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Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

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Guysss you can buddy me for updates because last time I tried a lot but I was unable to send pjs to all..don't know d reason
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Chapter 4

Next morning,when nandini woke up and getting ready for college,suddenly his phone beeps and he saw msg on online site..Manik "Morning baby". She smiles and thinks wow this boy would be so fun and runs to navya room and show her msg,she dis boy is going crazy for me and navya said "Please nandini don't do this again,lets concentrate on new life.Nandini replies "Yeah,its only fun, I am not gonna go in relationship with him".

Otherside manik was waiting for reply but he didn't get any msg,so he got ready for college and went to cabir room.Cabir asked"So,any progress with online girl".Manik said "Nopes,looks like she is hard to get".Manik also don't want to go into relationship soon as he thinks he is too young to handle all love stuff and right now he just want to have some fun.Suddenly manik got msg "Morning,how are you!!"It was from nandini.So,they start chatting about cities they belong to india and study and how long they are in here .But nandini didn't disclose her real name and college and city.She don't want to meet any online boy.After some time time both of them agreed on exchanging cell numbers,Nandini saved the number on name of Hungry man and manik save the number "Mystery girl."

Navya was noticing everything that how nandini was busy in chatting in these days with manik and navya called abhi and said "Come to falls.Speak to nandini.She would only listen to you.She is again in to hurting some boy."

Otherside dhruv and alya make a plan to visit on Niagara falls on weekend as manik and cabir hasn't seen that place yet.

Manik and nandini were chatting in night.Manik asked nandini "About her past relationships".When nandini replied "She don't wanna discuss her personal life with him". Manik asked "If they can meet for coffee.But nandini said "No,as its just some days they are talking".Apart from nandini,manik was also flirting with some other girls on dating site.

Around 2 a.m

Nandini was lying on bed listening to songs and getting flashbacks from past.After she broke she always had sleepless nights.She starts thinking how she and aaryaman.She got close in short period of time.She never imagined herself the way she was with aaryaman.She become sensible,soft and she shares everything with him.The love she didn't get from family she got from aaryaman. He always support nandini in every way.He tolerates her anger,her mood swings everything. Lost in thoughts she feel vibration on phone and manik messaged "Still awake"?? Nandini don't want ot talk yet but she replied "Yeah almost in sleep".Manik messaged again "How come then you are texting??Habit of sleep texting ".Nandini smiled and replied back "Yeah m too abnormal for this world".Manik "I love abnormal people".Nandini "Talk with your girlfriend,M not available for normal people".Manik "I am talking to my girlfriend and being with such people is best ".Suddenly navya call nandini for dinner and nandini said bye to manik and leave for dinner. When navya and nandini were having dinner nandini phone was beeping continuously and Nandini was replying manik when suddenly navya interrupt "Nandini stop it now. Don't talk to boys online, Nandini replied"Navya chill, at least they will not love me for my money and m not going to meet them".Navya try to say something but stop as she knows there is no use.

Next morning:Abhi reach the falls and navya was in living room and Nandini was still sleeping as she is not early riser. Abhi and navya went to balcony and navya told her about everything online chatting. Navya said "Abhi please make her understand now.i don't want her to be such cold hearted person. Abhi was thinking how to start talk with her as he don't want Nandini to be all sad, depressed all along. He remembers when Nandini tell about aaryaman to them, abhi want to have background check on him but Nandini trust aaryaman so much, he just leave like this and then he always blame himself for whatever happen to Nandini.

After some time Nandini woke up and saw abhi and navya in balcony talking. she guessed what they were talking. So, just to change the topic she hugs abhi and asked " wooo.you are back to give me lecture.but lets have breakfast first then talk."I will cook today.Saying this nandini rushes to kitchen and abhi and navya knows nandini never cooks as she don't know cooking.She was just avoiding abhi talk.Navya gives look to abhi to follow her and talk with her.Abhi went to kitchen and saw nandini was standing and looking outside window when she heard abhi footsteps and start trying to make coffee.Abhi holds her hand and make her sit on chair and asked "Why? Are you doing all this?"Nandini "Abhi I am not fool to make that mistake again..He broke my heart.It hurts.I don't ever want to feel that way again. I don't think I could go through all that again. I feel nothing, so close to falling apart.I shut every single person from my life." Abhi saw it was first time Nandini was sharing this with him after 2 years. Abhi hold her face that was looks sad "You did nothing wrong, That his loss, you are so much better without that one boy who didn't ever care. You live, you learn and you rise how it is.Think if you love the wrong person that much, how much more you can love the right person."He didn't fight for you,he is even not worth your time.So,promise me today you gonna finish this all for once and tomorrow fresh morning with your smile.If you don't want to go into relationship,don't go then,but stop playing with feelings, you are not that cold hearted we know.Today whole day is yours spend it with you only.We will not say anything until you want us to."Saying all this abhi leaves from kitchen and navya was waiting for them. Abhi told her to leave her alone for today and give her whole day.So, they guys order food and eat silently. Whole day they were just watching movies and playing games.

Manik and cabir,already reach falls with dhruv and alya and was checking in hotel.When manik went to walk for falls.Cabir was standing near window and looking at beauty of falls.

Nandini told abhi and navya that she will be back ,she Is going to falls for walk.She was sitting on her favorite spot.On the edge near falls looking at moon and thinking about abhi words.She thought how she changed over these 2 years for the guy who didn't fight enough for her.She knows somewhere in her heart what actual personality she is.She just change whole her personality for nothing and bcoming cold hearted she is destroying her future.She knows she has to vent out all her feelings today to make fresh start.She suddenly feel tears dropping in her eyes when she was thinking what she become in past years.How she changed..She start crying so loud and continuously hiding her face in her hands thinking about her past when suddenly someone taps on her shoulder and she thought it must be abhi following her.She turns and without looking at face she just hugs him tightly and still was crying

.Manik was surprised when nandini hugs him tightly,he don't know what to do,but just stand still while she was crying on his shoulder.

