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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

oops now the game is getting too interetsing

please do continue
bye sumi

Thank yu so much😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Parth_Advi

Can't wait for next part

Continue soon
awesome part

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: divvi22

Woah!! Full of mystery.. 😉
surprises..
Interestin 👏 👏 ⭐️

Thank yu ..am glad that u r finding it interesting😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prati_25

Wonderful update... looks like Aadya can reveal about Aaliya, can't wait to see what..

loved MANAN convo...
Waiting to read next update..
Thanks for PM:)

Thank yu so much..am glad that u loved it..will continue soon😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

That was great wonderful
But again suspense is not out
Continue soon
It's beautifully written

Thank yu so much...will continue soon..heheh😉😆😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzysehrish

This is going great

Loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. The suspense is killing me!!!
Anyways keep it up!!!
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Here goes the chapter.Happy reading.Ignore the mistakes.Thank you so much for the lovely and wonderful comments and likes.

MaNan FF : "Love Keeps US Together"

~CHAPTER 16~

Nandini started to read from back.She read ALIYA IS..ALIYA IS..Cabir says what Nandini? He snatches the book from her and reads ALIYA IS..ALIYA IS...Navys hits him on head and snatches it and reads ALIYA IS KIDNAPPED !!! FINALLY !!! They completed reading that.Manik shouts what ? She reads ALIYA IS KIDNAPPED !! I saw her being kidnapped by some persons.She is crying so badly and she is being dragged by them.Suddenly someone closed her mouth with some thing and she passed out.They took her in a car and left.I was damn afraid.I don't know what to do at that time.I thought of calling police but till they come these people will leave city too.

I needed to do something.Yes !! I will do this.I will go to space and will say everything to their friends.Maybe they can do something.Yes !! I will.Their friends need to know about this as soon as possible.Feeling sad for Aliya.Ok thats it for today.Bye Good NIght.Navya completed reading the diary of Aadya.Nandini says she wants to say this to me but she got killed.Manik that means somoone from the college know that she is here to tell us.But befor she can tell us someone killed her.Someone from college did this Manik !! Cabir says no one know about Aadya.So it can't be from college.It should be a outsider who knows about Aadya and this thing.He/she might be involved in kidnapping about Aliya so he/she killed her.

Manik says it's confusing man !! Why Aliya got kidnapped.Why ALiya sent goons for Nandini ? Why Nandini is being targetted ? Why ? I just wish we get these answers.Cabir says only Aliya can tell us these answers.But we don't know where to find her.Nandini says her home.Maybe we can get something form her home.Navya says yeah !! Maybe she left something for s to find her/Maybe a clue.Manik says but right now police will be there around the periphery.We need to wait till night to go there.Cabir says I agree with Manik.We should wait.Manik is thinking how Aliya is connected with all these things.Why everything is pointing out to Aliya ? Aliya ? Who is Aliya ? Need to find that out.

Manik called his PA and asked him to find out about Aliya Saxena ASAP.Who is she ? WHat is her back ground ? Is she related to me in anyway or to my parents? I want every goddamn detail about her.Just mail me everything that you find out.His PA replied yes sir !! It will take some time sir .Manik says I want it by tonight.Nandini calls him Manik !! Yeah Nandini am coming.Nandini talked to her parents in mean while.Manik comes down and asks her what ? Nandini just says wanted to see you.Manik smiles and sits beside her.Cabir and Navya are sitiing beside each other.Navya asks Manik so you and Nandini are best friends ? Nandini says higging Manik from side wards from childhood.Best best friends.She sees him and their eyes get locked.

Navya and Cabir smiles seeing them . Cabir says to Navya they are just "BEST FRIENDS'.Navya says yeah "BEST FRIENDS'.They both laugh disturbing their eye lock.Manik asks why are you both laughing like insane people ? Cabir says nothing "BESTFRIENDS".Cabir says am hungry.Manik says me too.Nandini and Navya says we will prepare lunch.They both go to kitchen.They both prepare the lunch while the boys join them .The boys sat on the slab.Navya says why don't you help us.Youare sitting there like rocks.Madhubala ji we will help you na,we will help you in eating your dishes.Manik saya yeah !! We will help you in eating 100%.Stop it you both Nandini shouted.

