Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69

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so good evening to all.
Here is the introduction to characters of my fiction.
Nandini: born in rich family.Dad is having own diamond business.Youngest child of family,Having one elder brother.Daddy little princess and brother's loving baby.Always get wat she wanted.Stubborn by nature,orders all her work to servants.If somebody cross her,she will make sure to make their life hell.
Inspite of so angry nature outside,she has one soft side only for her bff : Navya and Abhi.There all friends since school.
Nandini has seen her family broken.Everbody is busy in making money,so she feels lack of love in her life and seeing her parents fighting sometimes,she develop fear in her heart and mind that every relationship ends at bad note.So,her relationship never last more then 1 month 😕.
Navya: rich family girl but down to earth.ALways cool down nandini and love her lot.She only understand nandini more tehn her parents.
abhi: fun,cool guy.But very sensible.he is relationship already and is settled in abroad for studies .
both nandini and navya are also going to canada for further studies.
Manik: cool,cute guy.youngest in family.overprotective mother and father.đŸ„±.Has one elder brother dhruv living in abroad with his girlfriend alya.Manik is always spoiled by parents overlove so he always take love for granted.but he will be showering his love to only his woman.He believes in true love but at same time don't want to go to relationship soon.
Cabir:Manik best friend since school.both talks alot and make jokes on everbody.Cabir is playboy 😃
Mukti:Manik cousin living in abroad with family.SImple girl.loves to help people.working in bank.
cabir and manik are also going abroad for further studies and will live with manik brother and his gf.

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Chapter 6 (Last part)
Chapter 13 (part 3)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u guys ...Manik and nandini mileage but acc to my story outline thoda time hai abhi..I wil make them talk in 3 chapter fr sure...
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Chapter 2
So,All of them settled in their respective places.One side abhi,Navya and nandini went to niagara falls to see the beauty of falls in evening and other side Dhruv,alya,cabir,mukti and Manik went to downtown.Their go for clubbing,Partying and had drinks and dance to the full enjoyment.
So guys in my story manik and nandini still are living in different cities that is 1 hr far away from each other.only abhi,manik and cabir is having same college but nandini and navya college is different.And you guys can google niagara falls Pictures (Beauty of world).
In night when dhruv,alya were relaxing outside,Meanwhile cabir and manik went to one girls club and both of them was shocked,their eyes were literally popping outside.In front of them were like hot chicks that were dancing.suddenly on e white cute girl grabs the hand of cabir and said to join them in dance. Cabir just pull manik with him and in some short seconds they both join girls in dancing.Cbir was literally enjoying it and same too with manik.Manik was shy in startind and then cabir said"Leave this all shyness baby boy now,aunty is in india now.We have to live our life over here so lets enjoy now".Saying this they start dancing until they both get tired.
Niagara falls:
Nandini,navya and abhi were having cofee in their hands and they were walking to falls.As soon they reach over there and they saw the falls,water coming down with so soothing sound and it was night so the shine of moon was shining on falls.Nandini and navya eyes were mesmerized,They were just standing and looking at the water.All of them just sit and talk about new journey and about college and everything.They decided one weekend abhi will come to them and next weekend nandini and navya will visit abhi in toronto as nandini loves busy life and big cities.Navya told them lets go back to romm and she was till tired from journey.Nandini told them to walk ahead,she will just come in 15 minutes.ABhi said they will wait for her as they dont want to leave her alone,But nandini said no she said she will come soon.SO,now nandini by herself sitting and lookign at water and thinking about past which she never want to remember again abut at the same time she cant forget it even.She was just bearing the pain of broken relationship and faking smile on her face as she knows if she would be upset,navya nd abhi would do everything to make her feel better.So ,he always sit alone sometimes and bear everything and them come back again to hard face,cold hearted person.
Navya and abhi were walking and talking.Navya"I dont know when she will overcome that,it has been 2 years and she never ever drop a single tear.She is just acculumating everything in her heart.She dont want ot become weak again,SHE dont want us to see her teary eyes."Abhi replied"Yeah she always asks for time and we always give her space but dont know when she would try to show us real nandini smile.

Okayyy guys here is chapter 2 ..
Please lemme know how is it..
Thank you guys.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really liked the story...keep updating
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amazing update please update soon and thanks for the pm and please manik aur nandini ko next chapter main mila do.
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Abhi left falls hoping that next week they would meet again in Toronto.

