Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 53

Originally posted by: Sonatia

cz dis is my last commnt.i vil unres divya dis ff and then i vil go...

Originally posted by: 8520NK

I just finished reading all three chapters that I couldn't read before since my exams commenced!

But Hema I must say that you write beautifully! I am not a karna fan but your writing makes me so curious! The way you pen down the chapters is brilliant. It just makes the other person want to read more and more! I couldn't stop myself from reading them all at once. Your writing really holds the power to let the other person imagine everything clearly. It captures the reader's interest and imagination perfectly👏
Thank u so much Navu... glad that I could draw an imagination of the ancient eon thru my writing 😃

Now, coming to the updates, I loved them all! They were amazing!

So much has happened. Woah! Karna and Swarnali?😲

And then BAMM!!! They are married!🥳
Hehe... Public demand 😆 😆... I must say... I twisted a story a bit from here 😉

I really liked the simple yet intriguing confession and I must admit, Vrushali is such an understanding wife! She's an angel!😃

Their first night was amazing😉 You really captured all the emotions perfectly. The nervousness, the excitement, the romance and the desires!😳
Yeah... I mixed all these to make the desirous concoction 😉... so that it will be a night to remember

The update about them in Hastinapur was great too! I really liked the way you described her feelings on seeing Ved Vyasa and Pitamah and the king and queen were stupendous!
This part was neccessary for my future update esp Bheeshma part

Awesome writing Hema!👏😃

The part in the present where that Bryan (right?) tells her father that they didnt do any HANKY PANKY was superb! *whisteling*🤣
Bechara Bryan has to face Angry Daddy 😆 😆

Update soon!😊

Originally posted by: -StarryPhoenix-

Hie Hemangi😊
I ws a reader of ur FF frm my sissys IF ID bt never commented bcoz its nt mine ID😆
This is a great piece u r really a good writer... I
ts ur simplicity that impressed me
u brilliantly portrayed Swarnali nd Karnas bonding her Time travelling everything ws brilliantly written👏
waiting for ur updates
sending u buddy Req right way😃