Navya is cutting onions and tears are flowing.She is finding it difficult to wipe them and Cabir watches that and he goes to her and takes a napkin and wipes her tears.Nandini and Manik watch this and they are in shock but smile later.Manik coughs ahem ahem.Cabir quickly wipes them and comes and sit.Manik asks what ? Cabir says what ? Manik signals through his eyes to Navya.Cabir says nothing.Nandini asks Navya and she says nothing.MaNan together says Ohh NOTHING !! They both laugh.Stop it you both.Cabir and Navya said together.Cavya eye lock again.Manik sings Pehla Nasha Pehla Kumar..Nandini sings Naya pyaar hain naya intezaar.

The eyelock gets broken.Cabir runs after Manik.Manik is laughing.Here Nandini is laughing while preparing the lunch.Navya is blushing hard.They prepare lunch.They all have lunch making fun of each other,pulling each other's legs.They have fun for some time.They all decide to watch a movie.They all sit . Nandini is in between Cabir and Manik.Navya is beside Cabir. Manik move towards Nandini and wraps his arm around her and Nandini places her head on his shoulder and her hand on his chest. Suddenly some horror scene comes and Navya is eating all the pop corn in tension without giving to Cabir and Nandini hides her head in Manik's neck.Manik's breath hitched.Her breathis touching Manik's neck.This proximity is killing him.

Suddenly Nandini realises how close she is and she lifts her head and her eyes meets him.Cabir sees it and signals Navya and Navya says our turn.Cabir sings

Jo pehle huwa na..
AB hone laga hain..
DIl humko jakakar kyun sone laga hain...
Yeh ishq hain ya kuch aur hain..
Ya bas khaali khaali shor hain...(2)
Ohhh Isko main kya kahun...Tu hi bata..Tu hi bata...
ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON..?
ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON ?
ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON ?...[Navya and Cabir sing the last three lines]

MaNan blush listening the song.Manik asks what ? Cabir says what ?Now Manik is after Cabir.Nandini is like blushing and thinking love ? Love with Manik ? No I don't think so.Navya comes to her and aks what are you thinking ?Nandini says nothing.She smiles.Boys too come.Manik syas I guess we should leave to Aliya's house.Cabir says let's wait for some more time until it's completely dark.Nandini says yeah !! Cabir is right.Navya says till then let's fresh up.But I don't have clothes.Cabir says wear Nandini clothes.Nandini smiles and says yeah !! Navya saya ok.They all go to fresh up.

BOYS ROOM.

Cabir saya what is between you and Nandini Manik ? Manik is startled by the question.He sees him and says what ? What are you talking about ? Cabir says don't act smart Manik.You know what am talking about ? Manik says you don't know that am already smart.He winks at Cabir.Navya shouts are you both girls or what ? This much time for getting ready ? Like seriously ? Cabir comes out and says what madhubala ji ?Navya says why are you tsking this much time ?What are you doing ? Cabir says you want to know what we are doing ? Navya senses his teasy tone and says I don't want to...Know..Bye..She runs to down.Cabir laughs.

Manik comes out and sees him laughing and he asks what happened ? Woh Navya ...Manik raises his brow and says OHooo Navya...Eh ? Cabir hits him and says nothing like that now come.They both go down and all leave to Aliya's house.They try to open the door but it is locked.Cabir says Manik !! Last time when we came the door was not locked but now it is locked.That means someone came here before us.Manik says yeah !! They sneak into the house through windows.Manik says wear the gloves and they search the house.They are not getting any damn clue.They all assemble again in living room saying nothing.Manik gets call from his PA.He says I mailed you sir about all the information which I could get.

Nandini asks whose call it is ? Manik says my PA ? Cabir asks why did you call him ? Manik says to find out about Aliya.Navya says so what did he say ? Anything which is useful to us ? Manik says he mailed me .So need to check out.They grab Aliya's laptop.Manik opens his mail.They open his inbox and opens the message.Everyone is shocked ...

~The Game Has Just Started~

To be Continued...😆🤣

Next Chapter : CHAPTER 17
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Love,
Harika..Keep smiling..it looks good on you.
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res😉

ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON..?
like seriously?????😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update continue soon thanks for the pm

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