Next morning nandini and navya were ready to leave for college .As soon as nandini parked her bmw car in parking and she stepped from car.Boys eyes were literally burnt with her beauty.She was just looking like cindrella doll in her white cute zara short dress and kate spade handbag in her hands and her shades tuck on her head.Girls were gossiping about her style and boys were just staring at her.Enjoying attention navya and nandini went straight to their orientation session.All boys were just talking about her and wants to have contact with her and be her friends.But thanks to nandini attitude that clearly sayd "I AM NOT INTRESTED".everbody was far from her but talking about her.By the end of evening navya and nandini were known as "Beauty with brains bff"

Otherside manik and cabir were loving the all attention of college as dhruv was senior and everybody was gossiping that dhruv younger hot brother is in college with his cool friend. Manik was wearing red shirt with beats headphones hanging around his neck and they both were hanging in college canteen along with dhruv and alya.So,all girls were just hanging around them and cabir was just going crazy for all this and he was like "Manik I would love to sign for extra classes"Manik replied "YEAH sure I would love to see you studying more but I am not interested"

So,one week went like this having all attention and studying.It was weekend time.Nandini and navya pack their bags and load it in car and leave for Toronto and start their journey with Selena Gomez song "Heart wants what it wants".Navya always hate this thing when nandini would play such sad ,slow songs on high volume and then she would lost in her own world of thoughts and worst part was she would start connecting lyrics of songs to her life.But navya never interrupt her because she nad abhi were just waiting that one day nandini would take first step and would pour her heart all and she would feel relaxed.

Evening time Toronto:

Manik,cabir,mukti and one of her friend soha all went to party in club as soha had invited manik and cabir.Same club abhi had book the tickets for three of them for same party as nandini loves partying and she was getting curious too see the light life of Toronto. Nandini and navya were waiting for abhi in parking and same manik and cabir were waiting for mukti and soha.Cabir was looking here and there and he stop at nandini and said "SEE manik that plane cute girl"Manik was busy on phone and he was goin to turn his head toward nandini and suddenly abhi came and stood between both of them.Nandini and navya leave the car and on the way abhi told them it was theme party so he went to fetch masks for them.While leaving place navya just saw cabir blurred face and how he was looking at them.Seeing this she was like "All mens are same".Saying this nandini and navya both bursts into laughter when they saw abhi puppy face .Meanwhile soha and mukti were back with masks in their hands.Soha was trying to grab manik hands and manik give hints to cabir in eyes that make her stay away from him.Cbir got the signal and pat on soha shoulder and said "Soha lets goo manik is busy on phone,you can show me the entrance.

All enter in to club where dj was playinh high music with some Punjabi dance song.Abhi and nandini went to grab drinks and meanwhile navya was standing and enjoying music and tapping her foot.Somebody just give her shoulder and she was goin to fall but as cabir was coming,he just in time holds her and make her stand.Navya thanks her and cabir was like "No need for thanks,I am always ready to help beautiful girls😃😉"..Navya said " whateverđŸ˜Č and leaves from there . Cabir shouts from the back "But you can thank me by giving me your number ".

So,all were wearing masks and lights were dim and enjoying dance.Abhi,nandini and navya were having drinks.Manik and cabir were on dance floor and soha was just trying to be flirtous with manik but thanks to mukti and cabir "saviors of manik".Now all were dancing.Nandini and navya and abhi one side.at the back were manik,cabir and mukti.It start playing couple song and somebody announce just turn you backs and whoever is at you back side dance with them and match your steps.So now manik and nandini,mukti and abhi,navya and cabir.Manik saw how nandini dances so well he said " you dance very well" Nandini replied " Yeah I wish I could say the same for u".Manik was like "why are you so rude.I compliment you.you should atleast say thanks".And song changed and nandini leaves manik and was about to turn and said "anyways thanks for telling me what I already know ".First encounter of manik and nandini but with covered faces.Manik was thinking she was rude or she was pretending to be rude.

Soha saw manik dancing with nandini and she got pissed off.She announced lets go for drink and took all of them same sation where nandini and navya and abhi were having their shots.Nandini was laughing and manik looks towards her and he thinks "she was totally different with me and now she is happy".Burning from jealousy soha plane to spoil nandini dress,so she grabs the drinks and purposely she hits nandini and spills drink on her favorite dress.Witnessing all this navya and abhi were shocked because they know what gonna happen next.They know nandini very well,what she would do if someone would spoil her favorite thing.Nanidni just fumes into anger when she saw the dress and then she look towards soha who was saying sorry,it was by mistake.Nandini didn't say anything andleave for car parking and told abhi and navya not to follow her.Manik was shocked that she even didn't say a word.Mukti went to abhi and said "Iam sorry on my friend behalf".Navya replied"Its okay..You would see shortly with whom your friend messed.And we feel sorry for your friend".Confused mukti went back and told cabir and manik about conversation.Cabir was like " Okay lets c what we got in that girl,we would wait for her."

