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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

MaNan FF : Love Keeps US Together


~CHAPTER 19~


Everyone nodded and left for college.Manik entered the college.Dhruv came and hugged him and wished him saying Happy Birthday.He hugged him back and says Thank you buddy.Dhruv says sorry about yesterday.Mani cuts him off and saysarey it's ok yar.No problem.I understand.Manik says I guess today also we won't have any classes as the case is still running.Cabir says true.Chal we will go to canteen and chill out.Mukti says yeah !! Today bill will be paid by Manik.She winks at Cabir.

Navya says that's great .Then today I will eat to my fullest.Nandini is just quiet just observing everything.Manik says ok ok fine My party.They all head to Canteen.Manik pulls Nandini aside when everyone is busy with their own works.Nandini is confused and asks what are you doing Manik ? Manik asks what happened ? Why are you so silent ? Nandini says nothing.You are just thinking too much.Now come or else they will come and think something else.She starts to go but Manik pulls her and asks what they will think ? He asks innocently.

Nandini says how would ...I...know ? She stammers. Manik says you were sayig right ? They will think something else ? What they will think ? Nandini says Manik leave me na.Let go of me.Manik says answer my question then I will let go of you.He whispers in her ear huskily.Nandini is feeling different.She don't know what the feeling is ? BUt she is loving it.She says Cabir.Manik leaves her and she runs and she tunrs back and says You are a fool.Manik smiles seeing how she fooled him and he joins other memebers.

They all eat and make fun of each other.Manik is thinking about yesterday.He clearly know what Nandini was thinking.He did all the teasing think only to make her forget about it for sometime.She is suffering along with him in this.She only suffered after meeting him.He wished he could do something to wipe all those tears and all those bad memories.She never listens to him.She is so stubborn.She was,she is and she will be.For sometime everyone forgot about what happened yesterday and enjoyed heartfully.Navya excused herself and went to rest room.

Cabir is making fun of Mukti and Manik and Nandini are laughing their hearts out and Mukti is htting everyone.Dhruv is also silently laughing.Navya is coming from wash room when she listened some noises coming from store room.She went and listened and she is shocked to know the truth.SHe just convered her mouth and tears started to roll down.She tried to supress the gasp which is ready to come out.She slowly sneaked out and she started to ran but before she can reach the canteen she was pulled back and she was badly hit by a rod on her head.Cabir!!! She shouted and fell on the ground.Cabir felt someone called him.

There was no one in the corridor as police are still investigating the case.No one could hear her voice.Nandini is thinking why Navya didn't come till now.Mukti come na we will check on her.Mukti says yeah !! I was also thinking the same.They head towards girls rest room.They were talking and they didn't see Navya on the floor and suddenly they saw and they got shock of their life.Nandini shouted NAVYA !!! Manik,Dhruv and Cabir who were following them silently so that they can scare them but got scared listening to Nandini's shout.They ran.

Nandini and Mukti are crying and tapping her cheeks saying Navya !! Navya !! She is in a pool of blood.Manik ,Cabir and Dhruv are just shocked.Cabir took her in his arms and sais Manik !! Manik understood and they both ran towards the car.Remaining are running behind him.They got into the car.Manik drove the car as fast as he can.They reached hospital.She was admitted instantly seeing Manik and Cabir's anger.Cabir's anger is on peaks.He don't know why he is behaving like this.He felt some wet on his cheeks.He saw they are tears.

Manik placed his hand on Cabr's shoulder and Cabir hugged him and said she will be ok na ? Manik says yeah ! she will be.If Madhubala see u crying for her like this then she will faint here only.Cabir smiles between his tears.Listening to Manik everyone smiled.Manik says we need to be strong.Cabir says yeah !! Everyone sat and the nurses are runnign here and there.Nandini and Mukti are crying.Dhruv is comforting Mukti.Manik stands and starts to go saying I'll be back.Nandini sees it and follows him.Manik goes out and sits on a bench.Nandini comes and sits beside him.

