AsYa (kabhi) SS TORTURING DEATH(chap8 (last part)updated)22-04-2015 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here I go...
Chapter :8-
All are happy for zoya, zoya too who has lost all hopes was confined to her room is better but a little fragile. Sanam and seher are happy to see their ammi happy again. Asad is sitting under the moon in a garden. Salam and seher comes and occupies his both sides while asad hugs his dolls.
Sanam says ABU WHY R U SITTING HERE ALONE?
Asad says I AM THANKING ALLAH.
seher says OH REALLY BUT ALLAH GAVE ME HINT THAT HE HAS ACCEPTED UR THANK.
Asad looks at her and smiles and then looks back at the moon.
Seher and sanam looks at each other behind asad, seher hints for something while sanam denies to do such thing.
Seher says AHMM...AHMMM.
asad says WHAT U TOW ARE PLANNING?
Sanam looks at seher and says WE R NOT PLANNING ANYYYTHING...
Seher says YA ALLAH WHATS WRONG WITH U ... ABU TELL ME WHAT IS DONE WHEN SOMEONE IS HAPPY AFTER SOO LONG?
Asad says I DONT KNOW.
Seher says ONCE I WAS IN LOVE...
Asad gave a fake surprising look and says OHHH.
Seher says U KNOW WHAT I DID?
Asad again fake says NO... WHAT?
Seher says I TOOK MY LOVE ONE ON A DINNER...
Sanam looks questionable to seher, who gave her expression telling that she will handle.
Asad says ACHAAA..
Seher says ABU WHAT ACHAA... OK U DONT UNDERSTAND, SANAM I THINK WE SHOULD TELL HIM STRAIGHT... WE WANT U TO TAKE AMMI TO A DINNER.
Asad says FROM WHERE U TWO GET THESE THINGS IN UR MINDS.
Sanam says NOT ME ONLY SEHER.
Seher says ALLAH MIYAAN ... JUST NOW U WERE WITH ME NOW CHANGED UR PARTY?
Asad says OK OK... NOW STOP FIGHTING BUT U TWO WILL GO TOO.
Seher says WHY US?
Asad says I THOUGHT IF EXPERTS WILL BE ALONG THEN IT WILL BE EASTY TO HANDLE.
seher takes that as a compliment and says I WILL GIVE U INSTRUCTIONS BEFORE SO THAT WE DONT HAVE TO GO.
Asad pretendes to be thankful and seher start her instructions again.
After asad have taken much instructions asad goes to zoya and says MRS. KHAN WILL U ACCOMPANY ME TO THE DINNER TONIGHT.
Zoya looks at him surprisingly and says MR. KHAN IS EVERYTHING ALRIGHT.
Asad says WILL U?
Zoya mods yes and after getting ready they leave for wedding and sanam, seher and dilshad gets happy seeing them leave.
Sanam says I KNEW EVERYTHING WOULD BE ALRIGHT.
Seher looks at her shocking and mimics her I KNEW EVERYTHING WOULD BE ALRIGHT... OH HELLO I WAS WHO MADE EVERYTHING ALRIGHT.
Dilshad says NOW WE R ALONE WHAT WE WILL DO.
Seher says BADI AMMI AISAY HI TO UN KO BAHAR NAHI BEHJA, OFCOURSE WE WILL PARTY HARD, CALL NAJMA PHOPHI TO BRING HAYA .
After reaching the restaurant asad stretched the chair out for zoya and she sits and after her asad sat right in front of her
Zoya says WHY SUDDENLY U PLANNED THIS DINNER.
Asad remembers seher and mumbles I WAS FORCED.
zoya says DID U SAY SOMETHING?
Asad says NOT REALLY... ACTUALLY I WANTED TO SPEND TIME WITH U.
zoya smiles and looks down, asad slowly moves his hands and holds zoya's hand. Zoya looks at him and feels that he is tensed.
Zoya says MR.KHAN WHAT HAPPENED?
Asad says MRS. KHAN WITHOUT U THESE 6 MONTHS WERE LIKE TORTURING DEATH FOR ME, EVERY DAY I USED TO DIE.
Zoya says ITS OK MR.KHAN NOW WE ARE TOGETHER, AND NOTHING WILL HAPPEN NOW.
Asad says IT WAS ALL MY FAULT, BECOZ OF ME SANAM AND SEHER LOST THEIR AMI FOR 6 MONTHS.
Zoya says DONT SAY LIKE THIS IT WASN't UR FAULT, IT WAS TAN...
Asad stops her and says DONT TAKE HER NAME TONIGHT AT LEAST.
Zoya says OK ... BUT STOP FEELING GUILTY.
Asad says PROMISE ME THAT U WILL BE MY SIDE FOREVER.
Zoya gets naughty and says FOREVER... NO THATS TOO LONG...
Asad gives her a serious look and zoya says I PROMISE THAT I WILL BE BY UR SIDE FOREVER AND AFTER THAT TOO.
Asad smiles and stands up. He proceeds to her side and forwards his hand for a dance. Zoya accepts and gives hand and they dance.

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THE END.




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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Nice update
Liked seher antics, same like zoya
She instructed asad to go for dinner
Asad zoya talks were emotion fill.
The story comes to an end but it's too soon. Plz give epilogue as well.
Thanks for pm & congratulations for completing ur first story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Nice end to the story
So zoya is all better
Asad is thankful
His dolls talked him into taking their ammi out for dinner
Promises were made and a beautiful life after

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Liked seher antics, same like zoya
She instructed asad to go for dinner
Asad zoya talks were emotion fill.
The story comes to an end but it's too soon. Plz give epilogue as well.
Thanks for pm & congratulations for completing ur first story.

Yeah, thank u, I too didn't wanted to end it so soon but my exam are after a week and was not getting time to right and I was feeling shame in posting sorry note after another.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice end to the story

So zoya is all better
Asad is thankful
His dolls talked him into taking their ammi out for dinner
Promises were made and a beautiful life after

Thank u 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
thats wonderful part
sanam and seher were cool kids love them
perfect and sweet end
hope to see epilouge soon
thanx for pm
plz pm me for other work
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: nilusoni

thats wonderful part

sanam and seher were cool kids love them
perfect and sweet end
hope to see epilouge soon
thanx for pm
plz pm me for other work

I am glad that u liked😊
As per Epilogue, I am not sure to write one or not.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Love the update
Amazing
Aww such a beautiful story came to end
I want new asya story
Love the story very much
Thank u so much for such a beautiful story

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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar

Love the update

Amazing
Aww such a beautiful story came to end
I want new asya story
Love the story very much
Thank u so much for such a beautiful story

I am glad that u liked.😳

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