Ariya ff : Magical Pyaar

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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Posted: 10 years ago

Mai kayi dinoo se iss story ke bare mein soch rahi thi😊

I am greatly inspired by reading the stories of Satrishi, Megha and Ariyabestfriend Didus 😃

This ff is started on their conformity so jitni gaaliyan milegi wo inke saath bhi share karna😆

Iss story mein maine Harry potter ka female version ghusaaya hai

So thoda bohot Harry Potter ka gyan hoga to accha hoga😆

So here i present

MAGICAL PYAAR

Xora case ke 9 months baad ki baat hai

ETF mein sab hai Ayesha ,Liza,Saakshi ,choree and samjun

Bus kami ek insaan ki hai

ETF ki paheli ladki

Shree ki best friend

Chotu ki little sister

Rathod ki best student

Aur Arjun ke liye ...

Ek aaisi ladki jiske saath Roshni ke baad paheli baar dhang se baat ki

Jiski ek smile uski thakan door kar deti thi

Jiske saath pyaar par apne views share kiye

Jisko paheli baar goli chalane aur kisi ki jaan lene ke guilt se bahaar nikaala

Jiske Thank you ka jawaab diya

Jisne Arjun Suryakant Rawte ko galat saabit kiya

Jisne uska dil jeet liya

Jisse wo ...pyar karne laga tha

RIYA

Aaj bhi wo charo kabhi Riya ko bhool nahi paaye

Aaj Riya ka birthday tha

Chaaro uski yaad mein doobe the

Teeno girls kaam aur chit chat mein busy thi to kisine notice nahi kya

Achanak phone ringing se sab log khayalo se waapas aaye

Commisioner ka phone

Rathod:Jai hind sir

Commisioner:...

Rathod: Ok sir Jai hind

Saakshi :Kya hua

Rathod :Aaj ek naya officer join kar raha

Tabhi koi aadmi aaker kehta hai :Can I meet Sameer Rathod

Rathod :yes main hi hoo

Aadmi: Main Kunal Raizada.New joining.Encounter and Undercover Specialist . 3rd in Command of ETF.

Rathod:Oh yes Comm. ne bataya

Rathod Kunal ko sabse milata hai

All except Arjun :Good Morning Sir

Rathod:Abhi tumhaara Cabin ready nahi hai kal tak ho jayega

Kunal:It's okay sir no problem

Rathod:Shree ise office aur kaam dono dikhado

Shree:Yes Sir

Shree office dikhata hai Kunal ko

Kunal:Yaha ek cabin khali. hai Kya main yaha apna cabin bana sakta hoo?

Wo cabin Riya ka hai(Meri story mein office change nahi hua sirf renovate hua tha jisme Riya ka cabin chua bhi nahi gaya tha)

Use dekh kar Shree ko Riya ki yaad aati hai

Iss cabin mein jab Riya ki maut ke baad wo aaya tha to use ek alag sa laga jaise Riya abhi bhi aas paas ho

Wo yaadon mein kho jaata hai

Kunal ke bulaane par waapas aata hai

Kunal:Kaha kho gaye the aur tumne mere question ka jawab nahi diya

Shree :Kuch nahi Sir .Nahi Sir Kuch personal reason ki wajah se ye cabin hum nahi use karte.

Kunal:OK

Case comes

Case kuch gangsters ko involve karta hai

Case mein pata chalta hai ki ek bar mein jo mumbai ke slums ke paas hai waha ek gang jisne Pune mein 1.5 saal pahele bomb blast karaaye the aur jiske saara members par murder charges hai ek party rakhi hai apne boss ke birthday par

Waha undercover mein jaana padega kyoonki aas paas kaafi log rehate hai aur 1 Building baad ek hostel bhi hai

Agar kuch gadbad huyi to bohot problem ho sakta hai

Raat ke 8 baje sab log gundo ki tarah saj dhaj ke waha pahuchte hai

Abhi yaha tak hi ab aapke comments par hi continue karoongi 😊

Pata hai faltu hai lekin agar aap log chahate hai to continue karoongi

And iss story mein Riya zinda hai vo kaise vo baad mein pata chalega😉😈

INDEX-

Part 2- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar?pn=4

Part 3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar?pn=9

Part 4-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/121976904

Part 5-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122101470

Part 6-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar?pn=20

Part 7-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122719222

Part 8-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar?pn=27

Part 9-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/124729715

Part 10-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar?pn=32

Part 11-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar

Part 12-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar

Part 13-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar

Part 14-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar

Part 15-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/4355035/ariya-ff-magical-pyaar

Edited by BubliBag - 8 years ago

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow sear tu tho kamal kardiya hei.

what a start hei.

dear eagerly waiting to read more

cont soon.

PS:mujhse inspire hua...thank u...Lekin late me math hona.

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Anju77

@Anju77

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

nice character
but plzzz make riya character dasu like she is expert in every field.
So samjun should proud on riya.
Continue soon
eagerly waiting for ur next update

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nicronyariya

@nicronyariya

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

bubli ki bachhi

tune stories likhna shuru kar diya aur hume bataya bhi nahi

aur seedha pm deke shock kar diya...😈

waise start toh bahoth dhaasu tareeke se kiya hai

kya baat hai bubli tu toh cha gai yaar😉

wonderful starting👏

all r missing riya...aur ye kunal 3rd in command

sabhi etfians in gunde style

hmmm...intresting

riya jinda hai...toh aur bhi intresting hai

awsme work dear..

cont soon

thanx for pm

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Anjali

@Angel_Arya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome concept

Lady version of Harry Potter 😉

Sounds interesting

Conti soon

And do pm me 😃

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wonderful starting
Loved it very much
New character kunal raizada
3rd hand commander
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Nd thanks for the pm