You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD
things changing... the equation between Geet and her In-Laws... Daadi and Maan's mother caring for her and in return Geet called them Maa... MUs gonna change into understanding for sure... maan was happy just to see her accepting his family and decided to do his best in this relation... And the very 1st KISS 👍🏼
Loved it

It's just the matter of time

every thing will eventually fall into place😛

Thanks for reading!

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Aww cute gesture by Maan
Hope things get better between them

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@Endgame

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

amazing update geets mil is so nice she is really lucky all were treating her so nicely n geet also accepting them maan is right if she can try why he cant after all her all relation start with him n they both could make their relaion work hmm their first kiss loved this maan very much lovely part thnx 4 update

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: anmirza
Aww cute gesture by Maan
Hope things get better between them

Hope!

Thanks for reading😊

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
amazing update geets mil is so nice she is really lucky all were treating her so nicely n geet also accepting them maan is right if she can try why he cant after all her all relation start with him n they both could make their relaion work hmm their first kiss loved this maan very much lovely part thnx 4 update

Hmm let's see what geet is thinking!

Thanks for reading😊

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

awesome update dear,😃 loved the way geet accept her in-laws:) don't understand why geet is parents did this to her😕

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

hii.. how r u spoorthy..

i read all the parts in one go..

poor geet.. actually i really don't like such rural types of stories.. but i've read yr previous stories so i kept on going.. and after reading all parts actually m liking it...

so the story starts with their marriage.. and maan is more like a illiterate rich guy who values beauty more than anything..

you are right there were similar stories before this also.. and you are trying to portray as per your thoughts .. and i like it that way only.. and please don't make it a sad ending.. i don't like it.. atleast stories me to sabkuch achaa hi hona chahiye... happy ending makes me v happy n gives some good hopes that some day you will also have a happy day like this.. so don't crush that thinking plzz..

OMG.. character scatch is terrible.. maan is 6th pass??? thoda bada nahi sakte? ok.. chalo bargain karne ki try karti hoo 😉.. make geet teaching him or inspiring him to study further...

Part 1

OMG... geet was hungry.. and what she got on the name of food.. juice and sandwich that too in a washroom.. ahh.. she is so depressed already...

so maan is possessive for his family.. come on, how can he expect geet to do all things on the v 1st day.. would he be emphasizing husband?? lets see..

thank god.. maan didn't force her.. but misconception has increased,,

Part 2

geet is under so much pressure.. a new place new people to handle and maan is being mean.. i hope geet would sort out every thing soon..'

but everything is going wrong.. maan is taking everything wrong..

Part 3

v bad starting for geet and maan.. but thankfully maan's dadi n mother r v good to geet..

and and and.. aakhir geet ka jadoo chal hi gyaa.. everyone is happy with her so as maan.. and i m loving this story alot.. waiting for more..😳

i am looking forward to have a mindblowing lovestory... hope to get that soon..!!!!😃

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

P.S. forgot to ask.. plz if possible.. index me pg no pr direct link daal do.. that wd b easy for all of us.. plzzz

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Even before I could say that its different story u gave 3 updates... but really the story is different with maan uneducated and geet educated. But in all these u still mainted his attitude the same😉. Nice concept. It happens in lot of arranged marriages... u have dealt it very nicely till now dear. It was sooo different for me. Thought maan will be brutal after reading prologue and part 1 but u proved me otherwise. Good start and wonderful going👍🏼