Manan OS part 11 (pg 9)

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Truth is out 1

Dhruv and Nandini are in practise room.
Dhruv POV : I want to propose you today and I know you love me also.
Dhruv : Nandini can we talk please.
Nandini : Yes sure you can proceed.
Dhruv : I.. I l...
Nandini : Kya bolo yaar ?
Dhruv he takes a deep breath : I love you Nandini.
She was shocked.
Dhruv continu : I really love you. U remember the night after competition. I prepared all the decoration for you and ask u to meet me behind college. But before I proposed you I saw manik, and I said to him about my feelings on you.
Nandini POV : So Monster Manik goes away of me for Dhruv. Now she understands his words, actions...
Dhruv snaps his finger in front of her.
Nandini : You loved me Dhruv issliye you change yourself, isn't it ?
Dhruv : Yah right and all thanks goes to Aliya she helps me.
Nandini POV : For her happiness, Aliya changes Dhruv and encourages him to propose me. Even if it's was selfish she help him in good away.
Nandini : Dhruv, I love you...
Dhruv excited : Really...
Nandini : Please let me finish.
Dhruv : I love you like my best friend. I can't imagine my life without ur friendship. But my heart was already conquered. But I am sure that you will find soon your better half.
Dhruv was so sad. He wants to leave but she catches his hand. She makes him sit with her. She puts her head on his shoulder.
Nandini : I know you are sad but please we can stay friend hai naa ?
Dhruv : Yah sure. I just need sometimes.
Nandini : Ok, I will wait.
She kisses on his cheek.
Before he goes : Waise be who is ur love ?
Nandini : You know him very well.
Dhruv : Harshad ?
Nandini : No he is like my bro.
Dhruv : Kabir is gay so Shahid ?
Nandini : No yaar.
Dhruv : So is Manik.
He bursts out laughing.
Nandini : Why are you laughing ?
Dhruv : How can two enemies love each other ?
Nandini make a puppy face : But it's reality I love him.
Dhruv : Are you serious ?
Nandini : Yes. He rejected me for you.
Dhruv : What do you mean ?
Nandini : When you said you love me, so he decided to sacrifice his love for his Dhruv.
Dhruv was moved.
Dhruv : What I did? Shit !
Nandini : Please Dhruv don't blame yourself.
Dhruv : I am sorry.
Nandini hugs him.
Nandini : Now for ur friendship, will you help me to make manik mine? I will teach him lesson.
Dhruv : Yes Nandini, I will.
He breaks the hug.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one . .. pls continue...
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waiting for the next part
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Ooo nice one plz continue it soon:) Nandini will teach Manik a lesson... Woohoo:)
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Truth is out 2


After their discussion, they leave the practise room for cafeteria. Fab 5 was shocked to see Dhruv and Nandini hand in hand. Manik fumes in anger but when he sees Dhruv's smile he controls himself.
Mukti shouts : Dhruv, what are u doing with loosers like her ? Come naa !
Dhruv : Mukta behaves normally she is my girlfriend.
Mukta, Kabir : What !!!
Dhruv : Yes, I love her. So, you also have to accept her !
Nandini : Chelo can we sit with you ?
Before the reaction they sit.
Nandini beside Manik.
Dhruv : what do u drink ?
Nandini What do u want baby just we have to drink on same cup.
Manik can't believe his earsP.
Dhruv goes to take drink.
Nandini sees that Manik glares her.
Dhruv come back. Nandini drink with her pink lips. And gives half to Dhruv. He drinks also. Manik fumes in jealousy. He stands up and he is about to leave when Nandini kisses Dhruv's cheek. Dhruv blushes.
Manik takes Nandini's hand : What are u doing yaar ? What's wrong with u ?
Nandini : What is your problem ?
Aliya : Haan Manik why are you reacting like that ?
Manik thinks I give my Nandu to him and now when they are together I can't bear it.
Manik leaves.
Nandini : Dhruv I have to go washroom I will meet you later.
Dhruv nods.
Nandini follows Manik in toilet.
Nandini : So Monster Manik how is my boyfriend ?
Manik : Before that he is ur boyfriend, he is my bestfriend.
Nandini : Whatever. You remember our kiss Manik.
Manik was disturbed by her question.
Nandini : It's not a pb if you forget. And I have to say that between you and Dhruv, the best kisser is Dhruv.
Manik POV : How can she kisses him ? She lost it, her lips is mine, her body is mine, her love is mine... Nandini is mine.
Nandini : Thank u, Monster Manik to proove that you are not good for me because Dhruv is my prince charming.
Manik can't control anymore, he grabs her.
Manik : Why are u telling about ur stupid love ? I don't care about u. SO, leave before I will do something wrong.
Nandini : Manik, Manik I will return all my pain slowly.
She pushes him and goes.
Manik has tears. Himself : how can she forget me like that ? How can she tortures me like that ?
Nandini POV : I want just to proove you Manik that I am not a thing that you can let for your bestfriend happiness. I have too a heart. And you broke it, I know you did this for ur friendship but I am ur love. And I will come back after your confession.
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part 3


