Manan OS part 11 (pg 9) - Page 3

What???
manik met with an accident...

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Part 6

Doctor : Who are patient relatives ?
Mukti : His mom will come in some time. I am his friend. How is he now ?
Doctor : I have to do some others tests. But his head suffered a trauma.
Nandini : Can we see him ?
Doctor : but one by one
Mukti and Nandini walks to the room.
Mukti : I think u have to go first.
Nandini : Thank u
Nandini entered in room.
Manik slowly opens his eyes.
Nandini : how do u feel now ?
Manik : App kon ?
Nandini : It's not a joke Manik.
Manik : How do you know my name ?
Nandini : I am ur Nandu.
Manik : Wait wait mere Nandu.
Nandini : Oh my god how he can forget me ?
She yells Mukti name.
Mukti comes : Kya waa Nandini ?
Manik : Mukti who is this girl ?
Mukti : Dude you don't remember her.
Manik : No. Why I have to know her ?
Mukti : Shit he lost his memory.
Manik : Where is my love ? I mean Aliya.
Nandini is devastated.
Mukti : She is outside
Manik : Please call her.
Mukti goes for Aliya.
Dhruv : Kya waa Mukti ?
Mukti : Manik wants to see aliya he lost his memory. He doesn't know Nandini.
Dhruv : What no !!!
Aliya arrives to him room.
Manik : Come baby mere pass.
Aliya hugs him. Nandini runs outside. Dhruv catches her.
Dhruv : Calm down everything will be fine.
Nandini : My Manik forget me. He doesn't remember me. I just wanted to play with him. But I lost him.
Mukti : Don't worry, Dhruv had right you love each other truly. So just be patient.
Dhruv : Come we have to meet doctor.
They enter in his cabin.
Mukti : doctor how much time he willtake to gain his memory back?
Doctor : I don't know.
Dhruv : What ? Are u jocking ? You are doctor, u have to find the solution. If anything happen to Manik u will pay for it.
Doctor : Dekho I do what I can. I am not god.
Nandini : Please doctor save him, I can't live without him.
She goes outside follows by Dhruv and Mukti. Mukti hugs her.
Mukti : Believe in god.
Nandini sobs in Mukti's arm.

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Memory loss awww ... He forgot every one except Alya... Baby Nandini is shattered... Update soon next part:)

Awesome ... loved the story

OMG! 😲NOOO!😭
Poor Nandu- this is not how anyone thought this would go. 😕
Please update soon!😆

Part 7


Manik : Why all behave strangely and who is this Nandini ?
Aliya : Really you don't remember her or you want to take revenge on them.
Manik : What ! And why revenge ?
Aliya : Do you love me ?
Manik : Yes a lot.
Aliya : Really.
Manik : Yes, yaar.
Aliya : When you see this Nandini what effect it makes on you ?
Manik : She seems like a big fool.
Aliya : I have to fresh.
Manik : Ok
Aliya leaves the room.
Dhruv : You are happy naa that he lost his memory ?
Aliya : What ?
Dhruv : Yes like that you can keep him for yourself.
Aliya : Stop it Dhruv, yes I wished to be with him issliye I make you to confess your love for Nandini. If both of you are together, I thought Manik will come back to me. However I was wrong.
For your information he has amnesia. I mean his memory has erased his meeting with Nandini, but I think it is just temporary. Today, I understand after your anger and Nandini tears that he doesn't love me. I never wanted that he had accident. Yet, he hasn't his full memory if Nandini accepts I can help.
Dhruv: Stop ur drama.
Nandini: Dhruv, when Aliya helped you for confession she is a good friend. But when you understood that she also helped u for her satisfaction, she is bad. So if you do that u are also a selfish.
Dhruv: How you can be so kind?
Nandini: Because I born like that. So for me you have to be friend again with Aliya.
Dhruv: Never
He leaves
Aliya: He is right I don't deserve anyone friendship.
Nandini: Everyone has right to have another chance. So can you be with me as a friend?
Can you help me for Manik?
Aliya: Yes of course.
Aliya hugs her.
Nandini: In Fab5, all have a good heart.
She breaks the hug.
Kabir : Hey girls don't forget I am also here. We don't need my help.
Mukti : Of course we need.
Kabir : I am sorry Nandini.
Nandini : Kyu ?
Kabir : For my behaviour
Nandini : I forget.
Kabir : Welcome to Fab5. Will you accept your new friend Kabir ?
Nandini : No way
Three are shocked.
Nandini : I mean I have lot of friend but not a big bro. So will you be my bro ?
Kabir : it's a honour to be your brother. So since this day, I will protect you and cheer up you. I also wished to have a sister yet no. SO thank u. Can I call u Nandu ?
Nandini : No
Kabir : Why ?
Nandini : Nandu it's only for Manik, you can call me Nandi.
Kabir : Ok Nandi, Manik has luck to call you Nandu. Poor of me.
Aliya : Okay, guys I will return. Otherwise, he will be tensed.
Nandini : Ok, go.

OMG is manik really acting or did he actually lose his memory??

Wow I love the concept ! Please continue :)

Part 8

Manik five days back got discharge. He is ready to go for College. He is shocked to see Nandini with fab5 in practise room.

Manik : What the hell ? Why she is here?
Kabir : I will explain you, we think that this group need a fresh air. And after we hear Nandini, she will be our new element.
Manik : Who I am ? No one think to ask me. So I am nothing for this group.
Aliya : Baby please first hear her.
Dhruv is anger to Aliya near Manik. Nandini starts to sing. Manik is mesmirized.
Nandini : Dekho Manik you are the singer of the group so are u afraid that I take ur place or I am better than you.
Manik grabs her hand and make her close to him : Sorry, Miss Nandini but mai Manik Malhotra, I am the best singer in this world.
Nandini : So, why u don't want that I come in this group ?
Manik : To be a member of this group you have to have the audacity ! But when I saw you, u like a fool.
He leaves her.
Nandini : In beginning of our relation you make me a fool with ur team. First U broke my dad pen, after you put Navya on dustbin... but when you saved my brother, the image of monster manik goes away slowly. When you learnt that ur Dhruv, like ur bro love me. You don't think twice or the consequences, you throw me for his happiness. And I swear only such a phenomenal friend like u can do that.
Mukti : Wait Manik saved your brother and issliye we lost.
Nandini : Haan
Mukti sees Manik.
Manik : This girl is lying maybe I can fool her but never be nice.
Nandini : Haccha baba give me three days, if you don't say I love u I will never come again.
Kabir : Say yes like that if she loose you will never see again.
Nandini : But don't forget if I win you have to do something for me.
Manik hesitantly tends his hand. She shakes is hand.
Nandini pecks in his cheek. And runs away. Like Manik all members are shocked.

OOO! I love a good challenge! 😛

Can't wait to see what happens- please do update soon!😉