TR FF~'pal pal dil ke paas~tum rehte ho'(Ch-2 pg 8) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ITIKAAVLANI, vrinda-fan, TAT_VJ, harshita12, pinkytekwani, Taani-Taarey, -LoveTaaRey-, ggd30565, radhikha, Suhanitaarey, Aarti_Taarey, ndcdance, Twinkle_TaaRey, snehac2, riachawlalko, nikkypal, coffeebeans--, sashaTR, anjanankuttu, sneharjun92, zulfinazi, Miss_Anonymous, qwerty012, 0913155, nagutaarey, stutisinghania, umatejesh, angelshah, ANURADHATAAREYS, Gursharn3010, putti_taarey, dakshumhatre, sanyataraiya, CrazyForAmar, prohelikaVD, TR_MN_KR, Visk_Taarey, Nicky-nish, Fairy..., yoyoaishwarya, meenu_taarey, ONLYTAAREY, sanjana.sanju, _Cupid_, princess1926, Jasmine_ash, prtn, vibhaaa, White_Flower, Bista-anzana, sumana.shesha, divi_divyana, -CrazyNiru-, skfirdous, Miss_Sparkles, NidaJavidTaaRey, Mon_tr, Andy_Dynamite, tamanna-azaan, hima_taarey, dh19, Missu_TR, monikasaxena05, shamanbk, princess_tara, cuppypie121, Priyanka.saha, R.sailaja, newmoon18, raddhi, Humzy, Viji.Chandran, ...Natasha..., mishtypiya,


dil se thank you so very much friends for liking my story 😊

ur likes and comments really means a lot to me

only u special readers can force me to write and update by

your likes and heart warming special and precious comments

i just loved all ur comments so very much

(but sorry i will not be replying to any1 in this story because of shortage of time .. i hardly get time to write and update because of health issues , studies and everything , i hope u all will understand and wont stop commenting. i think u all comment for my updates and not for my replies ..😊 so plz keep liking and keep commenting on my story .. trust me only ur likes and comments can force me to write and update otherwise sometimes i even thinking of discontinuing all my stories but ur likes comments and wait force me to write n update )

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Edited by chinudolly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ITIKAAVLANI, vrinda-fan, TAT_VJ, harshita12, pinkytekwani, Taani-Taarey, -LoveTaaRey-, ggd30565, radhikha, Suhanitaarey, Aarti_Taarey, ndcdance, Twinkle_TaaRey, snehac2, riachawlalko, nikkypal, coffeebeans--, sashaTR, anjanankuttu, sneharjun92, zulfinazi, Miss_Anonymous, qwerty012, 0913155, nagutaarey, stutisinghania, umatejesh, angelshah, ANURADHATAAREYS, Gursharn3010, putti_taarey, dakshumhatre, sanyataraiya, CrazyForAmar, prohelikaVD, TR_MN_KR, Visk_Taarey, Nicky-nish, Fairy..., yoyoaishwarya, meenu_taarey, ONLYTAAREY, sanjana.sanju, _Cupid_, princess1926, Jasmine_ash, prtn, vibhaaa, White_Flower, Bista-anzana, sumana.shesha, divi_divyana, -CrazyNiru-, skfirdous, Miss_Sparkles, NidaJavidTaaRey, Mon_tr, Andy_Dynamite, tamanna-azaan, hima_taarey, dh19, Missu_TR, monikasaxena05, shamanbk, princess_tara, cuppypie121, Priyanka.saha, R.sailaja, newmoon18, raddhi, Humzy, Viji.Chandran, ...Natasha..., mishtypiya,

i am heartily thankful for all your likes and comments , you all the best story readers . thank you so very much and special thanks to my sweet dear di (jasmine_ash) who send pms of my story as well 😳 love u a lot di .

well this update is especially for my sweetu buddy (nicky nish ) who is eagerly waiting for its update and its for all you wonderful, special and awesome readers of my stories 🤗

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( ya friends I want to say please don't assume anything about any character , as there are many secrets hidden in this story .. I haven't told you whether pari is taani-vishesh daughter or taarey's daughter or anyone else's . that's a suspense , you will get to know about it later as the story progresses ok so before I reveal anything just don't assume anything ..)

