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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Hiii nice story
Really intresting
Agar ye riya nhi h to koi new character h
Plzzupdt
N do pm me wenever u updt
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
ye ladki riya nahi he..??
toh kyon he yaar,..??
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
As i promised Satrishi di ne update diya so i am also updating. Paas mein cyber cafe tha😆
Part 4
Agla din in ETF office
All are in office chatting samjun are in cabin. Kunaal inki tarah hi hai😆
Shree:Arre Chotu kal tujhe maza aaya hoga ladki ke haath se bheegne mein kyoon😉
Chotu is still angry from yesterday aur shree ki teasing. Chotu apni ponytail kholne laga.😉
Shree:Are yaar main mazaak kar raha tha
Chotu: Mujhe to abhi bhi uus ladki pe guss aa raha hai😡
Saakshi:Pata nahi ladki kaha se thi. Uski itni himmat ki ETF officers se aaise baat kare aur chotu par paani bhi daaal diya😡 [😉 ab apne pyaar pe kharoch sorry paani bhi gir jaaye to gussa to aayega]
Aayesha:Jo bhi o guys lekin ladki mein dum tha.
Others:Haa
Kunaal:Aur dikhne mein khoobsurat bhi lag rahi thi
Others(Unconciously):Haa...(In sense aaker)What!
Kunaal:I mean..I..
At that time samjun came
All:Good morning sir
Rathod:Good morning
Arjun:Shree uus ladki ke baare mein information nikaalne ko bola tha koi information mili?
Shree:No sir .Uska koi record nahi hai.
Arjun:Chotu Aayesha
Chotu:Sir hame kuch informers se pata laga hai ki wo recently about 6-7 maheene pahele hi nazar mein aayi hai
Aayesha:Wo zyaadatar raat mein dikhi hai
Saakshi:Mujhe mere kuch informers se pata chala hai ki iska chehra kisine nahi dekha
Rathod:Damn it. Iska matlab usko koi nahi jaanta ab ham iss ladki ko kaise pakdeke
All are thinking
Tabhi rathod ka cell bajne laga
Galti se phone loudspeaker pe lag gaya
Rathod:Jai hind sir
Commisioner:Jai hind. Rathod aaj tum logo ko ek nayi ladki join karegi.Wo kuch hi der mein waha pahoch rahi hogi.
Tabhi door knocking
Rathod:Yes sir. Lagta hai aagayi
Commisioner:Alright.Ab main rakhta hoo.Jai hind.
Rathod:Jai hind
Rathod:Come in
Darwaaza khulte hi sab shocked. Jis ladki ke baare mein subha se soch rahe thhe wo saamne khadi thi to aaisa hi hoga na😆
Sab ek dum apni gun utha ke khade ho gaye
Ladki ne apne haath uuper kar liye.Ladki ne full sleev black dress paheini hai aur neeche jaisa Bellatrix[bola tha na Harry Potter ka gyan hona chahiye] ki dress hoti hai waise with black leggings with bilkul pahele waale jaisa upper face cover black mask.[Yaar jo bhi kapde ho even mask ho fir bhi wo hi hai samajh aata haio😆]
Chotu:Tum yaha! Aaj hamse kaise bachogi😡
Ladki:Arre calm down. Guns neeche karo aaj nahi bhagoongi. Waise bhi agar bhagna hota to main yaha kyoon aati
Hearing this all were thinking about this yet they did not lower there gun(Kal ki mistake se seekh gaye bacche😉Good students😆)
Rathod:Tum yaha kya kar rahi hoo
Ladki:Aaj main aap logo se bachne nahi aayi aap logo ke saath kaam karne aayi hoo
She handed him a letter.
Rathod: So wo tum ho jo hame join kar rahi hai!
All except Arjun:What😲(Kunaal thoda khushi se😉)
Arjun was also shocked but did not show much reaction[Well aadat padh gayi waise bhi riya aur aayesha se mulakat ke baad aaise shocks ki aadat padh jaati hai]
Rathod:What is your name aur tumne abhi bhi apna mask kyoon pahen rakha hai. Tumhare joining letter mein tumhaara naam bhi nahi likha[I don,t know if that is possible but for story]
Ladki:Mera naam pata sab secret rahega jab tak main rakhna chahoo sir lekin aap mujhe KP bula sakte hai
Rathod:Your speciality
KP:Meri koi speciality nahi hai(all were confused) Commisioner sir ne mujhe xternal Help"ke liye bheja hai(the gang except the acps' were cursing the commisioner)
Arjun:Hamaari team ko external help ki kya zaroorat
