AsYa (kabhi) SS TORTURING DEATH(chap8 (last part)updated)22-04-2015

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 10 years ago

My story starts from where tanveer comes to kill the khan family, I mean from sanam and seher birthday.

All are happy and celebrating the princesses birthday. Zoya and asad are unaware of tanveers presence. Asad is showering love on his daughters. And then najma come and says that haya is missing. All gets tensed and start searching for her. Zoya consoles Najma that all will be fine and haya will be here only. Asad comes after searching for long. He stands far but Zoya notices that something is wrong and goes to asad. Asad says that now I am worried and I think we should call police. Zoya agrees, while najma hears their conversation and breaks down. Zoya gives her water and says that we will surely find haya.

Soon najma phone is rings and it's none others than tanveer online asking for a deal. On asking what deal. She says that her daughter is with her and if she wants her alive then she should give her Zoya. Najma ask what do u have to do with Zoya. Tanveer says I want to kill asad every day by torturing his zoya. Najma says I can't do this for my daughter I can't sacrifice my sister. Tanveer says to her to think once again. Najma says I can't and turns around to find Zoya standing.

Will najma agree to tanveer? Will Zoya be able to safe haya? What will happen when asad will came to know about this?

So guys how was that. Plz neglect my mistakes. This is a small intro to my story chap 1 is coming soon. Let me know how was I.

Thank u for reading and sorry if I wasted ur time.

Edited by ztvrocks - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start

But don't kill asya

Continue soon

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: isha123asya
interesting
continue soon

Yeah will update soon.😉

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay
Nice start
But don't kill asya
Continue soon

No I won't kill them of course.

But this will be a little sad and a little pain story.

But as I say A LITTLE.😃

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER-1

Najma turns around and is shocked to see her here. Many things are running in her mind has she heard everything, or she just came, etc.

Zoya says to her to whom she is talking.

Najma says wrong no.

Zoya says ahan wrong no.

Najma nods yes.

Zoya says to wrong no. It is not said that I can't do it.

Najma is highly tensed and it is now showing on her face.

Zoya takes the phone and tanveer who was listening their conversation says WELL WELL ZOYA U CAME, ACTUALLY WE WERE TALKING ABOUT U ONLY.

Zoya says U AGAIN WHY HAVE U CALLED NAJMA. Then Zoya remembers about haya and then Zoya blasts out saying U... HOW DARE U ... U HAVE PROBLEM WITH ME WHY HAVE U TAKEN HAYA.

Tanveer in a mocking way says ONLY HAYA ZOYA LOOK AROUND PLZZZ.

Zoya looks around and doesn't find seher.

Zoya says SEHER SEHER...

Najma says LET ME CHECK.

Zoya says to tanveer TANVEER HOW DARE U LAY A HAND ON MY DAUGHTER. I WILL KILL U.

ta never says OH NO NO NO ZOYA PLZ DONT KILL ME. IF U KILED ME THEN WHO WILL DO THE HONOR TO KILL U.

Zoya now understanding why she took haya and seher and says WHAT DO U WANT.

Tanveer says U ONLY U.

Zoya says to her TANVEER I HAVE TOLD U MR. KHAN ONLY LOVES ME IF SOMEHOW U TOOK HIM THE EVEN HE WONT LOVE U.

Tanveer says WHO LOVE ME OR WHO DOESNT IS NOT UR CONCERN. AND U KNOW IF U WONT COME THEN WHAT WILL HAPPEN.

tanveer pinches seher and she screams.

Zoya says SEHER BETA DONT WORRY AAMI IS COMING... TANVEER DONT U DARE TOUCH MY DAUGHTER.

tanveer says I WONT ONLY IF U DIDNT CAME IN AN HOUR. AND REMEMBER NOT TO TEll JAMMY. U KNOW I WANT TO GIVE HIM A SURPRISE.

Zoya says WHERE DO I HAVE TO COME.

tanveer tells Zoya her hideout.

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Zoya wanders around the house with najma.

najma says ZOYA THINK AGAIN.

Zoya says THERE IS NO TIME.

Asad sees them talking and comes to them he says I AM SORRY NAJMA I AM NOT ABLE TO FIND HAYA BUT NOT FOR LONG SHE WILL BE HERE WITH U .

Zoya sees her with teary eyes and says MR. KHAN I WANT U TO PROMISE ME SOMETHING.

asad is confused and says MRS.KH... he sees her tensed and hold her and says ZOYA WHAT IS THE MATTER.

Zoya ask IF U WILL FULFILL UR PROMISE.

Asad says ALWAYS.

