Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 19

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love it... adorable proposal and their friends' reaction to...very well done
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beautiful updates
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Chapter 9 (Part one)

When they guys left navya shouts Nandini now show me pics and tell me everything about last night. Nandini smiled and both of them runs to living room and they have seat on couch.Nandini grabs the camera and showed him every single pic and telling her single small thing about last night.Navy awas so happy that she had tears in her eyes and she was Saying "Awww,he is so cute.He is very lucky to have you and you too.I am soo happy for both of you and she hug Nandini."Breaking the hug Nandini said "So,whats btw you and cabir.Did you tell him that your birthday is next month.He better be prepared for it otherwise he gonna be dead ..Navya interrupt Nandini there is nothing like that between us.Yeah we are good friends but it's not we are in love.I enjoy his company and talk but he is more of Casanova boy so I am not force our self into relationship.Nandini stopped and said "I know whatever you desrve you will get that in your life but tell me first what do you want for your birthday.".Navya starts thinking and said "Will think but you don't have to do job for that and winks and both of them smiled." Then they clean their apartment and went to their rooms as they were still tired form last night.

Nandini enters her room and she didn't adjusted the bed,she still wants to feel manik presence in her room.She grabs her journal and start writing "He proposed me yesterday.It was happiest day of my life.The way he looks at me,the way I have seen love in his eyes.I fell in love with his eyes and I know what time that there is no turning back now.I want all this to be forever.I will always protect him.He is my life and I will always fight for us."She closed the diary and then texted manik "Text me baby when u reach home.I am gonna sleep now.I love you,tc".And she went into deep sleep.

Other side manik was still thinking all bout last night and was happy that he got somone like Nandini who loves her lot.He texted his cousin who is very close to him "Want to share something with you.Call me as soon you are free."He wants to share it with his mom also.He wants to be responsible now for Nandini.Having all these thoughts he was lost.And they reach home and he texted her "Baby I reached home..Will call you in evening.sleep well.I love you.take care of yourself .

In evening

Manik opened his eyes and grabs phone and called Nandini.She was still sleeping and hold the phone on her ear.Manik said "Still sleeping."Nandini in her sleepy voice "Hmmm...need more sleep".Manik was loving her voice and he was just listening to her sound of breath and said "no wake up,have your dinner."Struggling with sleep she leave the bed and went to navya room straight and saw she was still sleeping so she climb up on her bed and hug her and sleep again.

Manik called him mom and said "Mom I am very happy today". And then he starts talking about Nandini. His mom said "so that stubborn changes my boy into man and she is ore then friend.I would surely want to see her and have a talk with her". Manik was so excited and said "yeah sure I will do it."And asked "Where is monster.did he called you".He was asking about his cousin.His mom replied "no, you know his busy life but I will make sure to convey your message."And manik said "bye to mom ".

Manik mom thinking who this girl whom by boy loves so much is and becoming responsible. He is just talking about her.She thought she will surely meet this girl soon.

Cabir was knocking manik room so loudly that manik shouts what cabir.Are you dying?? And manik opens the door.Cabir said not me but you will be dead soon.Your love is here.Manik said "tell me straight who."Cabir said "SOHA". Manik who was still lil bit sleepy suddenly get alert and said :ohh noo please cabir save me save me."And suddenly soha said "save you from what manik". Manik face color was all gone and he said hi in low tone. Soha jumps and hug him and said "after a long time.i miss you". Manik pulls her off and signs Cabir to save him. Cabir jumps in between them and said "soha he is sick having flu." So, let him take rest.Soha interrupts "okay let him take rest today but tomorrow we are going party after 2 days as I have arranged for manik belated birthday.Snd no excuse for that as I have already spoken with dhruv and he said "you all will come".So,take proper rest now.Will c u on party.And she left from there.Manik and cabir both look to each other and said together "Dead now". Both of them run to dhruv and shouts "Why we are going to Soha party."? Dhruv shocked replied "She has kept that party for your birthday.And moreover she is mukti friend.How can I say no." Manik said "I celebrate my birthday a lot and in best way,I don't need more party."Dhruv said "Then tell mukti no and handle with her.Or just go to party with us and we can come back early."Cabir said "Hahaha manik, either you go to party and become meat for soha or say no to mukti or get shit from her.And in case you're Nandini will come to know about soha party especially for you so you are for sure dead meat." Manik was confused what to do. He doesn't want to lie to Nandini and he doesn't want to hurt mukti too.

Next morning:

Manik still thinking what to do.So he texted Nandini morning wish and the nw hole day they guys were busy in college and they keep on texting each other.So,in evening manik called nandini and they talk all bout whole day,food.And then manik said "Baby,I have party this weekend .And I can't say no because it was planned by mukti friend Soha.If you want ,I can pick u up and u can stay here with me for party. "Nandini was shocked with soha name but then she trusts manik completely and said "I am glad you tell me truth and no I am busy these days in assignments. You go and enjoy your party." Just don't get drunk too much in party. I trust you completely. Manik was happy that Nandini was so understanding.

So,all of them get ready for party and manik adjusted his Bluetooth so that he can be with Nandini regular.Nandini told him to enjoy party and she will call by herself.All o fthem reach location.Soha was super excite for it.She hugs manik and said "Here is my birthday boy."She gift him expensive watch and cabir whisper to his ears "Later on pass it to me as I know you don't want nay gift except you're your nandini."All of tehm hits dance floor then and manik was sitting in corner and texts Nandini to have dinner and then call him later.Manik has already warn cabir to keep eyes on soha nd save manik if he sees any danger.Soha saw manik sitting and grabs the drinks and sits with him and offer drink.Mnaik refuses as he knows he will lose himself.But the soha keep insisting one drink.Then all were on dance floor.All were enjoying drinks.They were having tequila shots.Soha got so drunk.She grabs manik on dance floor and starts dancing with him.She whispers into his ears "Why you so stop talking to me"? Confused manik said "What are you saying"? Soha said "She is the one with whom he talk online for 1 month and then stop talking". Manik was so shocked and he pulls her off "It was you.You make that account and you purposely send me message".Soha said "yeah manik,I like you."Manik got angry.He shouts "Soha stay away from me.I love Nandini.I already proposed her last night.We are together now."So,leave me.Soha shouts "That girl,you love her.That arrogant,bitch girl."Listening to her words manik got mad and he slap soha .Dhruv,alya,mukti and cabir all gather around and mukti asked "manik ,are you out of mind.why you slap my friend."Manik said "Because she deserves it."And manik left from there.Cabir followed him and dhruv.While alya and mukti were still confused and asked soha.Soha said "Nothing serious and she thinks she will see that Nandini too soon."


So guys here is next update for you...As promised,i would next update soon.😊😊😊..Need you r feedback for this one..Leave for likes and comments on it.

And guys its a request if someone needs to post this story on ig or fb,plz give credit.As its my personal love story not some random story.I just saw on ig somebody posting my story without any credit,I feel bad.

So,see you soon with new update.Till then enjoy this one..😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
just a bit worried the way things
r going about manik's secret cousin and soha
they will create misunderstanding
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww... .oor Manik... hope MANAN make it through whatever Soha has planned...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear
But who is Manik's cousin?
And what is Soha up to?
Cont soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
There is still time to reveal about soha plan and manik cousin...But i promise it gonna be all excited..😊..
As in true love story i just have to plan som emoments.All other r already happened ..Soha part happened in my li🥱🥱fe too but lil bit...

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