After 20 min nandini was back in her black shorts and red hanging small top and her white dirty dress in hand.Manik was just looking at her.She grabs the red wine bottle from the counter and went straight to soha back she was standing with manik,cabir and mukti.She tap on soha shoulder and as soon soha turns back,Nandini open the bottle and start pouring bottle on head of soha all coming down from hair to face and on her clothes.Soha was getting furious.manik and cabir were laughing with hands on their mouths and checking nandini actions.After finishing whole bottle nandini just throw her dress on soha face and said " oh sorry it was not by mistake.Here is dress for you.next time don't even dare to touch me or my clothes."

Abhi grabs nandini hand and leave club.And manik and cabir were just looking and thinking about her guts...


Okayy guys here is end of chapter 2..Please lemme know how was it and leave you comments and likes on it..


Will c u all on wednesday now as i am goin for camping😃😃..enjoy weekend


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Haha always love the Feisty Nandini :) <3,
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Ha haha pure soha..i love nandini guts...lovely update
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amazing update
continue soon
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Hey guys ,,how are you all!!

M back from my camping.It was hell lot fun.


Chapter 3:(Page 1 )

Abhi apartment:

Abhi,navya and nandini reach apartment.Whole journey of 25 minutes, where nandini was driving fast in her angry state abhi and navya they didn't dare to speak with nandini.Every single person who is very close to nandini they know one thing for sure that nandini anger is like volcano.Whenver she is angry just leave her alone.Dont even try to talk with her.Because one u try you got messed up .Navya and abhi knows that nandini never get angry so easily but whenever she got so high anger,she just needs to spent time alone.End of story from her side.As soon they enter room nandini just shuts the door making all bang high sound leaving abhi and navya in living room.Navya and abhi gave understanding look to each other as its not first time for them witnessing all angry nandini.So,both of them went to their rooms and go to bed.

Nandini room:

Sitting in room window looking out at stars and thinking why she ever changed herself.The good she become the more hurt she got from people.

Flashback(2 years back).

When abhi came to usa and navya went for some training.Nandini's parents send her to usa to her aunt house for visit.In usa she met one boy named Aaryaman that was studying same psychology course when nandini register herself as since her school she always want to be psychologist.She did one small psychology course as she loves to talk and understand human feelings.

So both of them become good friends as aaryaman parents and nandini aunt were close friend.So every weekend they went for picnic,movies,shopping.Nandini start enjoying the company of aaryaman and same he told abhi and navya on skype chat.Navya and abhi told her"Yeah nandini we know how long your relationship will be and just laugh because they know nandini very well".Nandini thought the same.But after 2 months nandini start realizing that she was changing.From angry,rich spoil nandini,she was becoming soft,lovable nanndini.She start allowing people in her life.When she talks with abhi and navya,both of them were shocked when they saw smiling nandini just like cute baby child.Navya and abhi tease her saying so"You fall in love,looks like it changed u lot.Now you are soft,baby nandini."But nandini refuses and said they guys were just friends. But abhi and navya were happy that atleast nandini is becoming cool person.(Flashback end)

Suddenly lost in thoughts nandini hear somebody knock her door,she know it is abhi.She open the door and abhi was standing there with her favorite vanilla mango shake.She just give small smile and let him come in room and both of them sit near windows.Abhi asked" so monster you are happy now,you make one more enemy.She said"She don't care about enemies.Atleast enemies don't backstab you".Abhi got the hint what she was thinking before and without saying anything he just grab nandini hand and he drive to Toronto island.Abhi knows only such things can give peace to nandini mind. SO,both of them just sitting near edge dipping their feet in water.

Manik home:

While coming back home,soha was boiling in anger that how some random girl can made fun of her publicly.To gain sympathy from manik,she start sobbing on manik shoulder and saying"You notice manik how manner less girl she was.".Manik and cabir were laughing from inside but as soha was mukti friend so manik has to behave and he replied "Yeah soha how bad she was.She just left her expensive dress like that and moreover she showed us what she can do if somebody would try to mess up with her first".Cabir start laughing and said" Manik looks like you love her confidence and may be you start thinking about her that why you are just talking about her now and he winks at mukti and manik".

When they reach home manik was going to kitchen to grab some food when he notice nandini white dress on couch as mukti grabs it form soha.Manik picks up the dress and was goin to keep in the laundary,he heard some noise from dress.When he jerks the dress one earring got fall on floor.He thought it must be for the other masked girl.So, he kept the earring and keep safe in his room.While lying on his bed he was thinking how she behaved looks like and sounds like she got hurt and she just wants to stay away from people.Thinking all about night events he suddenly got messaged from cabir "I hope you are not thinking about love masked fighter girl.Go to sleep,she would come in your dreams."(Winks).Manik laughed at msg and replied"Yeah waiting for her in my dreams now).
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