Zoya says U WONT LEAVE SANAM AND SEHER EVER AND WONT LET TEARS COME IN THEIR EYES. AND WILL GIVE THEM MOTHERLY LOVE TOO. Signing him to marry again after she is gone.

Asad says WHAT R U TALKING ABOUT, I MEAN R U GOING SOMEWHERE.

Zoya says MR. KHAN PLZZZ... I DONT HAVE TIME... PLZ UNDERSTAND.

asad nods yes and Zoya leaves with najma whereas asad is extremely confused as to what is happening.

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Next chapter soon😉

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Omg it's so amazing story

I love it

That bitch tanveer kidnap hays & seher

Now zoya is going to sacrifice her life for her daughters

AllAh Miyan plz save zoya hays and seher too

This tanveer deserves only the punishment of death

Plz plz plz continue this story

Plz update soon this story

I love this story

And plz pm me of ur updates

Update sooon

I can't wait to read more

Love u for writing such a beautiful story

Aaahhh I am already fallen in love this story

Plz update soon and pm me must

Thanks for this story

Stay blessed, happy, sound and safe

Thanks

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar
Omg it's so amazing story
I love it
That bitch tanveer kidnap hays & seher
Now zoya is going to sacrifice her life for her daughters
AllAh Miyan plz save zoya hays and seher too
This tanveer deserves only the punishment of death
Plz plz plz continue this story
Plz update soon this story
I love this story
And plz pm me of ur updates
Update sooon
I can't wait to read more
Love u for writing such a beautiful story
Aaahhh I am already fallen in love this story
Plz update soon and pm me must
Thanks for this story
Stay blessed, happy, sound and safe
Thanks

Thank u so much for ur blessings... It means a lot.

Will update soon. But as for PMs I am sorry dear, got very less time these days, surely I will do one when I am free .

Once again thanks for appreciating.😳

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lovemysehaan
Lovely story dear

Thank u so much for liking my work

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

cant wait for ur comments so uploading now... 😉

CHAPTER-2:

Zoya and najma reached the place and tanveer showed her self with haya and seher.

Zoya and najma run toward the girls but tanveer stopped them saying STOP WHERE U R.

Zoya said TANVEER I AM HERE WHAT DO U WANT ELSE.

tanveer says NOTHING JUST WANTED THAT IF BEFORE U DIE, I COULD SEE UR SO CALLED PRIDE BROKEN INTO PIECES.

Zoya says WHAT DO U MEAN?

Tanveer says I WANT U TO GET ON UR KNEES RUB UR NOSE ON THIS ROAD AND BEG FOR UR GIRLS.

najma says to Zoya NO ... NO DONT.

zoya says I DONT HAVE ANY OTHER CHOICE.

Zoya was about to gets down on her knees when tanveer stopped Her saying WHAT IS THE RUSH FOR... LET ME FIRST PREPARE A GIFT FOR MY JAMMY.

and then she took out a camcorder and started recording.

Tanveer says I WANT TO SHOW JAMMY HER WIFES PRIDE SHATTERED... NOW WHAT ARE U WAITING FOR... ON UR KNEES AT ONCE.

Zoya gets down on her knees and begged for girls. While najma cries becoz of her helplessness.

Tanveer says DIDNT I SAID TO RUB UR NOSE TOO.

Zoya had tears in her eyes but didn't let them come out. Zoya leaned down and was just an inch away.

Najma says ZOYA...PLZZ... DONT...

Zoya says NAJMA DONT MAKE IT DIFFICULT FOR ME. And then touched her nose on the road and closed her eyes and then rubbed it.

Tanveer is happy and says AHHH ... I HAVE NEVER BEEN SO HAPPY... BUT BECOZ OF U... THANK U SO MUCH ZOYA.

Zoya now stands up but looking down.

Tanveer says AHH WELL...

Tanveer walked toward Zoya, lifted her face with her finger mocking AHHH NOW WHERE IS THAT PRIDE ON WHICH JAMMY HAD PRIDE.

then slapped her face hard. Tanveer says NOW THIS THE LOOK FOR WHICH I HAVE WAITED.

As Zoya is not in a state of talking Najma takes her place and says U HAVE GOT WHAT U WANTED ... NOW LEAVE THE GIRLS.

Tanveer says U KNOW WHAT I WAS THINKING THE SAME.

Then she with finger called someone and said SORRY. the the men hit najma and Zoya on their heads leaving them unconscious.

Tanveer said to one man handing over him the two girls TAKE MY SWEET NANND ( Najma ) AND THESE TWO PRINCESSES TO THEIR HOME SAFE AND SOUND, WHERE AS I TAKE THE QUEEN ( Zoya ) WITH ME.

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Edited by ztvrocks - 10 years ago