NO!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: geetkumar

I miss you,I need you

If you only knew the pain I feel

When I am not with you

And I am thinking about you all day

Which never makes the pain go away,

The pain I have knowing that

This might be my last day

My last breath that you may be my last kiss my last love.

The pain that you put me through

I hope that you never have to feel

Because the pain makes you not want to feel.

By unknown.

"No! You know what...I can't let you go. No, I can't...I just can't"

"No tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho, mai tumhe kahin nahi jaane deh ra. Okay? Decided".

"I can't let you go!"

"Main tumhe nahin jaane de sakta".

Can you hear Nandini? can you hear my silent screams? can you hear the panic in my voice? you are asking me to let you go !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please ask me to stop breathing. That would be much easier for me to give you. you are asking me to let you go when my every step is towards you.

you are asking me to let you go when I have promised you of our hamesha

you are asking me to let you go when I have promised your chachi that I will always be there for you

how can you ask me to let you go when you promised Niyonika that I deserve happiness and you will always there for me.

you are my world Nandini. you are the very air I breathe. you are the light to my darkness. you are the very reason of my smile. you are the reason I want to live. you are the one who turned this monster into human. without you there is nothing to see. without you there is no reason to smile. without you there is no me. without Nandini there is no Manik.

So NO Nandini I can't let you go. Not today, Not tomorrow. Not now , Not ever.

Like you said they made me cry today. And you post again brought a fresh bout of tears. Even when your emotions are all over the place , you write beautifully. 👏

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Aaand let's resume this replying business again and I'm going to have to start it with your comment!

I read this comment just before I went to bed last night, and you can't imagine just how wide I was smiling when I saw you had commented.

I'll actually take this opportunity to reveal a secret here...Honestly, the days you comment on my thread, I know that I did well with my post that day. Like it's a hard feeling to express...of course many read my post every day and that includes you too, but honestly, there's hardly ever any instance when I'm happy with my own words. But the days you comment, this warmth always spreads in my heart, where I know that I must have gone that extra mile today and produced something to be proud of. So thankyou my lovely...thankyou for the countless times you used "love" in your response to me and trust me...my heart felt all your love and appreciation. 🤗 Can never take the credit of my post solely, because most of the credit goes to our beautiful babies; MaNan.

Their love is just so inspirational, and I hope I can continue getting inspired by them and enlightening you guys with my work! 😳

Again...thankyou so so so much for every single appreciative word!! 🤗Love you! ❤️

Originally posted by: Preeshaxo

*SIGHHH*
THIS SLAYED Utter perfection this was!! You nailed every emotion, every unsaid word down to a T. So beautiful to read, you be killing me these days!!! Take a bow girl, take a freaking bow 👏

Where do I begin? Episode was love today Tracks being set up, I'm excited too see what happens!

I know you didn't mention Aryaman and Harshad but let me touch on them quickly. Honestly I'm trying to rack my brain around how they are childhood friends and how Alya doesn't even know him? The logic behind Aryaman coming all the way from the states just to help Harshad take down Manik doesn't make any sense to me either. KYY and their blooper logic ways *face-palm*
But when all of them 3 were in one frame together ☺️

Fab3+Nandini. I adored this scene. One by one they told her their deepest secrets and how music helped them. The growth in all of them, telling her their fears and genuinely wanting to help heal her. "You guys are very special to me" How overwhelmed she felt in that moment, it meant a lot to her to know how they care for her and her music.
CabiNi You were the first person I thought of when I saw them together, we asked and we got it
He's the only one who gets both Manik and Nandini. I loved how honest she was with him. She told him how drained out she is, how she doesn't have the fight in her. He tells her however strong Manik might be looking from the outside he is breaking just as much inside, most likely twice as much. "Because he's never loved anyone like the way he loves you"

BABIES 😭
"It must be very difficult for you" she cares for him when he forgets to care for himself and he will go through any pain just to make her feel better because for them it's never about themselves but always about each other!
His face as she tells him she needs space, to go to mangalore ALONE 😭 His no, I can't let you go 😭
For the first time he pulled Nandini back without over thinking it and she didn't flinch at his touch. The head rest, shoulder kiss, temple kiss She lost herself for a moment because just like Manik can't resist her touch, she can't resist his either!
So she uses the blank promise and he shakes his head, his helplessness as he can't let her go. Brings out how vulnerable he is too, cause just like she needs him, he needs her too. His existence lies in her, never can he be away from her nor can he ever let her go.. NEVER!
"You also know that that you need me...always"
Just like she once said to him "Manik, I know you need me" cause even though he pushed her away he accepted that it was her love that could only heal him and just like that she'll also realize its his love that will heal her.

