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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Like btn went on strike!!
It's v v v beautiful!! Thanks for writing such a wonderful piece

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

So beautifully written... Ana you never stop to amaze me with your work... I think this is the first emotional work of yours that I am reading and you had me all emotional there...

An redemption that was very pragmatically written and also which had the right amount of drama in it to make us relate closely with your characters... Just few words and they knew what it meant beyond what it should... There is no better medicine than time... Yes time is all... When it is bad, it hurts but with time again it heals...

You are one very versatile and amazing women and I am glad that I get to read your work...

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

fabulous story😛😛😛 i just hoped that this story would never end😊 i loved the way how u ended the story ,its really very cool👏i felt like reading it again and again😃 its very well written and though i didnt read other stories in that contest ,i would have voted for u because this story truly deserves appreciation😊😊😊😊 and ya congratulations on ur success dear😊 and take ur own time 2 post IC😊 we'll always be waiting for ur stry 😃😃😃 good luck😊

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jtmbarun

@jtmbarun

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

That was so beautiful!! I loved it!!

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

This OS brought back old memories when the entire forum was desperately waiting for the redemption track... Personally I never wanted a track where ASR begs Khushi to forgive him... Nah... I wanted this, where he works towards making things right and starts with something as small as leaving the lamp on at night for her... It had to be this gradual process where they slowly rebuild their relationship and you described all that beautifully...!👏

Absolutely loved it...😊

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Simply Marvelous ! 👏

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome OS...
Loved it...U have written Arnav's POV very beautifully,,describing every emotion and intention behind his actions...:)

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Beautifully written
The emotional part made us cry

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Was that really you writing this? It is so different from everything I read from you. It is beautiful and touching. Much truer to their characters in the show and definitely much better played than many of the ffs that demanded a pound of flesh for redemption. We are all humans with flaws and this man was no different. Yes as women, we did not like his treatment of Kushi but he was fighting his own demons. When push come to shove, in her darkest time when she needed someone to keep her strong, he was the one there for her (just like he was her worst nightmare too) but that is love, beautiful, ugly, joyful, painful, fulfilling and demanding - he gave her the space to think and decide. To me that is the best part after he apologized. The decision was hers to make on how they move forward. This deserves everything accolades it has received and more.

On a separate note, what is happening with BD and Cheeni?

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Hey Lovelies!

Thank you!

Thank you because I didn't expect such a response...such an overwhelming response. Thanks to everyone who took out time to read it. I didn't think people would like the simplicity of the whole thing. My idea was not of redemption ever...what I wanted from the show was also never a proper 'redemption'. What I wanted was this... a few exchanges and a million emotions. Thank you for being able understand what I was trying to tell through this shot and appreciating it.

For the longest time I didn't post this OS after the context because I was kind of skeptical about it... and not very confident. Well there was time crunch too.

I wanted to write this note because I was trying...but couldn't respond to all the wonderful comments individually, the way I wanted to. You guys have been very generous with the appreciation and encouragement.

Thanks,

Ananya