TR FF~'pal pal dil ke paas~tum rehte ho'(Ch-2 pg 8)

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~ A TAAREY FF ~

"Pal pal dil ke paas

~~ tum rehte ho"

~~written by moni


Chapter-1~First glimpse into the story~

~~ London~~

In a big mansion a girl was sitting on a chair near the window looking at the rain pouring outside. Rain , the way by which sky cries just like tears from our eyes , but there is rainbow only after the little rain , so in our lives , there comes so many reasons to smile after little sadness , there comes rainbow of beautiful colors of love & happiness after the rain of tears ...

So was with this girl , she was feeling so hurt , so painful today and just want to let out all her pain through her tears which she kept inside her heart from the past 6 years. Those 6 years brought a big transformation in her. She changed completely from inside to outside. The taani shekhawat who was bubbly, innocent , chirpy, adorable , lovable now turned into NIYA SHIKHAWAT a smart, brilliant business woman. She was smart and intelligent before also but she don't love anymore except her little 5yr daughter pari. She has become clever now and has achieved so many business awards. She has no faith in love now. She hates this world where people lie and cheat each other. Still she is living just for her daughter pari.

Taani / niya is looking outside the window at the pouring rain while this day of her marriage anniversary was killing her from inside

~~ flashback ~~

Why vishesh why ??? I gave myself to you completely but you YOU ...cheated... me chiii , shame on you

I hate you vishesh , I hate you

And I hate myself even more for trusting you ..

You are disgusting ...

~~~

Those thoughts of flashbacks killed her once more , why do memories don't leave us ? why do we can't erase our bad memories? Bad memories kill us real badly

Tears were rolling down her cheeks, she didn't wiped them, she was tired of doing so , she just want her pain to let out from her heart, it kills her every day ,every second ,every moment...she acts so brave and strong in front of everyone that no one could ever know the deep pain she has been through and she is still going through. But sometimes we just couldn't the pain anymore , we have no strength to do so ... sometimes our heart just overflows with hurt and pain that it comes out in form of tears no matter how much we try to control those salty drops of tears or drops of our pain

"mumma"

Her trance was broken by pari's voice. she took a deep breathe and wiped her tears to hide her pain from pari as she always do

And she said stammering " hhhaan pari , what happened baby ?"

Pari " mumma I want ice cream now pleaseee "

Taani couldn't refuse to such a cute plead of pari who is her only world now

She tried to smile a little and said " ok come on let's go to ice cream parlour "

Pari then said with twinkling eyes " yeahh but we will go to park also , you promised me that this Sunday on 26th October we will go out and you will spend time with me anyhow"

That date of her marriage anniversary again stabbed her heart ,but she controlled her tears and said "ok baby let's go "

And they went out

~~~

~~in MUMBAI~~

Ria "come on reyansh, this is not fair , you promised me that we will go out this Sunday you can't refuse now , after all its our 1 month marriage anniversary "

Well RIA is the wife of rey , its been a month since they got married

"I am sorry ria but I have to go to London for an important business meeting, I got to know about it now only sorry and its really very urgent" said rey and started packing his suitcase

~~ in flight from MUMBAI TO LONDON ~~

Rey was sitting on his seat closing his eyes while he remembered something

~~ flashback ~~

Rey's mom was on the stretcher, she had a minor heart attack

Rey's mom said to rey who was going along with the stretcher holding her mom's hands "mom don't worry you will be fine"

Rey's mom stopped the nurses and ward boys and said to rey

" rey I will not go for operation until you promise me that you will marry ria"

Rey tried to convince his mom but she didn't agreed and at last he had to promise her that he will marry ria just for his mom

After 1 month of their marriage also, still there is no marital relationship between rey and ria. rey made this clear to ria that he is marrying her just for his mom and she shouldn't expect anything from him. still she agreed , he don't know why, he assumed ria love him that's why she married him .he was guilty for not reciprocating her love , But little did he know that she was interested only in his money and property and not in him. She show to love him and try to get his love so that she won't be disowned from his property ,as the property papers are yet to be transferred on her name, ...

~

Ria kept her hands around his neck and said " I love you rey "

Rey said while imagining taani in ria said " I love you too taani "

Soon he came back to reality and jerked her hands off him and went away from his room

Ria was seeing his retreating back in anger and frustration , after he went away she said " TAANI , TAANI , TAANI , I am fed up of taani , no matter how much I try still rey never forgets that taani "

~~~~~

Rey opened his eyes while a lone tear escape his eyes and he said while wiping it off

" I can never forget you taani , you are always close to my heart every moment , every day , every night , every time, I wish I could go back to our past and change our destiny , hope you are happily married with vishesh"

~~ pal pal pal .. dil ke pass .. tum rehte ho ~~

~ ~ end of this chapter-1 ~~

~~ will the 2 lonely hearts of rey and taani ever meet and become one ?

will they meet again ??

which game is planning their destiny ?

what will happen if they meet ?

what has actually happened with taani that she has to change to niya?

Will love ever win ?

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INDEX (clickable links)

Chapter 1 ~ first glimpse into the story ~ ( above)

Chapter -2 ~ I always forget to forget you~(page 8)


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here is the link of hum mar jayenge story if any other wanna read it -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3670154/taarey-hum-mar-jayenge-updated-ch-16-pg-120

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Jasmine_ash thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res/ unres;)
Awesome start
Loved it
Two entirely new life
I mean taani with her daughter pari
And rey married omg
But still has feeling for taani
Taani changed her identity
Really feeling sad
Idk how u r going to carry the story
But unique
Lovely concept
Pls do continue
And really thanks for continuing hmm
_/\_
Mahi u r so sweet :)
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Nice concept...

i m really looking forward to read it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant concept.lovely start
update d nxt pt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
hey nyc yaar...

firstly to its my fav song...n secondly thus concept made me go gaga over it...
d update first part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept :)
Loved it :)
Great start :)
Continue soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing start
taani is very hurt n broken
aww rey still love taani
upd nxt prt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey,
Nice concept.
Both taarey still love each other.
Really hope that may be that baby girl would be taarey daughter...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Hope Rey finds out about Ria's true intentions, so that she can't get the property
Hope Taarey get back together soon
Please update and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice cncpt...
taarey married to sumone else...
bt vishesh cheated taani...
Aww taani z so much upset...
Nd so was rey,he z msng taani...
Taani nd vishesh's daughter...

or pari z taarey's daughter???
M so eager to read dis ff...
Update soon nd
Thnx fr pm...:)
Edited by Nicky-nish - 10 years ago

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