KP:Ye mujhe kya pata aap Commisioner se puchiye
KP:Sorry sir (looking at Sameer) maine apna saara gussa aap par nikaal diya. Kal aap ki colleague juice pii leti to gadbad ho jaati aur uski jaan bhi chali jaati aur kal main thodi sad bhi thi so maine galti se aap dono ko ulta seedha keh diya.Sorry sir(looking at samjun she gave a dimpled smile which would have rivalled Riya's)
Both were shocked especially Arjun to see that smile and remembered Riya's smile but soon came out of their mind lane
Rathod:Ok Make yourself comfortable your cabin would be ready by tomorrow
KP:Thank you sir
Sam went away and Arjun also went away without replying
She turns towards the others.(Uski smile Choree ne nahi dekhi)
KP extends her hand for shake saying hi to chotu but chotu does not respond
KP holding her ears:Please sorry yaar kal mujhe apna mission pura karke jaldi ghar jaana tha warna meri family chinta karti.Sorry(Dimple smile)
Choree were shocked and kept seeing her, kunal was mesmerised and girls were jealous a bit as all their crushes were seeing her like that(arre Rathod bhi uuse dekh raha tha na aur Shriza ki story ko sab jaante hai😉😆)
KP:Guys.Guys to earth.Guys to earth.
All came out of trance
Chotu:Okay maaf kiya mai chotu commander
KP:Itni badi body ke saath itna chota naam😕
Chotu:Nahi mera pura naam Chandrakant Patil hai lekin sab mujhe chotu bulaate hai
Shree:Hi mai Shreekant Sen aka Shree tech expert
Girls also introduced themselves
Kunal:I am Kunal. ETF 3rd in command nice to meet.
They hand shake. They both feel like something got connected between them.
Kunal leaves her hand with a smile while KP is thinking something.
Shree:KP
KP:Haa
Shree:Friends(forwarding his hand)
KP:Always ready.(shaking his hand)(To others)Guys friends.
Others:Friends(Yaar uski smile ka jadoo sab par chal gaya😉)
All kept their hands on KP and Shree's hands and smiled
Everyone started chatting but due to the mask no one was able to see a stray tear running down her cheek which she hastily rubbed
Agla update fir kabhi time mila to dungi
Good news mera admission ache school mein ho gaya🥳
Anyone who wants PM must and i again say must Buddy me
Part 5
Edited by BubliBag - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Congrats for the admission... 👏
Awesome update..
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Awesome update
Loved it
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

And Congrats for the admission
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Congrats for admission
Superb update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Wowww😃
That was a good part
I still feel that she is Riya
But what about her and Kunal???😕

No name and always mask...that is kind of shocking😕
They all became friends 😃
Well loved it
Do conti soon
Thanks for pm

Congratulations😊 for your admission
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Congo 4 ur admission... 🤗
Gr8 update..
Tht girl join ETF...
No name & mask...
Kuch to baat hai...!!!
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
awesome
loved it
waiting for riya
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
oye hoye bubli congo first
for admission in good school
voh toh hona hi tha as you said you always got A1 in studies
but tumne abhi bhi iss mask girl ki mystery reveal nhi ki
and why tears were coming down her eyes after becoming friends with everyone
and no one notice this
and wht does kp stands for
and why her dressing sense is like harry potter
and how she is related with riya
so , many ques aur solution ka pta
hume nhi tumhe hai
so update the next part soon
so hume bhi solution mil jaye
and plss make riya's entry soon
arjun aur hume itna bhi mat tarpao

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