RagNa Story: Heavenly Jail Ch.22A-Pg. 75 (July 11)

ILoveRagNa thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1

Index

Chapter 1: Below
Chapter 2: Page 6
Chapter 3: Page 8
Chapter 4: Page 12
Chapter 5: Page 12
Chapter 6: Page 17
Chapter 7: Page 19
Chapter 8: Page 24
Chapter 9: Page 26
Chapter 10: Page 31
Chapter 11: Page 36
Chapter 12: Page 41
Chapter 13: Page 43
Chapter 14: Page 46
Chapter 15: Page 50
Chapter 16 A- and B: Page 55
Chapter 17 - Page 58
Chapter 18 - Page 59
Chapter 19- Page 63
Chapter 20- Page 69
Chapter 21- Page 72
Chapter 22-A- Page 75




(Thank you for teaching ME how to add images..😛)


Warning 1:
I am no English Grammar and Spelling Expert. Please Forgive me for any of errors that you WILL Find, and Yes, I would Be Glad and Happiest Person on Earth, if you can correct me and explain the reasons as to why would any framing be incorrect and not suitable.

I am looking forward for some fun and LEARNING experience while writing this piece of story.


Warning 2:
It has mature content, and I have seen posts now pushed back where readers may have trouble reading them. Well, I do care for you, I will add warning, but if I get any messages or comments which are intended to hurt me or my Story, It won't affect me. As long as I have some people who believes in my work and story, I will continue

Warning 3:
As per explanation I am given about Forum and it's activity. At end of every chapter I will mention the page Numbers EMA forum should reach before I update next chapter.

For example, at the end of this chapter, I will be writing.
Next Update When EMA forum reaches 982 pages... and it's exactly what I will Mean.



So here is the basic Outline of the story:

Story is about a girl is ambitious and man who is successful.
She believes in GETTING what she DESERVES, He has philosophy of GETTING WHAT HE WANTS!

Start: (Mature - Grey)


Sun has risen high up in the sky, and is spreading it's powerful rays through window pane of huge mansion. This disturbs cozily sleeping Kalpi on king size bed, as she pulls her hands across her face to block the rays from irritating her eyes. Reality strikes her, she jerks up on the bed where she had been lying with nothing on her, and looks around in shock. She spots her backless at the end of bed, and her head starts spinning she looks around to know ... to try identify where exactly is she? But FAILS..!! She realizes seeing the bed that limits have been crossed, and she was no more virgin. Tears forms in her eyes, as she gets up taking her clothes and heads towards nearest closed place, which she found in washroom right across the room. She enters the washroom, only to find it beautifully organized and lavish. She STILL do not recollect what had previous evening been to her?? She disposes every other thoughts, as she starts wearing her clothes and decides to run away from this place, which is just nothing more than threatening valley for her. She is guilty, she is regretting, she do not know who was the person? She cannot recollect HIS face to whom she had given herself for evening? What would she do? How will she face world? Her friends? Her family? Her ... Her...
...
Her...
Fiance?? Her would be in-laws? What will she tell everyone? Where was she last night?
With all these thoughts, fear and guilt she dresses herself out and is ready to run,... Moment she steps out of bedroom, she is mesmerized to see hall room of magnificent bunglow...No... it is Mansion... it is huge, with a dining table of size which is as big as conference room's table in her work place...

"No Kalpi, Stop... What are you looking around? ...Just run.. Your Family must be worried for you? They must be looking around for you? They must have tried calling... Ohhh my phone,? My purse where are they?? She goes into bedroom, just to be stopped again to admire the beauty of bedroom, she looks at huge wardrobe, light and brown shade coloured walls, Mirror, King size bed, Dark Brown Sofa couch,... Seeing her purse there.. She stops her beauty praises of unknown place, and picks it up!!! Opens it... Takes her Cell Phone out, only to realize, there is less network in bedroom area... She tries to stretch her hands with cell phone to see if she can somehow get the network from any direction... "Terrace, Hall, and all other room has proper network for your sim card. This room would have less network for any other sim than the one used by sir" came the voice, which startled Kalpi.


