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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Another beautiful Os ...n@another beautiful offering by u...dese Os r sometyms a breath of fresh air...a new food for thought...:)

nd yet dey carry an essence of d most purest feeling of LOVE!!!!!

To read dem is a wonderful delight for ever-so-busy-student-who-wants-break-free-from-the-monotony... So plz keep bringing dese fillers once a month...spl i request another IC os from Bd's POV!

Dis one strted on a beautuful note...d strt wid so much pain dat one cud literally feel it... Nd dats a huge compliment for any writer to establish dat connect wid readers... Half d job done i guess...:p

d tell-tale squence was abrupt like it shud b... Too heavy...

But ana di...i know dis os was from A's Pov...but d ending seemed a lil messed up...yes khushi was takin her tym,...but somethin was amiss...,must b only me feelin it... But i told u wat i felt...

But overall... Another amazin addition to u're already amazin existimg collection...too glad dat as reader i get an oppourtunity to interact wid u...:)

WAITING FOR SUCH MORE DELIGHT!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Aiyyo Ana! U totally deserve all the appreciation!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Aiiyo Ana meri jaana!
Kya deep feelings vala note likha hai. Dil ko touch kar gaya. 😆
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Aiyyoyyo...Ananya...the note queen 😆
As usual you rocked it 😃
Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Just some time back I thought I read enough about ASR's redemption.. and nothing will be able to move me now...
and boy you had to prove me wrong.. in such a hard way..
... so subtle.. so life like... made my heart... 'feel'...

brilliant...
may you keep writing more... amen...

P.S. I read the note after writing the comment..( just so you know) 😊
Edited by prati_incept - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Ana Meri Jaana 😳
This 🤗 for such a humble and heart felt Thank You note.

This 🤗 for writing such beautiful OS.

This 🤗 for the sweetheart you are.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Awww, Ana! This is just so lovely, like a source of light on my otherwise exam-prep-dullness-dipped day!
This line-

"I'm just scared of other kinds of darkness now."

Was hauntingly beautiful! This is a most deserved win. You write angst, romance and humour so well and in such a way that one cannot help being charmed. I LOVED the way she stopped him and LOVED reading about Arnav's earnestness. I think you are also dipped in those dull days of exam preps, yes? All the best then! And thank you for writing this and in general being awesome. 🤗


ps- We totally have this Notes-Wala-Ishq connection. 😆

Edited by -Delilah- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Awww, Ana! This is just so lovely, like a source of light on my otherwise exam-prep-dullness-dipped day!
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">This line-</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I'm just scared of other kinds of darkness now."</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Was hauntingly beautiful! This is a most deserved win. You write angst, romance andhumourso well and in such a way that one cannot help being charmed. I LOVED the way she stopped him and LOVED reading about Arnav's earnestness. I think you are also dipped in those dull days of exam preps, yes? All the best then! And thank you for writing this and in general being awesome.🤗</font>


<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">ps- We totally have this Notes-Wala-Ishq connection.😆</font>

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Notes wala Ishq connection 😆 definitely!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Ana, what a beautiful piece of writing! kaan pakdke sorry to read so late! but even today I had tears reading this! yeah yeah I am a cry baby..

But loved this piece. In one shot you captured the essence of Arnav's redemption something which we wanted so much from the show and never got!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
I know I am terribly late but I am glad I finally got it!

It'ssimply a beautiful piece. You've kept the storyline true to its characters! Beautifully written.

Congratulations on achieving the 5th position of the contest!

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