~ OUR LITTLE SECRET ~ C.3 - pg 7 ( 19th march)

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Janavi

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PROLOGUE
THE DEPRESSING REALITY
WIERD TOWN
LOGGERHEAD TURTLE

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Janavi

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Randhir

Sanyukta

Kabir - Randhir's dad

Renuka - randhir's mom

Vardhan - sanyukta's dad

Maya- Sanyukta's mom

Nihar - sanyukta's brother

Parth

Vidushi

Kaustuki

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Janavi

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Our little secret - prologue

"Mom this is the last time I am telling you that I am not going to that man to ruin my holidays! "

" it's just a matter of couple of weeks! What's the problem? And have some respect "

" respect! Yeahh. The problem is that I don't want to waste my time in those relationships which are useless and are never meant to be! "

" you can say like that! He loves you. Moreover you brother has gladly excepted the offer! Why can't you? "

" holidays are meant for enjoying! Having fun with friends. Not for wasting your time in your room sad and lonely all the day! "

" he would be there! You won't be lonely. And you can always make new friends! "

" and what about my friends here? They are planning a lot for my birthday this time! What should I say? Sorry guys! I just couldn't attend my own birthday party because I was stuck with a man who wanted to ruin my holidays. "

" why can't you talk properly! This is how you talk to about elders and your loved ones! "

" don't call him my loved one! He has no space in my heart! No space"

" okay let's get it your way! I am not asking you! I am ordering you to go and stay there! "

" in that village? "

" it's not a village. It's a town! Small town. "

" yeaahh of course! Live with that man in a small town where I have no friends for months! You are great mom! "

" he is your dad sanyukta! Talk with some respect! "

" yeaahh.. Respect "

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" come on! How could you do this? "

He asked looking at the house which was set on fire. His eyes full of fear. He looked at his mate who was in a state if shock!

" nooo nooo!!! "

" come on we gotta rush! It would create a problem if someone's sees us! "

They ran as fast as they could have and went far away from that house! It was an accident!

" we have to keep it as secret! We won't tell anyone about this! Okay? Relax it was an accident! It wasn't your fault. Relax parth "

A/N - Okay so I thought to start a new ff. I know I have many ff's going on but couldn't help myself from sharing it! First time I am going to try my hands in emotional area! The ff is inspired by somewhat my friends life and the book THE LAST SONG. Hope you will like the journey.

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vrinda mishra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice continue soon

Seems intrstin

N do pm me

Waitin... :)

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Janavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda65
Nice continue soon
Seems intrstin
N do pm me
Waitin... :)

Thank you so much for the review
Glad u liked it
Will update tomorrow
And pm you for sure

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-Mrdodokk-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow sounds Astounding!!!!!

Not to forget far from your other FF's...

Impressive start...

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sonali mishra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting prologue😉

Update soon

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ruchi159

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanx for pm

Awsome prologue

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Suma.

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Posted: 10 years ago

OMG! Interesting and enthusing prologue.. Janavi..

Continue soon..

Waiting waiting..

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-chocoangel-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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HELLO JANAVI JII
LONG TIME SIS
PROLOGUE IS INTERESTIN SOO SANYU DOESNT WANAA GO TO HIS FATHER CUZ HE LIVES IN SMALL TOWN
N MAYBE THEY DONT SHARE A GUD RELATIONSHIP
WHOOAAA WHT WS THT SMONE BURNT A HOUSE CALLIN IT ACCIDENT
N THT PERSON WS PARTH BUT WHO WS OTHER ONE

OOOMMMGGG WHT THA HELL RD SANYUS FATHER LIKE REALLY I MEAN HW STRY GONNA UNFOLD NW
BEB I M HELL EXCITED N SHOCKED NW D KO SANYU KA PAPA BANA DIYA
ITS LIKE ME GONNA FAINT NW
TELL ME I DID A MISTAKE WHOLE READIN IT PLZZZ 😕

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~ OUR LITTLE SECRET ~ C.3 - pg 7 ( 19th march)

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