~ Pal pal dil ke paas

~~ tum rehte ho~

chapter 2 ~~ I always forget to forget you ~~

At night

taani and pari came back to their big home , now taani is asking pari to eat food with a plate of food in her hand

taani - pari baby please have food

pari while making a cute pout - no I don't want to eat mumma plz I want to play with my doll..

taani - pari baby please first eat and then play

but pari is pari .. she run away nodding her head in a no and saying - Mumma Catch me if you can now its playing time with my dolly 😛

taani smiled seeing pari's cute antics .

taani kept the plate on dining table and run after pari saying " acchha bachu , apni mumma ko challenge kar rahi ho hmm my naughty pie baby wait I am just coming "

she run after pari in their room and finally she catch her. She hold pari around her belly and lift her up a little and twirl along with her while smiling and making her smile too .😛 😊

then she keep her down and bend down and start tickling her saying " you are being very naughty day by day hmm my naughty pie "

pari was laughing continuously saying " mumma (hehe ) mumma ... (hehe) 😆😆 stop ... stop plz ..😆😆 (hahaha ) plz stop .. stop ...stop 😆😆

😛

finally taani stopped while smiling " kyun ab maza aaya my naughty bachu " saying that she pulled her both cheeks and then kneel down and hugged her tightly as if pari is the only precious thing taani has in life ,and then she break the hug and kissed her both cheeks and then she say while rubbing her nose with pari's " love you a lot my cutie pie naughty baby "

pari smile and give a featherly kiss on taani's cheek

" love you too mumma , come on now let's go and eat food , I am very tired and hungry now "

Taani smile to her saying " when I was saying , my little pari was not hungry at all and now my baby is hungry .. puri ki puri naughty pie hai tu chalo , let's go and have food then we have to sleep also , you have to go to school tomorrow "

Taani feed food to pari while listening her cute talks

And then she made her sleep after telling a beautiful story to her .. then taani kissed pari on her forehead who was sleeping hugging her , covered her properly with quilt .. and then she lie down properly beside her after switching off the bedside lamp. sleep was no where in her eyes even though she was very tired still she try to sleep .

She close her eyes but open her eyes immediately with a jerk as she saw some horrible flashes .. no matter how much she try to forget her past but her past's memories keep haunting her always. Those horrible memories neither let her sleep nor let her live peacefully . she wiped the lone tear that just escaped her eyes breaking her control

she get up slowly after removing pari's little hand which was around her and went to the window .. she stand there quietly watching the shining moon and twinkling stars in the dark sky

but the moon and stars reminded her some beautiful memories of past

~~ on the other hand with rey in flight , strangely he also remembered the same memories when he heard a couple talking who were probably going to their honeymoon .. the boy said to girl " mera chaand to uss chaand se bhi zyada khoobsurat hai " 😳

This line reminded rey of some beautiful moments of his life with his love ~~

*flashback*

during taarey's relationship before rey's fake break up, taani had to leave rey for 2 days as she had to go to some relative's marriage

at night before she was going

in taani's room , taarey are standing near the window and talking

rey - jaan please don't go na . you know na I cant live without you even for a single second

taani - sorry but I have to go rey , please understand na baba and we are always together by our hearts ,

even though we are miles apart but still the bond of our true love will always keep our hearts together.

Rey - I know taani but still I will not be able to see you , you know na my days and nights are incomplete without seeing my lady love . I want to hug you and kiss you everyday

Taani blushes a little 😳 but then say pointing at the moon and stars in the sky " look at the moon and stars rey , see the moon and stars are always with us and watching us from above . that beautiful moon will be watching you and me also always . so if you miss me then look at the moon and think your taani is watching you by that moon and If I will miss you then I will think that my rey is watching me from that moon. Moon will connect both of us no matter where we are .and that moon will pass your love to me and my love to you when we are away from each other ok And stars they are symbol of our true love. They will keep twinkling always with our love "

Rey come forward and says huskily in her ear " par mera chaand to us chaand se bhi kahi zyada khoobsurat hai " saying that he kissed her cheek making her blush hard 😳😳

She hugged him and he also hugged her back and asked " but what about daytime ?"