Edited by simmii25 - 10 years ago
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Lovely update cont soon
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nice update
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Awsome loved it continues soon 👏
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Chapter 4 (Last part)

Niagara falls:

Nandini was till weeping like baby and tightly she hug manik.Manik doesn't know what to do so he just let her cry .After 10 min manik said slowly"Its almost 20 min you are crying,Whatever is making you cry,leave it.If can't give you happiness that thing is not worth for your life."And manik was going to hug her back when finally Nandini senses its not abhi voice, she suddenly pulls herself and was going to run away from there when manik holds her hand and said"You life is small.Dont let your life be ruined in crying,I know you were crying because may be u have been too strong for too long.Now loose yourself and let life treat you with smile."Nandini was listening all this silently.It was all dark,sound of falls was making her silent now.Moon was shining light on both of them.Nandini turn her back to manik face and their eyes locked with each other.They can just see each other eyes in moonlight.Manik was just looking at teary eyes that looks sad,looks like they need love,Manik extends his hand and one tear was rolling down Nandini cheek and manik cleared the tear from her soft skin.Nandini cant say anything,She was just lost in his eyes.His eyes looks like small,cute baby eyes that were too deep to understand.Suddenly breaking this moment Nandini said "Thank you"And runs from there and manik got no time to say anything.Manik just stands over there understanding what just happened !!! .Nandini reach home and when abhi and navya saw nandini condition they didn't say anything but were happy that she is back now.All of them hug each other and went for dinner.

Manik reach the home and was standing in shower and still thinking about Nandini and her beautiful eyes.Cabir knock and asks"Are you coming for dinner or no".Manik went outside and cabir asked "What happen to you!So silent!!Manik said "Nothing,just tired".And all 4 of them went for dinner.

So,for one week they all went to colleges as it was their exams.Nandini and manik didn't talk on dating site.No text or call.Nothing.Abhi and navya were happy that Nandini is coming back to normal life and now she is becoming soft person but still she would maintain her distance from some people.Suddenly in evening Nandini phone beeps.Manik "Hey wasss up,long time no talk.Are you ok".Nandini replied back "Yeah was busy in college stuff and how are you"This start their conversation again.Every morning manik would text her "Good morning angel"And ende her day with "Night baby".Daily they talk a lot through messages.They would talk about family,likes,hobbies,dislikes and all small things.Nandini would feel happy whenever she talks with manik and sometimes she would stay upto late to talk with him.She comes to know manik likes singing and he loves dogs and loves indian food.One night it was so much snow outside and so cold when Nandini and navya were walking to some store to buy something and Nandini was continuously texting to manik.Naya told her"Nanindi put your hands in pockets otherwise you will get frosting on hands and you know it will feel burning.But Nandini didn't listen as maik was leaving for job and after that they would talk next day.She didn't stop so as soon the reach home and Nandini leaves her phone.She start crying as her hands got chilled and were red and she starts feeling burning in them.Navya got scared and said angrily "I told you,but you will not listen to ever" .She hide Nandini hands in blankets and was giving hot massage to them.For 30 min she just did like this when Nandini phone beeps and Nandini was about to grab it when navya grab it and said "I said leave it right now,don't you dare to talk on phone right now.I will have it in my room.you will grab next night."

Navya replied to manik message"Don't disturn her.Because of you she already got frost on her hands and she is leeping now.let her sleep."And she switches off the phone.Otherside manik was at job and he got so stressed seeing the message,he replied back "Hey what happen to her,Is she alright."No reply from other side.Manik got so restless and cant concentrate on job and was cursing himself that he was talking with her in snow also.After 30 min still no reply,he tried to call but phone was switched off.He keep on sending the message but nothing.And worst of all he didn't know anything,not her name,address or anything.Cabir saw manik sitting in corner with phone in his hands.Cabir rushes to him and asks what happen.He told him everything and cabir was worried too because they don't have any information regarding her.Manik just passed whole night like this and he text her as usual in morning "I am so sorry for last night.I was fool to talk with you in such cold condition.I understand last night how it feels when I cant talk with you.I promise from today I will not ever never let anything happen to you.I don't know how will I ever forgive myself but please talk to me. Please.And good morning to you and love you".

Nandini woke up and was searching for her phone when she realizes last night navya took it. She slowly walk into navya room and slowly grab her phone from her bedside and she saw phone was off.As soon she turned on the phone. Her inbox was flooded with messages and missed calls.She got shocked to see all this and then she open her inbox and read every single message from might to morning.She was so surprised reading all of them and most of all she got shocked when she saw "Love you".She don't know what to do becoz she knows she was not ready for all of this again.But the fact she was shocked at that "How some guy who doesn't even know her name ,nothing about her,even they didn't talk or saw each other,he sound so much worried for her.Because before all this happens she always think"People only care for her for her money ,they only love her because of money excepy navya and abhi who was her life."

She just stand there confused when suddenly her phone starts ringing and she saw on screen "HUNGRY MAN".She just panicked and dropped phone on floor And by mistake it was answered.She grab the phone and hold onto her ear and said manik was saying "Hello,is somebody on the line.Hello."She said "Hello"...

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awesome update continue soon
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read all parts in one go
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