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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Such a beautiful OS. I loved how you portrayed his redemption. Sometimes time is the biggest healer and brings back what one has lost. Khushi forgave him silently over the time. I loved how you showed their silent journey yet filled with so many emotions. Kudos!! Loved it...

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Just beautiful, the tears hat she shed, the pain he felt when he realised he had done her wrong, so palpable.. made me shed a few of my own. But the healing process to start betwen them was even better, because it wasnt a complete forgiveness.. it was one where she fought with her self to trust him again. Your words made me feel that although those words were not used. Just awesome!

You came 5th?.. my god I need to find that thread!

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Very beautiful os Ana and very well written

You made Arnav's redemption very beautiful and honorable

He made mistakes and he was repenting, very beautifully defined

Loved it .

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Wow..!! It is so heart warming :) their unbearable pain as they are nothing without each other:( you've write each n every emotion so perfectly :)

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vvsaritha

@vvsaritha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

This is the best redemption OS I have read!

It's so heart touching.

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Wow That was such beautiful os

Very lovely

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Hayye! Read this amazing one shot again.

This one shot is on the top of my Arshi redemption one shots, because of it's sweet and practical ending.

Wonderful one shot!!

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

The terrace scene was so touching.Two words' Don't go', was enough to fill the great abyss existed between them, Beautiful OS👏

Love
Anna🤗

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#99

brilliant os:)
loved it very much..it's one of the scene which I can't accept ..you gave a beautiful scene from it..his guilt, her anger ,their love everything is written perfectly..