oh dear wt have u done deeps...i am feeling lump in my throat right now...from last so many days the tug of war between heart and brain...who is right who is wrong...shashi this ...garima that...the domino effect ...all cards down today ...they shattered painfully ...reality is harsh ...whose pain is big ...whose not so...if i can see khushi eyes lingering on shashi back for some miracle...wt must be shashi heart going through while taking steps away from khushi ...showing his back to her,must say not at all easy for him too...:(..poor parents so selfless people...they eat sleep dream about children happiness...even today u have shaked me to truth ...seeing garima role here...how she not only showing reality about the pawn of only property ,for khushi sake here...but she even acknowledging payal here...by saying payal never acted bitter with us for wt happened to her...she wanted to stay fair for both girls...i am having tears...kabhi koi itna majbor nah ho keh chahtey hoay bhee ap apnoon keh leah kuch na ker saktey hoo...aur kabhi kisi ko zindagi mien iss reality ko face na kerna perdhay keh ap keh maa baap kitnay beybas hain...:(...ap ka dukh zyada hay ya phir oun keh leah oun ki beybasi...:(...how wonderfully u have grasped truth/reality and then u mirrored it fantastic ..."that man cannot take any risk at this age with 3 women to feed at home "...😭
its never about divorce or no divorce...actually its from day one divorce but with alimony or not...shashi wanted divorce plus money so to make karan poor ,beggar on streets..
garima wanted divorce plus money so that the future of her daughter be safe
khushi wanted divorce plus justice for her unborns cause she mother of many dead ones here...
deeps u have made me stand today at such point of life...where if i pin point any one wrong here...i ll face four fingers of my own towards my self ability to think ...cause i ll be judging wrong here..need to be in each one of these people shoes to understand their stance here :(...simply hats off deeps..tum ney bauhat kuch sochney per majbor ker deya hay seriously :(...:)
coming to other side of story ...there also parents and son ...at struggling period of life...standing close to each other ...understanding well enough that they all needing each other at this emotional time of life...arnav hug to abhey gayatri...and him staying there for them for him...its beautiful..
loved the way he vent out on that informer...DR R is not just busy in bringing new lives in world or counting stars here :) but his mind very active and sharp at karan end too...thats amazing character of his ...worth ogling ..drooling :)
how beautifully u have written khushi break down here after shashi garima left ...the way karan face appeared laughing on her...the cries of her babies...her back hitting the wall...ufff...ufff...and seriously ufff...and at that weakest moment of her...when reality ,realisation hitting her more stronger than a bullet...the one person whose hug she remembered...and the steps she took towards the booth..to share with her friend ...her hurt /pain...her broken heart mind and soul...awesome awesome
on other end ..how beautifully u have written arnav state...his restlessness...his wait outside her house..those lights going off :)...he there just dying for a glimpse of her...those sparkling eyes and contagious smile repeatedly conjured up before him..:)...beautiful deeps ...kiya likha hay wah...that appearance of dull saree clad frame the pleasing sound of anklets :)...he on bike ,wow
so she called him...:)...and his words ignore that bast**...haha loved this side of arnav :)..
"Their gazes met and instantly became oblivious of the surroundings. While he eyed her tenderly, she yearned for everything he expressed in silence, that seemed to be greatly missing in her life - a simple understanding. "👏 u took my breath away with these lines :)..
"is that u...is that really u...yeah,that is me"...wah beautiful :)...simple words yet so strong in feel...👏
how just with her backward step he stopped himself...respecting her ...no matter wt ever the reason...👏
his question...r u alright and then her break down ...no hesitation in crying in front of him...sharing her pain with him...wt a beautiful friendship ..."i didn't expect u...i came for u ...👏
that was for the promise..which i am keeping it now"...👏
loved how he tried his best to stop her from crying..tears which she only shed in front of him..privilege to him...showing her light at the end of tunnel...taking her on logical path... ...her trust on him :)..and his grin seeing her trust on him :)...👏
wow ...phone ...his phone he gave it to her ...his lil anger on her ,no :)...and her innocent reply...did i give u lecture coming and see me at this hour ...😊
more reason to call me,keep smiling ...😊... super excitement i felt while reading the end of scene...how effortlessly he gave his phone to her...her beating fast heart...his wicked smile...her grin...wah wah...loved it to the core...😊
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