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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
awesome concept
pls continue
i m riya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Update was very short
BUT it was NICE!!!

So Zoya's 🥺 by some Rahul

Now another secret has been revealed to her for which she is going to India

The lovers in the novel written by Zoya had a sad ending but AsYa will have a happy ending {PLEASE let them have a H E}

Waiting for more esp AsYa fight 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
i m up with PROMO

😊
asad to a girl - hey u stole my bag... give it to me... or else..
girl turned around...
girl - what rubbish??
asad - dekhiye,, mera bag mujhe wapis chahiye..
girl - meine aapka bag nahi chori kiya 😡
asad - 😡😡 you,,,
n just then
zoya came in between..
zoya - mr. whatever here is your bag..
asad - oh... toh mera bag aapne liya tha? noo.. chori kiya tha?
zoya - look u are getting me wrong..
asad - you
zoya shouted - SHUT UP! lemme tell u, uss ladki ke paas bhi same bag tha i mean hai.. n aap usse chor bula rhe the gr8. aap apna bag road par chod gye the..
asad - stop it!.. it's really complicated..
asad apologized to that girl
asad started moving towards his car..
zoya - WAIT!
asad - what?
zoya - meri sorry kahan hai..?? tumne mujhe bhi toh chor bola naa!!
asad - are u serious?
zoya - mr.whatever u insulted me..
asad - pehle, stop calling me mr.whatever,..
zoya - what's your name?
asad - asad ahmed khan..
zoya - it should be "akdu ahmed khan". ..
n she giggled
asad - 😡😡

chap 2 will posted soon 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
this is really interesting!!... 😊
update soon.. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
NOTE -- I WILL NOT UPDATE 4-5 DAYS
chapter - 2
zoya - allah miyaan! what's wrong with this country?? itna garbage?? (roads pe)
ayaan - mahotarma , toh kya mein saaf kardun ?
zoya - what?..
ayaan - aapke saath date par chalne ke kuchh bhi .. 😆
zoya - meine kab kaha mein TUMHARE saath date par chalungi?
ayaan - mein toh saamne wale ki aakhen dekh kar hi samajh jaata hoon .. 😆
zoya - btw u aren't that bad..
ayaan - really?
zoya - no! get lost..
n
she bumped into AAK..
aak - i am sorry.
zoya - aap dekh kar nahi chal sakte?
aak - aap baat ko badha kyun rhi hain?? ... meine sorry bola naa...
ayaan - bhaijaan chaliye!..
zoya - oh... toh tum dono bhai ho?? ek chipku dusra akdu .. 😆😆
aak n ayaan -what?..
then someone came from behind...
n
pecked on zoya's cheek
zoya - ishaan?? .. tum?.. what a surprise?.. i missed u,,,
ishaan - let's go..
zoya - yup!

asad - besharam..😡
ayaan - she wasn't that bad. 😃
asad - shut up!. n abhi chalo..
ayaan - yaa..


scene changed,
dilshad - zoya hamare ghar hi rukegi,,n that's final.!
aapi - okay.

in evening - 6:00pm..
asad - shit meri car ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha..!
asad ke haath mein bag tha..
n usne ek baar niche road par rakh diya
asad called someone.
asad - haan... ayaan..
asad - ayaan 1 min..
asad - hey! stop!!..
asad to a girl - u stole my bag
girl turned around...
girl - what rubbish??
asad - dekhiye,, mera bag mujhe wapis chahiye..
girl - meine aapka bag nahi chori kiya 😡
asad - 😡😡 you,,,
n just then
zoya came in between..
zoya - mr. whatever here is your bag..
asad - oh... toh mera bag aapne liya tha? noo.. chori kiya tha? aap toh wahi hain subah wali besharam ladki
zoya - look u are getting me wrong.. n mein besharam nahi hun.., besharam toh aapka bhai hai
asad - you
zoya shouted - SHUT UP! lemme tell u, uss ladki ke paas bhi same bag tha i mean hai.. n aap usse chor bula rhe the gr8. aap apna bag road par chod gye the..
asad - stop it!.. it's really complicated..
asad apologized to that girl
asad started moving towards his car..
zoya - WAIT!
asad - what?
zoya - meri sorry kahan hai..?? tumne mujhe bhi toh chor bola naa!!
asad - are u serious?
zoya - mr.whatever u insulted me..
asad - pehle, stop calling me mr.whatever,..
zoya - what's your name?
asad - asad ahmed khan..
zoya - it should be "akdu ahmed khan". ..
n she giggled
asad - 😡😡 mind your tongue miss.
someone called zoya
dilshad - zoya beta , tum kab aa rhi ho?
zoya - phupi mein 15 min, mein pahunch hi rhi hun..
asad - aap jiske bhi ghar jaa rhi hain naa? unka toh luck hi kharab hai..
zoya - aur aap jahan rehte ho naa wahan ke toh log hi aapse tang ho jaate honge.. i m sure..

scene changed
najma - ammi zoya farooqui is coming?? omg ..

in night..
asad - ammi.. wo guest abhi tak nahi aayi??
someone rangs the bell..
najma - lagta hai wo aa gyi..
asad is reading a book as he has finished his dinner..
asad - najma.. mein kholta hoon.. finish your dinner..
asad -(in mind) - yeh kaun pagal ladki hai jo baar baar bell baja rhi hai,,huh!
asad opened the door..
asad - YOU??
zoya - mr.whatever aap??
dilshad - tum dono ek dusre ko pehle se jaante ho??
asad - nahi.. wo mili thi road pe.,
zoya - phupi,yeh toh ladai karne mein expert hai 🤢
asad - 😡 ammi.., mein apne ROOM mein jaa rha hun.,
dilshad - Okay.
zoya - mumma's boy..
asad - kya bola??
zoya- MUMMA'S BOY..
dilshad - stop it..! n asad. go to your room..
najma- u know what i m your big fan..
zoya - that's so sweet..
najma - mujhe aapke saath selfie leni hai..
zoya - sure..!
najma - thanks..
zoya - ur welcome...
dilshad - najma..,zoya ko uska room dikha do..
najma - ji ammi.
in her room
zoya - "i just wanna lay in my bed.. i don't feel like pickin up my phone.. "
she was singing a song..
n there was a knock on the door..
zoya - aap andar nahi aa sakte..
asad - why?
zoya - kyun ki..
asad - i want to talk to u.. i m coming..
n
he slipped..
asad - aahh...
zoya laughed out loud - meine kaha tha naa mat andar aaiye..

asad - 😡 aapko 15 min.. aaye ko hue hain n room ko dustbin bana ke rakha hai,,,
zoya - 😆
asad - mein aapko yeh batane aaya tha ki.. kv mein rehne ke kuchh rules hain..
zoya - yeh ghar hai ki school??
asad - 1. aap 8:00pm ke pehle ghar aa jayengi..
2.
najma - bhai jaan stop it!.. unko aapke RULES mein samjha dungi..
asad - fine..!


how's it?










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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
nice update..
rules...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
zoya khud itni messy hai
n
"what's wrong with this country? itna garbage"
i wish wahan ayaan ki jagah aak hota!
ayaan n zoya's convo was gud!,,
i'm wondering ki jab asad ko pata chalega
zoya ka naam!!!
becoz he hates her novels!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
refreshing start!
update soon
its awesome!
btw i m tanisha
what's your name??

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