Nandini comes back to dhruv and asks him to come with her.
Dhruv : Kya waa ? Bolo
Nandini : Ur friend fumes in anger. But he has to understand that sacrifising it's a good but not to sacrifice feelings.
Dhruv : So, what is next our step ?
Nandini : Our official couple dinner.
Dhruv : What do u mean ?
Nandini : Don't worry, u will understand, first ask ur Manik to loan his house for a dinner at 8 p.m.
Dhruv : Ok
Dhruv sends him a text and Manik agrees.
Nandini : And ask him to come with Aliya.
Dhruv : Are u sure ?
Nandini : Yes dude. And I will call some other persons. See u tonight.
In night, Nandini comes first, Manik thinks she is so hot. She is wearing a black short dress. And she has curly hair.
Nandini : Hi monster Manik do u see my love ?
Manik : He doesn't come still.
Nandini : Oh, so I will wait for him in hall.
Aliya comes and kisses Manik's cheek. Nandini is ill-at-ease. Manik remarks it. So he continues he hugs her tightly and he is about to peck her. But Dhruv comes and shakes him.
Dhruv : Sorry dude.
And he hugs Nandini so Manik drops Aliya.
Aliya : ouch Manik you can't be careful.
Manik : Sorry my love.
He makes her stand.
Nandini : My all guests will come in some time.
Kabir, Raghav, Mukti, Navya and Harshad come.
Nandini : Thank u all to come. I invite all of you to share our happiness, Because Dhruv and me find the truth love.
Dhruv : so come on, we will start the dinner.
Dhruv goes to bathroom so in this gap Manik sits beside Nandini.
Nandini : What are u doing here ?
Manik : excuse me it's my house.
Nandini : oh thank u for reminding me.
Dhruv : it's not a pb like that I can see ur eyes.
All eats, Manik caresses her foot. She is shocked. She falls her fork. And she pinches Manik. But when she sits Manik under the table catches her hand.
Dhruv : Why Nandini you eat by left hand ?
Nandini : Because...
Manik : Haaan haaan bolo.
Nandini : I hurt my right hand. Ok, I finish.
Nandini will wash her hand and she follows by Manik. Manik instead of wiping his hand on towel he uses Nandini back. Nandini is going crazy with his touch.
Manik : Kaisa laga ?
Nandini : Let me Monster Manik.
Manik : but why ?
Nandini : Because I am ur friend's girlfriend, not yours. Do u remember ?
Manil leaves her suddenly. But she holds his hand and make him turn. Slowly she puts her hand on his chest.
Nandini : Why do u flee ? U have to assume ur decision.
Manik : Go away.
Nandini : You know Monster Manik tonight I want to pass a night with dhruv.
Manik becomes anger : What tum or Dhruv ? Are u mad ? I think u are a traditional girl ?
Nandini : Dekho I am not sister to control my desires. So just give some tips to Dhruv and give us ur room for tonight.
Manik Pov : I think she is not Nandini. How can she thinks to be so closed with others boys ?
Manik : You can't do it.
Nandini : But why ?
Manik : Because...
Nandini : Mmm bolo.
Manik before thinks twice he captires her lips. Nandini doesn't move. He puts his finger on her hair.
He lets her.
Manik : This lips are mine don't even dare to share lips with someone else.
He goes from here. While Nandini is in the clouds.

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Edited by 8seetha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good nandu is making manik mad. poor manik. update soon.
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Cute! i love bold Nandu.. please continue!😃
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Wow...superb update...why didnt u update nxt quickly?????
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Dhruv comes outside to Manik.
Dhruv : Hi, dude.
Manik hugs him.
Dhruv : Can I ask u something ?
Manik : Hmmm bolo
Dhruv : Did u do this ?
Manik : Kya yaar ?
Dhruv : I mean you, Aliya and you did u ? Yaar.
Manik sees him : Are u mad Dhruv to ask such a question ?
Dhruv : please bolo naa. Nandini and me have a plan to share our romantic night tonight in your home.
Manik POV : Oh my god she didn't lie. She is ready to pass the next step with Dhruv.
Dhruv gives him a punch : What are u thinking ?
Manik : Dekho Dhruv you can't do that.
Dhruv : But why ? You know she talks about it first !
Manik : It's not correct to do this before wedding.
Dhruv : Are u kidding ? We are in 21st century and u spoke like a old person.
Manik : First make ur relation in next step.
Dhruv : What u think about SHAADI ?
Manik : Haan.
Dhruv : I am not ready for that and I can't wait until suhagraat.
Manik POV : What's wrong with them ? Maybe they drugs together.
Manik : I never do that.
Dhruv : Really ?
Manik : Yes
Dhruv: Oh sad. I will share my experience tomorrow. Can you buy candoms for me?
Manik : Never, even in your dreams. And don't even dare to touch her.
Dhruv : Eh excuse me she is my girlfriend I can do everything with her consent your not her bro.
Manik catches his vest.
Manik : If you do this next step you will loose me forever.
He leaves him and steps out.


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