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Posted: 10 years ago
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She can go through hell to taste heaven with him!! He can walk through fire to stroll on water with her!!

As she stood there unable to utter a word in her defense...he stood tall ...fighting her battles for her!! He declared her innocence to one and all, he announced her purity loud n clear!!
And when she fled with tears in her eyes...he followed!! Cause he just cannot stand her in pain...he simply cannot see her agony!! He located her, crying like a baby!! The cruel words breaking her heart!! He walks in, trying to stem the flow!! All his attempts fail, all his arguments go unheard, as distraught tears flow unabated!! She is blaming herself...his sweet girl...!! Taking the flak for all that she had never imagined, forget done!! He cannot bear her self incrimination!! It was all so wrong...what she was suffering!! He tries again and again yet fails, so simply picks her up like fragile precious doll...and puts her on the pedestal where she belongs!! His perfection!! His ray of sunshine...his wish come true..his prayer that was granted...the star that shone to only light his path!! She watches then, the tears slowing, as she watches him like a lost child!!
He gets a chance to say what was spilling out of his soul..no...she cannot be wrong!! Never!! She was his one right!! She made everything fine..everything perfect...how could she ever be wrong!! His firm voice, stopping her in her tracks!! Forcing her to think that how can such conviction be so wrong!! And he tries to show her the truth...the bitter truth of his sweet past!! It started way before anyone could have guessed...the rot had seeped in much earlier than any one could have predicted!! He knew..it was misguided venom...unreasonable...blind...and she was the easy target!!
He wipes her tears...as gently as he always does!! While she sits there..pure as the driven snow!! HIs emotions at her state overwhelm him...and he envelopes her in a hug!! A tight squeeze that assures her that she was safe!! That she was loved beyond imagination!! Circling her in his warm arms...promising her more security than a child's blanket...protecting her from anything and everything in this world!! She was in his arms...where she belonged ...where she was destined to be!! Where he soaked and absorbed all her pain...took away all her confusions...wiped away all her doubts...!! And she finally feels sane...as she feels his love healing her wounds!! Her grief eases as his arms soothe and calm!! Her heart resumes its normal beat...the clouds of depression finally being pierced by the sun of his adoration!! She recovers her breath, rejuvenates her faith!! Held close in a tight embrace...the intruding world finally fades!!
She hugs him back..the one thing that she loves to do!! And the serene and peaceful smile on his face...such a delight!! He asks...is she better...as he caresses her face with his fingers...her soul with his eyes!! And she nods...childlike...cherubic...angelic and he smiles in wonder!! Mesmerized...awed by her innocent beauty...how lucky could he get!! He smiles at his child bride and kisses his fate on her marked on her forehead!! One simple and short gesture...yet...books would not be able to do justice to its depth!! His world was back on his axis coz her tears had stopped!!
Her agony comes first and when that recedes he is reminded of what he had done!! Burnt all his bridges with his soul brother!! The sorrow marks his brow and she of course notices!! It her turn to worry about him, to cherish him, to make him feel loved and protected and safe!! She promptly rises to the occasion...all her love coming to the fore when she draws him towards her!! He willingly goes, knowing what a soulful treat awaits him!! She kisses him gently, a mirror of his affection...and shows him the reflection of his love!! With the kiss, she too seals their fate!!
Heads together, hearts united, souls forged till eternity...they stand!! Let the world unleash its fury...let all the forces unite to pull them apart...let all the troubles brew in hell...let even destiny try and break their bond...they will still be together, forever!! When such caring hands wipe tears away, when such strong arms keep all pain at bay, and when such loving lips caress every inch of my body and soul...about anything else...who cares???

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kresham thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love u Eve...was waiting for ur Post...because u r the one for me to do justice to the Scene

That one scene had many things...it was a pure bliss...

Every single thing was placed together...Pain,guilt,failure,loss,helplessness,love,safety,care,...etc etc etc...n u r the better person to describe but

That one scene was full of Love n only love which cant b expressed in words but can b only felt through heart
Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by SyedaFaiza - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woah. That's so heavy and emotional. You should really take up creative writing and publish someday.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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EveRani...

matalab tumane decide karliya hain aja... ke hi chodgi...

that;s just beautiful.. nothing more to say...
Edited by Smiley_23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eve this episode was so emotional
i felt so hurt for nandani
and manik was trying his best to take away her misery
this by far was the most sweetest episode for me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eveline...after the amazing episode waiting for your write up..😊...
u have written everything...the best thing abt MANAN is their communication...just needed ...they always bring it on..forget their egos...indivual complex..whatever it is...they do proper communication..proper understanding,..perfect caring...😳...
what Dhruv told..what Ams thinks...but they are together...
Niti and Parth ...PERECT COUPLE...the way Madhuri said in JDJ...😃
Edited by LIKEDMG - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a master piece...kudos yaar...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Truly, who cares...cause she made his world perfect, she completed his world, she completed him! He is a man who is living apart from his world and she would always be perfect in his world cause she is his world...

You and I both know, how much we care...😉


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