Under no circumstance will Manik let Nandini go, he will find a loophole! If he can't go to Mangalore, Mangalore comes to Mumbai 😎

Love always
Preesha aka Your Soheesha 🤗

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Oh mannn!!! Too many...like legit countless beautiful lines here but that last line; "If he can't go to Mangalore, Mangalore comes to Mumbai." BEST!! I LOVE YOU FOR COMING UP WITH QUOTES FOR THEM TWO! I'M TELLING YOU SOHEESHA...PLEASE GO START YOUR PUBLISHING COMPANY AND PUBLISH THESE LINES!! And well you can hire me and Sunny as your personal secretaries too! We promise to be very hard-working!🤣

So yup...skipping that Harshad and Aryaman encounter again...my brain be too tired to think about them. Actually wait...I'll add a bit just for you. So since my response was about "No"...I literally sat there going "No, nope, never can Harshad ever change!" But then I saw Aryaman in a double-minded state and I'm like okay maybeee he will say "no" to going against Fab 5 in the future once he finds out Harshad's true colours. And then my Manik came and pretty much said to Aryman "No" dude...stay away from Harshad!🤣So the no "no" element kind of carried there too but I'm just going to try and remain patient for now and pretend that CV's just didn't play a senseless stunt on us LOL

Aaah CABINI!!! Sameee!! Omggg I legit screamed Preesha and my brother gave me the "wth look" haha

Theirs is one relationship that flows so naturally and is so effortless. I truly adore Cabir for his understanding towards every one of his friends. His struggle in my opinion has been one of the toughest out of all the characters and whilst Manik had Nadnini during his dark times, Mukti had pretty much the whole of Fab 5 +Navni, Aliya had Mukti, Navya had Nandini and Mukti...Cabir in a way had no one. He fought with himself, with the world and rose again to become the matured, independent and level-headed man he is today. For that reason he understands the struggles, the sufferings a bit more coherently than the others. It hit her hard...you bet it did when he said to her "then find it for Manik"...because she wasn't absent-minded about Manik's pain and guilt, but she just wasn't aware of how deep his wounds actually were. And today when Cabir said those lines to her that "he's never loved anyone the way he loves you"...she in a way snapped out of her shock and realised for all this to be a lot messier then what she thought it was. The scene reminded me so much of the scene during Soha fiasco when Nandini expresses her dilemmas to Cabir of the accusation of Manik being able to kill and Cabir had indirectly made her realise that Manik hasn't loved like this ever before...and so he could kill someone to protect her if the need ever be. And today again...Cabir re-introduced Nandini to the depth of Manik's love and it killed her inside knowing just how much her own sufferings have played their part to hurt him.

Your line..."She cares for him when he forgets to care for himself"...ummm okay, like I'm just going to zip my lips because this ...this is the sign of a born writer!! REMINDER: Publishing firm!!!

Parth...one of the finest actors we have when it comes to expressing the emotions with his eyes. And yesterday was no different. Those eyes...they were bleeding red from the pain. Not the pain she wanted to protect him from, but the pain she was causing him by walking away from him. You've written wonderfully about his scene and the way he pulls her back so I won't add anything to that.

But just quickly...yup this track will make Nandini realise of just how much she needs him in his life. Manik's had his share of experiencing the battles between his heart and mind and now it's Nandini's turn. It will teach her how there is no room for logic, for the mind, for decisions when it comes to love. Love is all about trusting your heart, your emotions, and listening to the heart's needs. Like you said...she will realise just how much she in fact needs him to heal her.

So Soheesha my love...I'm dead serious about this publication company kays?? Like...seriously...and you even have staff willing to work for you!😆

All in all...a beautiful piece this truly was! Loved every word!

Love

Twinkling❤️

Originally posted by: twinkle10

.PLEASE GO START YOUR PUBLISHING COMPANY AND PUBLISH THESE LINES!! And well you can hire me and Sunny as your personal secretaries too! We promise to be very hard-working! 🤣

So Soheesha my love...I'm dead serious about this publication company kays?? Like...seriously...and you even have staff willing to work for you! 😆

Originally posted by: Positivity

Beautiful and Heartwarming

Originally posted by: charminggenie

Hey Twinkle ,

I am suppose to appreciate the love of MaNan you captured with your magical words but I really am apologetic that I might not be able to do so because something else is bothering me and if I don't say it , rest will evade me. I think I have been secretly gushing about your posts for a while now, once or twice I did comment too but today I have to say that I absolutely love your writing. It's the thought, the innovation and the way you sting around the words to build a beautiful melody of love - that touches me. Every post, every emotion is depicted through such a thoughtful understanding. I think , I am in awe of your talent and your love for their love. Your posts are all art in themselves . Sheer beauty. And an ode to the love itself.

But it won't be right if I just don't appreciate your muse.

The reason why Manik-Nandini work is because their love has become an anchor for them. It lets them grow. Right now Nandini is going through her dark phase, she is watching her man breaking apart by her hurt. For her , this is more heart-wrenching than anything Pandit could do. She wants to heal sooner for him but she knows the process might be mercurial , darker and she cannot drag him down again to the dark side. Hence the space. But the way these two are written and the love is build , their togetherness has been the healer. He understands it now what she told him once that together they can overcome anything because he has seen how her presence calmed him again and again whenever his life went through the dark phase. He understands the "need" part of their relationship . And now is her time to understand this aspect of their relationship. In love we share happiness and hurt equally. Even with her branching out alone to overcome her fears by visiting the same place which made Manik's Nandini , she would learn that now she is just not that Nandini but his too. So his presence is her need also. She who has fought lone battles would learn to take to support as well. Fight might be all hers but their love be her armour.