MAHABHARAT ff *HAPPY ENDING* (fiction land)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PROTOLOGUE:


The 13th day of the cursed battle when a 16 years old boy was being tortured by seven maharathi mercilessly. The maharathis were torturing a young lad with all the cruelty they had in their heart,mind,body and cells. Those poisoned souls were poisoning his existence with all poisons they had. The blood was draining out like water in his every breath.The pain he was feeling was unmeasurable. But still he was standing in his own feet,Swaying his body like a drunk.But was he drunk? Really you think he was drunk? Of course you will answer " No." But actually he was drunk because he was engulfing all the pain he had in his body,he was drinking all the pains,all the agony he was given.The 16 years old little boy was given a ocean of pains to drink by the seven old,rotten,spoiled maharathis,why?what did they want?why didn't anything stopped them,why did their fatherhood not pretend ? Did they all forget theirhumanities?did the forget their is also a limit of rivalry?did they forget every rules of maharathipratha?didn't that seem to them more than a murder? Then I think its yes. They forgot everything, even the thing"MAN IS MORTAL."

Well it is possible that among those seven maharathis, some might had felt pitied, two had felt his pain and one had definitely stopped them! Yes, among all those adharmis, there was dharm loving person. Although he was a great warrior, but even his warrior heart cried that day. No one was attacking him but he badly got hurt by watching the unmatchablevalour of that 16 year old boy!

His eyes could not see a young boy getting killed like this... but he couldn't just stand closing his eyes there. He was unable to give up humanity, unlike other all members of his side. Known for his charity, standing in front of that young lad to kill him, he was committing a great sin. Don't spoil your name in the field of being inhuman Angraj' the moment he heard this sentence from the helpless pandavas standing on the outer side... begging to leave their child, he realised that a step needs to be taken. Its not that he was his younger brother's son, but because a boy was being tortured by the Kauravs unjustly which was completely against the rules.Rules were rules.Angaraj closed all the doors of his heart,he blindfolded his eyes,overpowering his inner conflict, he let the boy being killed by the kauravas
."FLOATING STRAIGHT OBEDIENT TO THE STREAM".he let himself being floated in the waves of unjustice.He let that boy be kiled,who was a prodigy of his time,whose valour was praised by even the enemies,who could take kuru dynasty in the ways of its golden aura,who could be an eligible heir of kuru dynasty.
That day pandavas lost their son,the kuru dynasty lost its velourous heir who could lead the country in the ways of pride.

BUT THIS IS NOT SO MUCH OF A HAPPY ENDING ACCORDING TO OUR TITLE.

So this is a fictional creation so that the ending could be happy. 😃 😊 😃

If u wanna know how then stay tuned for part-1. 😉


edited: co author's name is removed as per her request.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a interesting concept mohini and moumita😃

Eagerly waiting for the part 1😆

Do not forget to PM me😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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An interesting and unusual concept.The prologue was very well written. Waiting eagerly for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiee Mohini..I knw u as u liked my OS nd poetry!! very happy to see ur wiriting nd well written prologue...it sounds quite interesting!
All the bst to both of u!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plus wud like to say have an index guys! It wud b easy to ascess chapters!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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R E A D T H I S INFORMATION BEFORE U GUYS START READING THE STORY
1)This is completly a work of fiction.
2) It is better to name it not mahabharat but a fictionbharat.
3)the incidents potrayed DID NOT HAPPENED IN ACTUAL MAHABHARATA.
3)we changed incidents 189 degrees to make the ending happy.
4)this is our imagination after watching the misary of mahabharata...
5)we want to tell u people if an incident changed how will be the ending of mahabharata.
6)Do not coppy this ff to any other sites this is exclusivly for india-fourm members.
7)sencitive people stay away from dis ff.
8) We do not want anyone's feelings, neither we are against any warrior spirit nor the war itself... this is merely a fiction, if you do not find yourself interested please ignore!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for the new story dear ! Looks interesting and haha finally I got the chance to satayin u Mou ! Will leave all my comments in res ! 😆
And what warning ? What's here ? 🤣
Continue soon and too interested in this one .
Love
Sam
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very Interesting concept Mou & Mohini...😛
Waiting for your 1st Part

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting prologue, waiting for the first part.

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