There stood, old lady in uniform of ... Umm... I dunno, was it a Uniform? .. Confused Kalpi... Already upset, angry, guilty, worried, feared... had one more thing on head confusion with everything around.. Lady came ahead as she held some glass in her hand with something of lemon juice colour... "I am Namitha, and am servant here who work on weekends during morning" she said as she stretched her hands to hand Kalpi a glass of LEMON Juice, Kalpi was shocked.. What else could be there for her in store of surprises, trying to know who is "Sir" here whose sim works in this room😆😆😆 ,... Owns this whole Mansion, and who might have ... 😭😭😭? No She had to run.. She cannot stay here for a second more, she hung her purse and set to leave as thanked maid and politely refused the juice and headed towards door of bedroom... She was almost out, "YOU CANNOT LEAVE", came the voice from servant. "Sorry Ma'am, we are given strict orders, to NOT let you step out of the mansion, You WILL have to stay here, cuz that is what Sir WANTS!"...

Kalpana was shocked hearing her as she was already pissed off, She asked,"And who is HE to STOP me from leaving?"

Maid: "He is our Sir?"

Kalpi: (Irriated) "I don't care? I am leaving!!"

Maid: "You cannot, each and every care taker has been strictly warned to keep eye on you!, you can roam around and see things!! BUT CANNOT LEAVE!!"

Kalpi was shocked to hear this, and she wasn't in mood of listening to anyone, as she still headed towards the door and rushed towards main door, this time ignoring all the beautiful things around."

Maid followed her and seeing her attempt to leave, she started screaming?
"This woman here is trying to leave!!! Warning... Be Careful,"

as more than 10 people came in front of her .. Some gardner, more maids, security people, and cooks, and etc...
Kalpi was dumbfounded by the whole scenario...!!!

As Namitha Maid headed towards kalpi and held her by her upper hand to drag her back in the room. Kalpana was too stunned by flow of actions, and just followed her lady as she dragged her.

She pushed her inside the room. "We were also told to be nice to you as long as you followed instructions, but we can lock you up in the room if you aren't ready to listen to us..!!!"

Kalpana was shocked as maiden locked the room and left the place...!!! "What the Hell??" were words from her mouth when she realized things that had just happened.. "No I won't stay here, No one can force me, I have to meet my family, they all must be worried, she stared at her phone helplessly, silently praying to do magic and give some network in this "3 Bedroom Hall Kitchen" sized one room.

Something caught her attention, as she smiled like to know there is some way out. She had pains in her stomach, but jumping out from this window here, and carefully running out was the only option left to her...!!!

She headed towards the window. 'Yes, height was not soo high to not let her escape' .. She thought mentally... and planned her Escape!




Condition: 982 Pages of EMA FORUM;


You may find some content or parts of the Story matching with some other author's story or writer's view, but it is completely co-incidental and not intentional.

Now What am I suppose to do? Continue? or Not?
Edited by ILoveRagNa - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

424

Views

54.3k

Users

50

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

sweet1308 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Nice one so kalpi is in a heaven jail
Update soon
Interesting dear
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
Ragna1302 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3

It is very good. ...I like it. ..😳 plzz continue. .
Cute_Kate thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
😳 If this was mature content?

Then what will you call the content we readers are totally used to?

Lovely Update,
So Kalpi is TRAPPED??

And I am assuming the "Man" who owns mansion is Raghav?
I Hope? Naa.. I am sure...😆

Ok, so mission 982 forum pages starts...

and just... that we are even more mature.. You can add more details about Raghav and Kalpi's special Love if you wish to..
darkloveriam thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
awsome start
i'm despiratly waiting how this story unfolds
update soon
zindgidilse thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Its nice update
definirely u shall continue.👍🏼
eager to read more 😆
rachufan thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Heavenly jail, wonderful interesting update
Nandinisai thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
nice update..👏
please continue
ILoveRagNa thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate

😳 If this was mature content?

Then what will you call the content we readers are totally used to?

Lovely Update,
So Kalpi is TRAPPED??

And I am assuming the "Man" who owns mansion is Raghav?
I Hope? Naa.. I am sure...😆

Ok, so mission 982 forum pages starts...

and just... that we are even more mature.. You can add more details about Raghav and Kalpi's special Love if you wish to..


Oh Yes I am aware of. Afterall even I have mentioned few stories I have read, in my previous post.. So i know I Can add more details. But let me not get naughtier as newbie😆😆


ILoveRagNa thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Nice one so kalpi is in a heaven jail

Update soon
Interesting dear


Hey Thanks.
Yes... She is in something Like "Jail" for now..😳

How will she escape?

😕

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".