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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: musicialtie

angel and devil met...

but my devil is mera yaar...
so nandu get ready to go gaga over the devil,,😎
loved it...
superb my harry potter starter!!!!!!!🤗

hehehehe...yeah !!
hehehe devil toh nandu ka hain..theek hain U too take him if nandu allows..:P :P
am glad ki u loved it...
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urs,
harry potter starter...😆😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

That was completely unexpected... Stone hit a dog :p

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: eymane

Hey! Just read all parts now! It's awesome man! Continue soon and if possible PM me too :)

Thank yu so mcuh..
am glad ki find it awesome...
will continue soon...
yeah !! sure yar...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: piyu008

i loved it..accidental meet of manan..when it comes to MaNan their life has to be eventful😆

that was their first hug right😳
N nandu .loved her cuteness..poor girl got struck that too in manik's house..well definitely treat for us..
update soon..m loving MaNan😳

Thank yu so much ...
Yeah !! eventful life toh hona hain...as it is MANAN...
am glad ki u loved it...
heheh yeah !!! they hugged...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Adorable update... the trunk hiding and the trip and fall...classic... can't wait for the next update...😊

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am glad ki u find it adorable n classic.
means a lot..
will update soonish..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nimarious

seriously yaar it was damn funny...
nandu ran like usain bolt 🤣
it was just fantastic...loved it...the heading of the chapter was mind blowing...
finally it was a long update...
😃 compared to the other ones...
we can hope for the manan scenes in the next part???? 😳
plz do continue soon 😛

Thank yu for the wonderful comment neha...
am glad ki u find it hilarious...yeah !! she did run...
am glad ki u find it longgg../heheh compared to other one...🤣
I gguess yeah !!!
will update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

manik so abd how could u lie to nandu
nandu please dont enter someones house that Maniks house
hehe her monologue about stool was damn hilarious
please do continue
bye sumi

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Posted: 10 years ago
MaNan FF : "Love Keeps US Together"


~CHAPTER 5~


One of the best feeling in life is, seeing a smile on a
person's face and knowing that you put it there.


They just stood hugging each other forgetting about the world.Suddenly the current came and Nandini opens her eyes aand realizes their position .So,she brokes the hug and Manik also opens his eyes and brokes the hug.It is an awkward situation for them.It is completely silent.Finally Manik brokes the silence.So Ms.Murthy,will you please tell how did you end up here ? Well ,hurry up and tell me.I'm all ears.

Nandini tells him not to laugh.Manik says why will I laugh.Then Nandini explains him about the whole drama.How she was playing with rocks and how did that rock hit a dog ? How she ran like Usain Bolt.How she ended up here and in his room for a so called stool.She also complains him about not having one,...one stool in this whole Mansion.Manik listens to her carefully and he is just amazed .Nandini finally completes her story and sees Manik and Manik couldnt control himself and laughs his heart out.He falls on bed while laughing.Nandini shouts Manik !!! But Manik is Manik.He is laughing continuously.Nandini hits him with a pillow.Stop it Manik !!

Manik finally controls himself.He says after so many years I laughed like this.Nandini sees him like is he kidding ? She asks him why like that ? I feel you should laugh more often because you look good and smile suits you.She sits beside him while saying this.He sees her and says there should be reasons to laugh and smile na.In my life there are no such reasons.Nandini gets confused listening his words and asks him are you ok ? Why are speaking like this as if you lost some beloved persons from your life ? Manik just looks at her like how she got to know so easily from his words ? Nandini sees him looking at her and aks him why are seeing me like that ? She asks so innocently that Manik smiles at her cuteness.Manik thinks how can someone be so cute ?

Suddenly realization hits Manik.Why is he behaving so well with her ? Manik get a grip on yourself he thinks.He says now you go from here .He speaks very rudely.Nandini is again shocked like how he manages to change his characters so easily? Till now he is behaving so good and again he is back to his monster mode.LIke seriously ? Nandini says you are unbelievable !! Till now you were ok then suddenly what happened to you ? Manik says Just go from here before I do something which u'll regret and repent.FINE !! am going.Nandini made her way outside.Manik falls on bed and says she is gonna make me crazy.In one day she did this much then what about further ? Uff she is dangerous.Manik !! be careful .Nandini again comes back and stands silently and Manik sees that and asks WHat ?

She says I need to go out and u kept these so called damn rules that you cant go out without so called invitation card.U and ur rules.They are just damn stupid.Manik stands up and asks hher did u just call me stupid ? He takes one step forward and Nandini takes one step backward.Woh...woh...She stammers saying the words.FInally she hits the wall.Manik keeps his both hands on the wall blocking her way. He is so near to her and Nandini's heart is beating so fast like Usain Bolt.Nandini couldn't understand this feeling.Manik asks her again did you call me stupid ? Nandini nods her head in no and then yes and again no and again yes.YES or NO !! Manik yells.Nandini is so afraid and she says yes .Manik says very bad move.He touches her face and Nandini opens her eyes which she is closed due to fear .She pushes Manik's hand and escapes from him.

Manik holds Nandini's wrist and pulls her towards himself and says You know you should be very careful with your tongue when you are near me and you should be very careful with me too..I can be very dangerous Nandu !! This is just a glimpse darling !! So next time think thousand times before coming infront of me.He said that very huskily.He is so near to her that Nandini can listen to his heartbeat.Nandini just nods her head.Manik leaves her and gets the invitation card and gives it to her saying that now go.Nandini just nods .She didnt even dare to pen her mouth .Nandini goes outside and she is walking alone on the road and thinking about what happened today ? There is a smile playing on her lips.She remembers how Manik smiled and that too because of her.She prays to god that he should always smile like that.BUt she is not able to understand his mood swings.Sometimes he behaves so well and sometimes he behaves like a moster.I dont understand what happens to him?She reaches her home safely .

Party in Manik's house got over and Manik is on the bed thinking about today.How she made me laugh after so many years.I dont understand why I behave so well with her.But it would be better if she stays far away from me because I dont want anyone to know about me.I should be more careful with her as he easily gets close with her which is dangerous to her and to him also.I guess she is completely shocked after my changing attitude.She didnt even dare to open her mouth.As a matter of fact I need to admit that she is cute.Manik what happened to you man !! You are thinking that she is cute.Woah !! this girl is going to turn me insane.Uff !! need to sleep.He slept with a smile and Nandini too..

Next Chapter : CHAPTER 6


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So.How is it ? I hope it is long enough.I hope its not boring and it's upto ur expectations and in this update it was all Manan .I hope u liked it and do share ur views and queries and dont forget to HIT LIKE if u like it and silent readers u too...Thank yu so much for the lovely comments.:D :D Thank yu for those who liked it. (: (:

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Love,
Harika..Keep smiling.It looks good on yu..
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey my harry potter starter... nice update👏
ohhh my manan...
plx do update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
HEY SUCH A NYC CHAPTER.I REALLY LIKED IT HARUU.SO MANIK IS AGAIN IN ANGRY MOOD UFFO CONFUSED BANDA SERIOYSLY.YEH DIRECT APNI FEELINGS KO ACCEPT NHI KR SAKTA KYA ND OUR CUTE NANDU AWWW SO SWEEET POOR GIRL SO DARA DIYA SO BAD MANIK.HMMM SO THEIR IS DEVELPING A NEW FEELINGSS WELL DONE GIRL

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