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Posted: 10 years ago
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For u Nujhatt specially but also for other who waited so long.
Part 11

Ammi : Nandini so beta how is ur school ? I can see u are surronded by friends.

Nandini smile : Yes ammi all is well. I love this college.

Kabir : So Priya what are u doing here ? I thought that u are family lived in England.

Priya : Yes I want a year of relaxing so I come here. I called Nyonika before coming. Sorry Manik for not contacting you.

Manik doesn't respond. He looks Nandu.

Kabir moves his arm.

Manik : That's ok Priya, I am happy that you are here.

Nandini : Ammi ghar chelo I have a lot of things to share with u.

Ammi : Ok

Nandini's family stand up with Nandini.

Kabir : If u want I can drop u Nandini.

Nandini : Mmm ok.

Kabir : Or app dono I will see u tomorrow.

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Nandini enters in the College. In two days there is Christmas. So all College has decorated in very beautiful way.

Manik is watching her.

Manik : Nandini Nandini so you have still two left to win ur challenge!! Best of luck.

Nandini : I am not in mood, so okay I accept my defeat.

Manik holds her : I don't like to win so easily.

He pecks in her forehead.

Manik : So my cuttie spot girl...

Nandini : Ek minute, how do u know that I am ur sopt?

Manik : Woh mai...

Nandini : Saaf saaf bolo.

Nandini makes him to look at her eyes.

Manik finds an excuse : Kabir bola.

Nandini suspicious : Really ?

Manik : Haan.

By bad luck for Manik, Kabir just makes his entry.

Kabir : Hi dono so what's up ?

Nandini : Did u talk about my surname to ur friend, bro ?

Kabir : No I wished but this time he escaped.

Before Nandini's reaction. Manik runs.

Kabir : Why he is running like an idiot ?

Nandini : Kyu ki my Monster doesn't lost his memory !!!

Kabir shocked : What !!!! Are u serious ?

Nandini : Haan I think he fooled me because I played with his feelings.

Kabir : I will kill this kamini.

Nandini : No bro, I will make him realize his mistake by my way

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Nandini text Fab5 to go home and not practise today. All accepted. She enters in practise room where Manik's waiting.

Nandini : How dare u Manik ?

Manik : Kya ?

Nandini : To ignore me, torture me... How u can play ur game until my tears ?

Manik : What are u saying ?

Nandini : I know Manik that it was all a drama.

Manik stays mute.

Nandini : U don't know what I feel when u stay away for me! It was killing. I prefer to die.

Manik puts his hand on her mouth : Tum pagal hoo kya? Don't say this word.

Nandini : She pushes his hand and grabs his collar : What are u thinking? U can play with feelings.

Manik : Shanto jao.

Nandini : No, I am a looser haan and now I hope u are happy because I am destroyed.

Manik holds her wrists : I was wrong to ignore you. I can't live without. When yesterday u was so break I understood my stupidity act. Forgive me.

Nandini : No

Manik : What ?

Nandini : I don't need u anymore just go away for now and ever. We are poison for each other. We are not mean to be together but apart.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
thanks for update... its really nice...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Finally. U updated thankyou ... Loved it ... Do update soon and little longer 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
php firr se they r fighting no yaar not again... kab sudheringe ye dono baba re...nice update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Nice writing and great pace! Love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
They could have just got together now
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
YOU should upsate
ASAP 😃
How will he get her back
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
plss update soon...we r waiting...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Plzzz update next part plzz

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