MANAN FF: Hate to Love You: SE 1: Finale: Seg 2(24) - Page 15

Originally posted by: aairahahmad

read ch-8

kabira...one of my favourite songs

the next song- aye dil...that also i love...

and their pillar wala moment...was good...too good...👏

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

Sana,

I think i had read few parts earlier and completed reading rest today... Liked your FF... 👏👏 though at times it was little confusing.. i liked the ending.. Liked that nandini stood for what she believes in and didnt continue same cycle of blind trust..

Suggestion, do take time to elaborate on feelings with words.. You have amazing story line and dialogs, but i think many times i thought if you would have expanded on emotions little bit more on emotions and story it would have made more impact..

❤️ Pri.

Originally posted by: MaNanmatic_Sana

cutie pie... do the revisions for me...😃

and suggest me after ending what are the secrets still to open...

and tips may be...