SidNi FF 'At the moment nameless' updated (pg3) March 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi
I am not new to IF, but am to this forum.
I don't really write very often or am very active. But I thought I would attempt it.
I like this show, mostly because it is so different. and I love this couple.

I don't have a name for this story, mostly because at the moment I don't really know where it is going. but am open to suggestions and also to criticism 😊 (I would actually like to use this opportunity to improve upon my writing skills, so please make suggestions or comments)

This story is parallel to the current track, but a bit forwarded. I will just let you read it to figure it out.

Thank you 😊

Part 1.

"Enough" Sid screamed

As the entire family stood in the hall while holding their breaths and awaiting for the calm after the storm. Upon Rajveer and Kritika's encouragement, Simren had once again accused Sid of being unfair in his business dealings.

"Sid! This girl...this girl is the reason behind your wrong doings. Before her, you never even raised your voice at me and you would have never cheated someone, much less your own sister's husband"

Simren grabbed Roshni's hand and had begun to drag her towards the door, when Sid grabbed Roshni's other hand and stopped her.

"Before HIM, you would have trusted that I would never do anything of the sort. Did you once ask me for an explanation or tried to figure out the truth before you accused me. Before her, you would have stood by right regardless of who you had to fight against. And now...now you are blinded to your own daughter's wrongs. I kept silent and endured for your sake. I endured accusations from every single person I loved...from my wife, my own mother, my own family. But not anymore"

Sid pulls Roshni towards him and drags her into their room. Roshni quietly stands by the door as she watches Sid furiously pull clothes out of their closet.

"Sid, kya kar rahe ho"-Roshni whispers

Sid stops for a second and releases a pain-filled sigh.

"Dard ho raha hai Roshni"

Roshni rushes towards him and wraps her hand around Sid's arm and wipes the single tear from his face. She quietly picks up the clothes and starts helping him pack. Together they walk back to the hall and stop by Raj.

"Dad"

Sid tries to explain, but struggles with the words.

"I understand, son. Just when you are ready and Simi realizes her mistake, come back with my daughter as well."-Raj whispers to Sid

"I will try my best Dad"

Raj hugs Roshni and Sid.

"Sid...Sid maat jao"

Simren tries to pull him back, but Sid pulls her hand off of him.

"I hope now you and your daughter will no longer have any problems. I wish you all the happiness in the world mom. I love you"

Sid takes Roshni's hand and walks out.

Outside on the street, Sid stares are the gates of the Khurrana mansion. He can feel the moisture building and the increasing pounding of his heart.

"Mein tumhare saath hoon Siddharth"

"Tumne toh phele bhi mera saath choda tha"

Roshni flinches at his word and maybe more so at the resounding truth they held.

"Shayaad iss bar nahi"

Sid nods, taking her hand into his and they start walking away.

End of part I


Chapter 2: Journey Back to the Love...Together (page 3)

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asyaarshilover thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hiee😛
i m also new here😳

wow quite a interesting start it is...i enjoyed...
i would love to read more soon...
btw i hope u won't mind suggesting a title...
it's like "journey back to the love together" ehhh i knw it's not really good neither make sense but wht to do, ths was first thing came to my mind after reading part 1...

do pm me for rest of d updates...
thanks

~aroo~
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update. SidNi living alone without their mother's hindrance is a dream. But I hope sid overcomes his sadness soon. And they expose RV and Kritika. Continue soon.. don't worry about the title you will get one soon. Even I had difficulty in naming my FF and took a lot of time :-P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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firstly I would like to say welcome...I do hope you have a wonderful time at this forum and I am loving the story...It was fantastic and really would like to see where things are heading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sid taking Roshni with him leaving his family... Now SidNi gonna live aloneđŸ„ł
waiting to read ur story further... continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome dear
loved it
sid left the house
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!!! It's a fabulous update... There is a different feel while reading ur writing. I guess u have a really good writing skill😊 Loved the way the story started and waiting to read more.. Do update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really good...SidNi needs to be alone then the stupid mothers won't mess anything up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super dear waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...👏 The great thing was sidni going to live alone...superbb...😉😆 I'm always want this to happen in our story but no one would allow them... Update next part soon...

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