Tum hi ho - new ASYA FF *chap 2 pg 3*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 hii..!! how re u all?? well,i m himanshi
this is first time i'm posting a fan fic on here...
opinions are welcome! ..
SCROLL DOWN TO READ CHAP 1 :) N CHARACTER SKETCH
here u go,..
prologue

ayaan - bhaijaan.. here is your b'day gift.!
asad - i just hate her novels 😡😡
ayaan - u re too boring bhaijaan..
asad - i don't wanna read it!
ayaan - bhai jaan plss ek baar read toh karke dekho.. aapko.. pasand aayega.. mein itne pyaar se laaya hoon
asad - fine.!

on the other hand..
zoya - how's it?
vivek - it's awesome!.. i like it! u re an awesome writer zoya.. 😃

asad hates zoya's novels!! 😊

isn't it boring.!?

chap 1 will be interesting :)


i m new over here so pls bear with me guys
should i continue??

INDEX
PROLOGUE = PAGE 1
CHAP - 1 = PAGE 1 --- what's going on in zoya's life??
CHARACTER SKETCH - PAGE 1
PROMO 1 - PAGE 2 - asya first meeting
CHAP 2 - PAGE 3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue
Asad hates the novels Zoya writes but what will he do about what destiny has written for them???

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh forgot
Hi Himanshi,

I am Chahat.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Himanshi.I am Dimple.Nice prolouge plz continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi welcome to QH Forum. I m Sanjhari
very nice prologue.
pls continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi 😃 i am back with the character sketch and chapter 1!!
SCROLL DOWN TO READ CHAPTER 1 :)

character sketch -
zoya farooqui - her nature is same as in show.... but u know she is quite mysterious!!... n she is a novelist , coming india for some unknown reasons!
😃asad ahmed khan - same as in show..
rashid ahmed khan - husband of shirin but loves dilshad
najma - same as in show..
dilshad ahmed khan - asad's mom..
razia - wife of gaffur siddiqui , negative or positive character... ( it's a secret) ..

rest of the characters will be introduced as the story progresses 😃

SCROLL DOWN TO READ CHAPTER 1 :)
SCROLL DOWN TO READ CHAPTER 1 :)

lemme know how's it?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*chapter - 1*

ayaan - happy b'day bhaijaan!!
asad - where is my gift?
ayaan - here is it!,
asad - zoya farooqui ki book!! mujhe nahi padhni...
ayaan - bhai jaan... plss
asad - fine..
ayaan = btw.. it has a sad ending ... where two lovers never meet..
ayaan - my fav. book is love's impossible..!!
asad - really??...
ayaan - bhaijaan koi aa raha hai.. mein jaata hoon.. bye!
asad - apna khyaal rakhna..!

dilshad came to his room..
dilshad - happy b'day asad!
asad hugged her mom..!
asad - thanks.. btw najma kahan hai?
dilshad - wo..wo... priyanka ke saath bahar gyi hai..
(priyanka is her friend)
asad - 8:30 pm! ammi wo itni der??
dilshad - mein usse call karti hun..!
asad - ji..

scene changed.
vivek - ur novel is awesome zoya..!! it has a sad ending..
zoya - coz i think love is impossible... for me atleast...
zoya(in mind) - i dunno meri life mein happy ending hogi bhi yaa sad ending just like my
vivek interrupted
vivek - hey! where are u lost??

flashback... before 1 month
zoya - appi,jiju.. aur aap yeh mujhe ab bata rhe hain!! kyun chupai aapne mujhse yeh baat??
actually u lied to me!! 😭😭😡
appi - i m sorry... but plz india mat jao zoya..
zoya - i'll do whatever i want..! mujhe needh aa rhi hai ! bye..!
appi - zoya finish your dinner..
zoya - i am not hungry...

in her room.
she cried alot!
zoya - why me?? pehle rahul cheated on me..n now this..
flashback ended

scene changed.
asad - yeh book ... it's really emotional...

scene changed
zoya - it's time to go india! ...
zoya - jiju mein kal india jaa rhi hoon...


precap - asya first meet n fight.!


u can throw anything on me for this crap work.. ! except eggs 😆😆








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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey woo
awesome concept
beautifull writtten
but very short updates
write liltle more longer plz
byre
all the best
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

hey woo

awesome concept
beautifull writtten
but very short updates
write liltle more longer plz
byre
all the best


thanks :) 😊😃
i'll try to write longer parts..
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey! this is awesome!!
i m curious about zoya!!
as u said.., zoya is fun-lovin..
i m really excited..!!
waiting for next part
continue soon
n
do pm me!

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