Taani smiled and replied him " then your heart will tell you that your taani is always close to your heart , aapka dil jismein sirf aapki taani rehti hai vo aapko mere aapke paas hone ka ehsaas dilata rahega hamesha chahe hum kitne he duur kyun na ho ... par abhi mujhe jana hoga rey sorry "

Then she broke the hug & turn to leave but he hold her wrist not wanting her to go .

Taani - reyy please I have to go

Rey then left her wrist and said " ok fine go then"

Taani got sad leaving her love her rey angry and sad . she turned back and went near him and kissed him on his cheek and run away blushing and saying " love you rey and miss you , bye "😳

Rey kept his hand on his cheek where taani kissed him and smiled saying " loving you too jaan love you so very much and miss you too a lot . na jaane ye 2 days tumhare bina kaise guzarenge "

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Taani closed her eyes letting some tears fall from her eyes 😭

" I miss you rey , I miss you so much .

I wish our destiny and our wrong decisions wouldn't have separated us,

I wish if I could see you , I wish if I could meet you at least once

I wish if we could be together always

but more than anything I wish for your happiness

I wish krishna ji keep you safe , healthy and happy always

I wish all your dreams and wishes come true "

~~On the other hand in flight ~~

Rey also wished in heart after reminiscing that flashback

" I wish if taani and rey could be together always forever and ever.

I wish if I could see you , I wish if I could meet you jaan ,

I wish if I could hug you , I wish if I could kiss you

I wish if I could love you, I wish if we could be one

I wish ... I wish ... I wish

But I guess my wishes cant be fulfilled in this lifetime as we both are married to other persons now but plz my taani's krishna ji do fulfill them in all our next lifetimes .

And krishna ji at least you can fulfill my wish of keeping my taani happy always , keep her safe , never let any pain , any problem come close to her , and keep her healthy also as I know she never take care of herself while taking care of others . plz fulfill this wish of mine and fulfill all wishes of my taani "

Unaware of both of them there was a meteorite (tuta hua taara) in the dark sky which heard taani's wishes and rey's wishes too and went to fulfill it. 😳

Both wipe the tears that unwantedly come in their eyes

Taani open her eyes and say to herself slowly (her mind spoke this time) " what was I thinking , how can I even think like that ? I promised myself that I will be strong and I was wishing for rey and his love knowing that love make people weak and nowadays true love don't even exist at least not for me . even if it did exist but now I have lost my true love forever and ever .

No I cant let myself become weak again. I don't want anyone's love because it will make me weak .

... but why do I ALWAYS FORGET TO FORGET YOU REY ??

Whatever it is I just hate love now . now there is no place for love in my life after what vishesh did with me ..(she was about to cry but remind herself again )

Now I wont let my past destroy me anymore.

I am strong , I cant be weak

I have to be strong atleast for pari .

I will show everyone that NIYA SHIKHAWAT IS NOT WEAK . taani was weak but niya shikhawat is strong and can never be weak .

Now there is only pari in my world who is my life and my everything. I have to live and be strong for my pari "

Saying that she went near pari and kissed her forehead and lie down hugging pari . she slept watching her cute little doll sleeping peacefully

~~

On the other hand in flight

Rey say in heart " but now I should forget my taani , my love . I need to move on with ... Ria (his heart want to say taani )

But no matter how much I try I cant forget you taani my jaan my love . . . I ALWAYS FORGET TO FORGET YOU TAANI . what can I do I cant change the name written in my heart from taani to ria . its just as impossible for me .

