MANAN FF: Hate to Love You: SE 1: Finale: Seg 2(24)

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

read ch-7

okay...so this was the part you used in season 2, where we got to know about manik not leaving him and the pandit coming in the scenario.

well done sana...good connection...👏

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

read ch-8

kabira...one of my favourite songs

the next song- aye dil...that also i love...

and their pillar wala moment...was good...too good...👏

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Sana

@MaNanmatic_Sana

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: aairahahmad
read ch-8
kabira...one of my favourite songs
the next song- aye dil...that also i love...
and their pillar wala moment...was good...too good...👏

cutie pie... do the revisions for me...😃

and suggest me after ending what are the secrets still to open...

and tips may be...

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Sana,

I think i had read few parts earlier and completed reading rest today... Liked your FF... 👏👏 though at times it was little confusing.. i liked the ending.. Liked that nandini stood for what she believes in and didnt continue same cycle of blind trust..

Suggestion, do take time to elaborate on feelings with words.. You have amazing story line and dialogs, but i think many times i thought if you would have expanded on emotions little bit more on emotions and story it would have made more impact..

❤️ Pri.

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

hello madam...
when will u give the next update???????? 😉

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Sana

@MaNanmatic_Sana

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: anotheranfan
Sana,
I think i had read few parts earlier and completed reading rest today... Liked your FF... 👏👏 though at times it was little confusing.. i liked the ending.. Liked that nandini stood for what she believes in and didnt continue same cycle of blind trust..

Suggestion, do take time to elaborate on feelings with words.. You have amazing story line and dialogs, but i think many times i thought if you would have expanded on emotions little bit more on emotions and story it would have made more impact..

❤️ Pri.

thanks dear...

but I don't edit...

thats my flaw... my story unleashes on season 2...

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: MaNanmatic_Sana

cutie pie... do the revisions for me...😃

and suggest me after ending what are the secrets still to open...

and tips may be...

will do after my stupid exams...😡

i hate it sooo muchhh...😡

wish i was a professor and not the student...😡

its not ending...arghhh.😡...i hate...i hate it...i hate it...😡