Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 2

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Chapter 3(Page 2):

Manik room:

Tired from last night party,manik was still sleeping and dreaming about masked girl(that was nandini ),the way dey both dance and how she talk with manik and then what she did with soha and then manik found her earring.Manik was going to remove the mask in his dream when suddenly he heard somebody was banging so loudly on door and that bang indicates it only cabir and cabir. He opened the door with puffy eyes and cabir was said " what!! U haven't slept last night.Your eyes are swollen.Manik was going to say something but cabir just shout get ready in 10 min if you want to go for shopping with us and run from room.

Cabir,dhruv and alya all were going to shopping to Toronto downtown and waiting for manik.Manik wore his black cool tshirt with blue shorts and walk towards car and cabir roll down window and said "we r just going for shopping not for your marriage proposal.All of them laugh hard hearing cabir.

Nandini,navya and abhi were already doing shopping as navya and nandini want some new clothes.Navya was trying some clothes on meanwhile nandini and abhi went for coffee and told navya they will be back in 10 minutes.Navya was shouting nandini pass me other black dress and cabir was passing through looking for men section.He heard and thinks" OHH some girls needs my help,he looks here and there and saw some black dress hanging around and pass it to navya."After 5 minutes navya come outside in dress and looking around nandini and cabir said"Dress looks nice on you."Navya said "Thank you,its my friend choice".Cabir replied" oh yeah I know my choice is awsumm".Shocked navya said"YOU!! Passed me dress,why??

But then when she look around she was unable to find nandini and abhi and said thanks for the favor but I don't like the dress and went to changing room and cabir shouts the same way he did in party " You can thank me by giving me your number".Hearing this navya remember the guy from party that was also cabir and realize he was the one.Navya come outside" Oh so you were the one in party asking for number and your friend ruins my best friend dress."Hearing this cabir surprised "OHH you guys are following us or what and asked is your best friend with you.We want to see her face",Navya didn't replied and went away and cabir runs towards manik" Manik manik he was shouting from distance.Manik turns back and said "What!! You saw some sexy girl " and cabir replied "Yeah the girl from party who teach soha lesson,your dream girl is in mall".Manik thought cabir Is joking as always but then cabir told him everything about his meeting with navya and told they are best friends and both of them are in mall.

After this both of them runs through every shop in mall looking for them but were unable to find as it was very busy because of weekend.Suddenly when they guys were exiting the mall cabir saw navya and told manik "see they are going back and both of them runs towards exit,But manik just see her black hair and tattoo mark on her back."Manik saw abhi with them and thought he is boyfriend of nandini and said " Cabir,some boy is with them,may be she is committed" Cabir replied"So what we are still not sure'"

But they guys already left and manik and cabir return back to shopping.

Abhi said bye to both of them as weekend was almost over and they guys have to go back to their colleges.So nandini and navya leave foe Niagara falls.On their journey back navya told nandini about her encounter with cabir in party and mall.Nandini got irritated how some boy can flirt with navya as she don't want want navya to get hurt in so called love and she always try to protect with her.Nandini said "Why you didn't tell me that time, I must teach all of them lesson." Navya replied "Because of this reason, I didn't tell uou,I know you wil fight with him .And I don't want our trip to end at bad note."

Both of them reach home late night ,text abhi that they reach safely and went straight to bed saying good night to each other

Otherside manik and cabir were just searching last night parties pics so that they can find navya and nandini.Manik said to cabir "Atleast you should ask her name then we can find them easily". Cabir "Yeah she is having fighter friend,you want me dead".They spent one hour finding names or any clue.but they were unable as both of them were from other city and abhi booked the tickets.Cabir said "Manik one idea, its difficult but if you really want to meet her you have to do this". Manik nods and asked what ??

Cabir "You just have to go to dinner with soha and you can ask her about list name or videos because she was the one who knows that party guys."Hearing this manik said " Shit seriously I have to bear that soha now..No!!! Never !."Den cabir teases "Okk whatever" leave It then..And said yeah manik leave her.she was not that special.Then manik suddenly covers his mouth and said "Okk I will go but you will also go and sit far away and when I signaled youjust rescue me from there".Both of them high five each other and winks.

Manik was lying down on his bed and looking at earring and thinking about finding her when the note suddenly fall from his box.It was the note that nandini left for him in plane and manik said to himself "Yeah I would keep it because you need to return it back to me." And he dozes into deep sleep.

