Manan OS part 11 (pg 9) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 Superb... Poor boy but the ending was sweet :)

Part 4 omg kya tha yeh... Dhruv and Nandini are crazy... Aww my Manik kita bura laga usko ... Nahiii... But waiting for next part...
Edited by nicky13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good ,,, plz cont.
Edited by babita_14388 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
god poor manik he is going to explode. update soon. cnt w8 to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nandini joins Dhruv.
Nandini : My Manik will think that we are mad.
Dhruv : But I don't understand why we talk about intimacy between us ! It's not fair.
Nandini : Look at me Dhruv, when Manik said me he played with my feelings for this stupid competition. When he pretented to have broke up with Aliya while that it's false. I can maybe forgive all these actions but give me to you. It's unforgivable.
Dhruv : Dekho Nandini, I can understand but if u continue ur dirty plans you can loose him forever.
Her phone rings. It is Manik call.
Nandini : Oh it's my Monster Manik.
She attends the call.
Nandini : Kya waa Manik, dekho I can do anything Dhruv ke saath.
Man : Excuse me the owner of this phone had an accident ! Please come to city hospital soon.
Nandini cries : No kya waa Manik koo ? He is fine naa.
Man : Please come fast I will go to hospital with him.
Nandini grabs Dhruv.
Dhruv fends her : what happened ?
Nandini : Woh Manniiik ?... MANIK ka accident ?
Dhruv : Kya noo ! Sab mere galti hai.
Nandini : No mere hai. I wanted to give him lesson. First we have to go for hospital. Inform our friends.
They leave the house in hurry. And go until the hospital.
Nandini : Mum, Where is Manik Malhotra ? How he is ?
Hostess : Madam he is in ICU for more details please ask Doctor.
Nandini runs in ICU.
Doctor : Make her leave the ICU.
Nurse : Please come outside.
Nurse takes her.
Nurse : Please just let us do our work.
Nandini : Manik ko kya waa ?
Man : Excuse me I will explain. I am Abi. Thirty minutes ago, I saw ur friend driving with bottle. He banged with a tree. So, I take him here.
Nandini : My god he drank. What I did. Please Ayyappa save him. I can't live without him.
Man : Don't worry our Ayyappa is very powerful he will help ur friend.
Aliya comes to hospital.
Aliya : How is Manik ?
Dhruv : He is in ICU.
Aliya : It's all because of her. I hate you Nandini.
Dhruv : Stop it Aliya.
Aliya : Why, because she is your girlfriend. She is a looser. And u know Nandini Moorty I don't regret to send you boys.
Dhruv : Just leave her Aliya.
Aliya : I think you don't deserve Manik but also Dhruv. Because you are unlucky person. First u lost ur parents, after ur bro become sick and now my Manik is in hospital. So get lost form here.
Dhruv : Just shut up aliya, how you can be so selfish.
Aliya : Dhruv.
Dhruv : Haan, first you sent boys after you used me. And now u dare to blame Nandini for all these.
Aliya : How do u know ?
Dhruv : What do u think that just Manik will speak in bad manners with Nandini, she will forget him and run to me ? It's wrong, because their love is pure.
Dhruv drags her outside.


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nara26 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊 😊
Edited by nara26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
😊 very nice tnx for part 5
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
WOW!😲 That is unexpected.🤣
Poor Manik, what is he going to do?😆
Loved the ending, can't wait for the next part...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Manik had an accident. hope he is okay.
How can Aliya be so mean?
I mean I understand she is in love with Manik but that doesn't mean that she should disrespect someone else right.
I loved Dhruv in the whole update..
He was so supportive..
hope Manik will be okay..
Continue Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww Manik had an accident... Oh god... But Alya is sick why she is blaming Nandini... Plz continue soon... Thanks for the update:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
god manik hd an accident;-( . plz cont asap. seriously this is nt r8 u cant be this good;-) loved d update.

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