dhoka nahi deraha hai, tum Taani k friend ho tumhe tou pata hona chahiye" he gave a look which says don't know what you are trying to say'. "Listen it is a long story but in short Taani and Vishesh had to get engaged because we didn't have any other option at that time." Rey nodded and encourage her to tell what exactly the matter is. "so the think is me and Vishesh were in same college and used to like each other but his family was against our relationship because I m an orphan. They select Taani for him so I and Vishesh meet her tell her everything and she agreed to help us. She and Vishesh got engaged and we get time to manofy his family infact Taani nay hi sab ko samjhaya and my my what a girl she is uss ladki baton mai kya jadu hai jhat se sab ko mana lia. You are very lucky to have a friend like her" said Shreya anyone can tell by her tone that she was impressed with Taani. After listening this Rey was shocked to zenith. He was not able to react he abruptly stand up and start leaving from there. "Hey where are you going" ask Shreya seeing him leaving so suddenly.



"mujhe kuch kaam yad agaya" said Rey hurriedly.



"But tmhari coffee??" she asked feeling his behavior odd.



"No thanks phir kabhi it was nice meeting to you bye" he said while leaving cafe


End of flashback


Rey was feeling hurt and betrayed how could she do this to him. But on the other side he was feeling happy that now there is small hope that Taani is not in any relationship he has a slight chance to win her back.



There was a war going on within himself. He wanted to do something to bring Taani back in his life. But his hurt was not letting him see things clearly.



"Taani mere sath aisa kaise kr sakhti hai. Yeh relation hum dono ka hai woh akele kaise iska future decide kr sakhti hai. This time she is wrong" Rey thought to himself.



"Oh so now you remember that yeh relation tum dono ka hai, how can you blame her for taking decision alone when you also did the same." His inner self appear before him. "Remember fake break up, opps sorry woh tum ne nahi Sharon ne decide kia tha that you need to broke her heart. And you obeyed your best friend without thinking" his inner self mocked him.



"But I did for betterment of Taani" Rey try to justify his actions.



"So what Taani also think that its better for you to be away from her, you always end up hurting her. You never give importance to what she wants; it was always you who decide everything. And you also accepted that you always take her for granted. So now if she don't want to be with a person who hurt her always, what is wrong in it??"



"Because just like I love her, Taani also love me and I know she also can't give my place in her life just like I can't give her place to anyone else. I know, I always hurt her but I m very selfish to let her go. I will do anything to earn her trust back." Rey determinedly promise to himself. "now first I have to find out where is Taani. Who can help me, Swayam no I don't think usko pata hai I m sure he don't even know the truth of Taani's Engagement." Rey thought. As he knows that Taani and Swayam are not close to each other anymore, After whatever happen in past. "oh shoot how can I forgot. I know who can help me" he dialed a number. After two or three rings someone recive the call.



"Hello can I meet you it's very important" there was a paused.



"No don't worry everything is fine. I want to discussed very important matter" said Rey.



"Not at home ok I m coming meet you in an hour bye" he cut the call and start stroking Taani's pic which was his mobile wallpaper. "This time I will not give you any chance to leave me I will woo you back. Wait for me sweetheart I m coming" with that he left his room with new hope in his heart.

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Edited by princess_tara - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Well written Buddy. It's nice to read something related with continuation plot of our actial TR love story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!!! amazing
finally Rey know the truth
love his ditermination
now surely he'll woo Taani back
loved it
plzzz updt soon
Edited by Priyanka.saha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
wooo

this is something new n really very interesting :)

u r making me curious fr further updates so now u have to update sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Wow ... nice
luvd it
It was beautifully written...
Taani And Vishesh's engagement was fake!!😲
It was a nice twistšŸ‘šŸ¼
I really hope Rey find Taani soon...
and bring her back in his life...
Update soon
Waiting for next chapter...šŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
wow
nice start loved it
eagerly waiting for nxt prt
update soon and thanks for pm
Edited by stutisinghania - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Wow nice start
Looking forward to the next update
Continue soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update

waiting for nxt prt

update soonnn deaarrr

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