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Chapter 3 (Last part):

Manik woke up early because he has to final the plan with cabir.He went to cabir room who was sleeping with open mouth.He kick his ass and pour water and shout hurry up we had a plan to execute and cabir said "Seriously,you are getting too much serious now for girl.Dhruv and alya were leaving for job and they stop by cabir room and asked "Which girl"??Cabir said "Manik girlfriend".Both of them said "What??".Manik gives angry looks to cabir which made hin open his eyes fully and he suddenly changed the topic and said "Future girlfriend" ..They both leave and tell them to go for college now as they are already late.They nods and smiles at each other evishly because they know they will not go to college.

So, according to cabir plan : cabir would talk to mukti and Make her agree to call soha and invite for lunch as a thank you gift for party she invited them.And then when they would reach restaurant mukti would get some emergency call from office and she would leave and after 10 min cabir would leave making excuse for some college work and then its all upto manik to handle soha and had that video or pics.So cabir called mukti and she agreed as she was having day off from job and all of them reach restaurant and soha was excited that manik invited her for lunch.She wore small black dress to impress manik but manik was just concentrating on plan..So,everything was goin according to plan.They guys had drinks and order food when suddenly mukti phone rings and she was saying "But it was my off today and I am withmy cousin outside" and she cuts the phone saying "Okay I will be there in 10 minutes"Hearing this manik and cabir smiles and winks that all is going good.So,mukti told them that she had to leave right now.Manik and cabir make a sad face and said okk we will drop you.But mukti said "NO,you guys enjoy your lunch,I will join u later and leave".After some time cabir got call and said "Ohh yeah,sorry I forget,I would come right now and will drop assignment."And he said "Manik I forget its assignment today and I cant miss it,so I have to leave right now but you guys have lunch,we already order food and I will pick you up later and said sorry to soha."Soha got super happy that its only her and manik and manik now alone having lunch date :P..

When mukti and cabir leaves,soha put her hand on manik hand and said "I always like your company ".Uncomfortable manik moves hi shand with jerk and starts thinking how to start talking about party.Then food arrive on their table and while eating manik start "Thanks for the party that day,we really enjoyed it."Soha smile and was happy that manik likes her company and said "Yeah I am happy you like it.If that girl didn't spoil my mood then it would be so much awesome".Manik just got hint point and start talking "Yeah that girl was very rude.IF we know which college is she or her name or her face,me and cabir would take your revenge.Smile jumps and said "OHH manik you care for me too much.So nice of you.and puts her hand on manik hand."Cabir was sitting on far table and looking at all this and text manik "Manik you are too much dude,don't get her serious otherwise she would create problem for you in future."Manik saw the message and try to end it now by saying "Yeah you are mukti friend and its our responsibility to look out for you girls in party and soha interrupted her showing her phone"I had a video of that party.I can send you if you want but I don't know if you will find what you need or no..!!"Hearing this manik got happy at heart and thinks "Yeah for sure we would find what we need".AnD replied "Yeah sure,s end me now that we will figure out something."And manik signals to cabir that work is almost done and he can come now..Within 30 seconds cabir bang the table and said "WAss up,you miss me!!Soha got furious that why he is back and cabir said "Lets go manik fast,dhruv and alya are waiting for us in college,they will kill us."Manik jump from the seat and said "Okayy soha c u later and I already paid the bill"Take care.Soha sitting alone cant understand what hall happen in last minute and leaves the restaurant thinking about manik.

As soon guys reach home they lock the room and start playing video and getting happy seeing what nandini did with soha and all that but they cant find any clue regarding name or face as it was theme based party so faces were covered.Suddenly cabir shout play again I heard some name.When nandini was pouring the drink that time navya shout"Come on abhi,we will leave now "And abhi was holding nandini hand and leave the party.So,they know guy name Is abhi but when manik saw he was holding nandini hand they guys thought they must be couple and think to drop the idea to find her.

Otherside nandini and navya chilling at home and nandini to navya "I am getting bored,lets do something."And navya knows by do something means lets fool some boys now."Saying this nandini grab the laptop and start finding some online dating sites for fun and she found one in canada and make her id on it and sit beside navya and start showing her some boys and both were laughing at their pics.While scrolling navya said "See some indian boy over there,nandini check the id .It was maik id as cabir made his id and manik too on their first weel to have fun".Nandini "Yeah some guy who have picture of food as dp and from Toronto".She sends msg "Hiee hungry man".Need some change for food..

Manik got a beep msg and when he looks he saw it was msg from online dating site and cabir push him and took phone and stat looking for msg and said "How come you are getting msg not me,I Make your id.And make angry face.Manik replied back to nandini"Yeah sure you can send some change or may be you can invite me to dinner at your home".Navya and nandini were laughing and replied back "Yeah sure you can go any time to temple..free food.

After this they both went for walk to falls and manik and cabir were just searching her profile to see her friends.

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