I know I am married now with ria and I should reciprocate her love . she also deserves my love when she love me so much but what can I do if my heart want and love taani and only taani. ..

~~~

In mumbai

Swayam was looking at taani's photo (jiske upar phoolon ki mala chadi hui thi ) and he was saying while tears were flowing down his cheeks " I miss you taani , I miss you so much , why did you left all of us alone forever and ever ????

Tumhari bahut yaad aati hai meri pyaari behna , bahut zyada yaad aati hai .. I miss you so very much .. 😭😭

krishna ji apne aise kyun kiya kyun meri baby sis ko apne paas bula liya kyun ???? 😭😭😭

dekho taani I am crying , ur bhai is crying and you can never see me crying so please comeback to me and wipe away my tears and make me smile plz comeback my baby sis , its so many years since you left us , ab to vapis aa jao " 😭

sharon keep her hand on his shoulder and say " taani jahan bhi hogi vo tumhe zarur dekh rahi hogi and she will also cry if you cry so please smile and be happy for her swayam so that she can also be happy seeing her bhai happy and her soul can rest in peace "

swayam hugged sharon unable to stop his tears , sharon's eyes were also wet .. they both were missing taani so much .. the void created in their lives by absence of taani couldnt be filled or replaced . swayam lost his baby sister and sharon lost a true friend taani

~~~~~~~~~~~end of ch-2~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

why do swaron think taani is no more ??

why did she left all of them ??

how come rey dont know anything about it ??

will taarey meet or before that rey get to know about taani's death

confusion n suspense lalallaaa after all moni ki story hai thoda sa suspense emotions ke saath banta hai boss 😛😛

keep reading to get answers of all those questions~~~~~~

PRECAP ~ ( may be this will happen lolz I am also not sure anything can happen)

rey in london ..

Rey - pari's talk

..

Aapki mumma ka naam kya hai beta ? ...😉

...

Taarey meeting on the way😛

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I really hope it was worth reading .

PLEASE DO LIKE AND GIVE YOUR SPECIAL BIG HEARTY COMMENT IF YOU ALL LIKE THIS UPDATE

take care friends

keep smiling always 😊

Edited by chinudolly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mahi dear it was fabulous update dear👏
Loved to see bond between taani and pari 😊
Pari is so naughty cutie pie

Taani and rey POV was so emotional
Both thinking about same moment they had awww
Rey wish he could be with his sweet heart
And taani wish to strong and changed her identity
But y

Rey decided to give ria chance yet his heart only wish for taani
It was adorable. I wish star fulfill their wish

SWAYAM missing her so much and Sharon consoling him
Both miss taani
Did Sharon said taani soul rest in peace
Omg what is happening and rey does not know about taani
Damn suspense dear
Pls reveal soon and u r correct deR its wroth reading
Each and every emotion was beautifully described

Thanks for pm. Next update pls pretty soon dear

👏👏

Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Heart touching update :)
Tumhara har ek update dil ko choo jaata hai :)
Awesome :)
Beautifully written :)
Eagerly waiting for Taarey meet :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful update
hrart touching
both are in pain
filling sad for both of them
egarly waiting for tarrey meet
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice & lovely
Prt Both taarey
missing each other
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful update
filling sad for both of them
egarly waiting for tarrey meet
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
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Yayyy u finally update it...
Thnk u so much mihi...🤗
Luvly update yr...
Beautifully written...
Taani nd pari part ws so cute...
Aww taarey missing each other...
Thr flashback talk ws nice...
Aww dey luv each other so much dats y THEY ALWAYS FORGET TO FORGET ABOUT EACH OTHER...
Swaron part ws emotional...
But y dey think dat taani z no more...??
Thr z a lot of suspense in it...
Precap seems intrstng...
Update soon
Thnx fr pm
Luv u mihi...<3
Edited by Nicky-nish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome update taani and pari bonding was so nice and cute naughty pari she is so cute kya hua taani ki past so sad she cannot able to sleep taarey ka flashback was very sweet dono want to other happiens was so nice why swayam thinking taani is dead iam waiting for secrets to unfold precap was intersting rey aur pari meet and thanks for pm my sweet cute sis chinu love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme update
Loved it


Awww pari is so cute

Loved tani n pari bond
Both r each other strength



Poor taarey both r in pain
Missing each other

Praying for each other happiness


So many ques going on

Update soon
Cnt wait


Love u
Keep smiling

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