Manik just keeps his shouldher on her and says I told you all to stay away from me.Now see what happened to Navya ?It's all because of me.I can't loose anyone more.Am tired of it Nandini.Am just tired of everthing.I feel like it is end Nandini.Nandini cups his face and says it is not the end Manik !!! It didn't happen because of you.Don't blame yurself.please Manik !!! We need to be strong Manik.We need you.If you get tired like this then what will happen to us Manik ?For us,For aunty n uncle and for our friends and for Navya and for aadya who sacrificed her life for us ,you need to be strong .You need to fight Manik.

It's no way Nandini.I don't find anything .Am struck.I don't know where to go and whom to ask.I don;t know who will give me my answers.I don't know how to protect you al and end this thing.End your sorrows and wipe your tears.I don't know anything Nandini !! Am confused and afraid at the same time.I just don;t know what to do.I wish there is someone who can give me some answers and show me the way to end this mystery.Nandini says there will be someone who ca give all your answers.We just need to find who is it.Suddenly it strikes to Nandini !! She says Manik.I know who can give us answers.Let's go.

Precap ?? I won't give na..😆😆😆

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So ? How it is ? I know am late but I can't help it.I have my reasons to be late.Do share your views through comments and don't forget to hit like.Thank yu so much for wonderful likes and comments on the previous chapter.I want to dedicate this chapter to my INSTAGRAM readers.Thank a ton people.

A/N : I have seen so many new readers who are not able to comment as they are new and don't know how to comment?Well new readers you will find a post reply option at the top,just click that,type your comment and post it.[Or] at the bottom of the page you will find a quick reply message box,you can type over there and post too.It's your wish to chosse what.You can comment not only here but also on the FF's which you love to share your views.Thank you.

FOR PM'S LET ME KNOW THROUGH PM/SCRAP/COMMENT.NEW PM LIST WILL BE UPDATED IN NEXT THREAD PROBABLY.

Love,
Harika..Keep smiling..it looks good on you.



Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update didu..
No complains..
Update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok another cliffhanger
not fair
felt bad for navya but she had seen something
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
U...!!!!!!! Agn left us wid a cliffhanger update!!!! My pyaari suspense lover...it ws soo awsm...feeling bad fr navya...hope she'll fine...poor cabir...loved manan...cnt wait fr manik'z answer...wt has struck to nandu?
Update soon n thnxxx fo pm haruu
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hope navya is ok
You love cliffhangers
😆
We love to wait and read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
you r late...😭😭
anyways tanq fa giving us a awesome update...😆
u lov to torture ur readers.. isn't it???? haru
y dear just why???
such a cliffhanger...😲dat to without a precap😲
am gonna die coz of curiosity...oooffuuu...
i just hope dat navya get well soon...
plzzz i beg u plzz update next part ASAP...😉
seems lyk tym to create new thread...🥳congo...🥳
keep writing nd smiling...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was very suspicious & awsm :)
& plz add me :/
Edited by stunning555 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
first of all, i wud say sorry as i wasnt able to read any of ur updatez.. i wasnt well.. infact nw also m weak but nw atlst k cn manage..
secondly, hw was ur result?? well dun tell me here.. i will pm uh.. but only aftr going through ur updatez :) :)
thirdly, thank uh as uh lyk my commentz.. itz lovely to hear dat i make ur day ;) ;) nthng cn b better than dis to hear frm a writer..
nw lastly, abt the update..
i loved dis update..
there r so many emotionz which needz to b get properly showed..
wid alya vanishing, lot of troublez r caused..
nw aftr addya, itz navya.. poor soul.. c is admitted in hospital.. all the so worried.. this showz their frndshp bond..
manan startz to hv feeling foh each other.. they knw but dun wna accpt..
i feel bad foh manik.. he is blaming himslf foh evrythng but datz nt true..
nandini is ryt dat manik needz to b strong foh his frndz.. itz nt his fault dat navya is admitted..
uh alwayz do dis.. dun gv us precap n alwayz end the chap followed by a suspense..
i cnt say continue soon as uh already did dat.. m late.. very late..
bdw yes.. congratz.. i forgot.. itz your new thread..
i knw uh had pm me although i didnt checked.. thank uh foh the pm..
plz continue wid ur beautiful work.. uh r rly an amazing writer..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 5 to 19 are awesome.
Thanks for the PM.

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