Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
i totally loved it re... Lovely ending.. Plz ek epilogue chahiye meko... Keep writing... God bless
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Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
i totally loved it re... Lovely ending.. Plz ek epilogue chahiye meko... Keep writing... God bless
Awsum
finally swayam ki mom ne swayam ko 4gv kiya
bichare rey ko shock laga TaSha ka plan sunkar
n bst part of last part is SwaRon r 2ghtr n. 4ever
last chp :-( bt plz ani write EPILOGUE
Originally posted by: trisha19
Awesome ending!! I enjoyed this FF so much...loved it totally!
You are really an amazing writer...keep it up!! 👏Please post the epilogue soon...I am waiting!!
Originally posted by: aneesha93
It was Swayam's mom who was back! All the conversations, Swayam's hesitation to face his mom, them surprising him on his birthday (although it was not really a surprise), Swayam's mom forgiving him, cake feeding, and finally the Swaron moments😳. Again, wonderfully penned😛. Am at loss of words to describe how beautiful this was.
So, finally, this FF is ending😭.😭 This was one of my favorite Swaron FF's. I will miss it beyond words can describe😭😭😭.Thanks for writing this FF and showing us a different shade of Swaron. Really enjoyed this FF.Please do write an epilogue.Thanks for the pm. Keep writing
Beautiful update
Swayam's birthday and how he overheard them when they were planning for his birthday😛So its the last chapter..although small but completely worthyWill miss this ff so muchIt was one of the best concepts i hv read👏An epilogue is a must!!ps: plz update beyond comm.😊
I loved the title..ya somethings do last forever❤️
Loved the whole update..
Finally all is well
Loved last swaron part..it was cute
Bt why last part :-(
Plz write an epilogue
Last update.. But an awesome update.😊The whole update was awesome from Start to end.😊I agree that u dint stretched it, or else you might lose the essence of story..😊Anyhoo, All well that ends well.. And with happy Ending of Swaron, All is well... 😃If you can manage please give an epilogue of this ,it will be great. 😊Keep writing! 😊Thanks for PM.😊-Shivani😊
Originally posted by: 3sisters
Sorry for late comment but don't know but my account was not working for some days ending was superb but it's ending will miss it thanks for the pm
EPILOGUE
Swayam came back from office and dumped himself on the couch...
"swayam beta kuch chahiye kya???" kaka came and gave him a mug of coffee...
"haa kaka... ek head ache ka pill dena..." He managed to open his eyes and reply back...
"you smell sooo good..." swayam felt someone hugging his legs... he immediately opened his eyes and picked up his daughter ananya in his arms who was struggling to climb on the couch...
"so little fairy!!! Did you miss papa????" he cooed into her nose and pinched her cheeks...
"bohut zyada papa...aap itne late kyun ho gaye... mujhe park jana than a aap k saath..." She pouted and swayam removed the hairs from her cheeks...
"kal Sunday haina?? Papa will stay at home... rey chachu and pia will come here and chachu little fairy aur papa park jayenge... All right????" ananya used to call taani pia and rey chachu...
Sharon came and sat beside him on the couch leaning on his shoulder as swayam turned to kiss her hair softly...
"swayam...pls itna kaam mat karo.. tumhari beti mujhe pura din pareshan karti hai..." she complained and swayam winked at ananya...
As the three of them started having their own little fun , swayam's head ache pill was left untouched on the table...
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"anu... Come here right now and drink the milk..." Sharon was tired running behind naughty ananya throughout the lounge to make her drink the milk after dinner...
"mamma... Mujhe nahi peenee... Milky is bad..." She made a face and slipped out of sharon's hand immediately...
"swayam... Isse bolo milk finish kare..." Sharon glared at swayam... swayam took the milk and picked ananya up in his arms and went to the kitchen... he made her sit on the kitchen cabinet and opened the shelf to take out a sqeezer of chocolate sauce... He drew a smiley over the milk and gave it to ananya who drank it up in a giffy...
"good girl..." He picked her up and tucked her into the bed...
"finally ..." Sharon huffed in relief as ananya fell asleep ...
"now its our time..." Swayam came and picked her up in his arms moving to the room...
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Sunday meant funday for all of them... as soon as rey and taani came over to their place the atmosphere changed...
"chachu mujhe park jana hai...abhi!!!!!" ananya started throwing her tantrums...
"haa chalte hai na park mein...anything for little fairy..." She was chachu's dotting niece...
"tabtak..mamma and pia will make choco pie for you..." Taani kissed her cheeks...
After almost a couple of hours swayam ananya and rey returned from the park...
"mamma pata hai...aaj humne pegions ko khilae... then swing pe baithe... Boating bhi ki... and even I drove the car..." ananya jumped over to Sharon as soon as they came home and swayam and rey literally facepalmed as she said the last thing...
"KYA????? Drove a car???? Matlab?????" Sharon was horrified... while coming back from the park as swayam was driving while rey sat with ananya on his lap in the passenger seat... ananya suddenly had an urge to drive the car... swayam and rey tried to diverge her but being ananya , her demand slowly turned into fat tear drops knowing both her papa and chachu would compile anything if she cried... so swayam made ananya sit on his lap and drove the car for some minutes convincing her somehow that she was driving it... Latter they told ananya not to tell Sharon or taani anything but this naughty bundle couldn't keep any secret...
"matlab maine papa ki gari chalayi... wo gol goll wheel hai na seat ke samne...usko bhi hilaya..." she said with a lot of excitement...
"andar jake cartoon dekho tum..." Sharon sent her in and towards rey and swayam...
"kya bol rahi hai ye????" she pounced on them...
"array abba...pagal ho kya.??? How will she drive...3 yrs ki hai... zidd kar rahi thi to made her sit on my lap..." Swayam hugged her to calm her down but Sharon shrugged away...
"aur steering???" she glared at him...
"teri biwi sach mein thodi dheeli hai...you really think 3 saal ki bacchi steering kaise ghumaigi..." Rey and swayam laughed...
"par drive karte vakt lap pe bithana kuch bhi ho sakta tha.,..." taani was also worried...
"achha babah galti ho gayi..." swayam exasperated...
They spent the entire day together laughing and having their own share of fun... After dinner taani and rey left for their home while swayam tucked ananya into the bed...
Swayam came to their bed room to find Sharon looking outside the window... he slowly came and hugged her from behind...
"kya hua ?? kya soch rahi ho..." He whispered showering kisses on her ear...
"yehi ki duniya k saare pagal mere hi ghar pe kaise aa gaye..." She giggled and swayam glared at her... she leaned onto his chest both looking at the starry night sky...
"I love you..." He whispered... " I know..." She whispered back...
PS: it was my fantasy as a kid to drive... although i have a dotting papa but he was not as dotting as swayam to let me drive...😆😆
so i just love this idea and even wrote it before on another couple...
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