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Posted: 11 years ago
Koochi--Poochi--Koo ❤️

Do you know, I havent read last 7 freaking chapters ?
And Im too lazy to do that, as well. -_-

What should I do ?? :P
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Perhaps I can simply swap out grom my laziness and R.E.A.D !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Or... Can you give me a jist of all what happened ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Atleast I could contribute in completing Page--37 !! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^Aru dii... Your Siggies...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
[A/N- Shock laga? 😆 Okay. No Jokes. At least not now. And I can't even say sorry for not updating. Coz Honestly. The writer in me died long back. And I don't know how I managed to write this chapter. I know stupid reason. But I told this to Akku (Akanksha aka Effacius) too. I am sorry. Not taking much of your time. I know.. Many of you must'v forgot the plot and what happened in previous chapters. Here's a quick summary.

Swayam asks Rey to leave the city for Kria and his safety. Rey agrees. Rey and Kria are about to leave city. But just then Rey is in encounter with a suspect who happens to be one of the Shivam's men.

Done. Here you go with Next chapter. And sorry, No Pms. I am updating via my phone's hotspot.

This is for you guys- Aish, Aru, Akku, Snigs, Silk- ❤️ ]



Chapter 13.





I shifted in my seat, unable to sleep in car. I look at him. He is still driving with a expressionless face. And my eyes land up on his gun. In just one shot he killed that man without taking much time, like an expert shooter. With no guilt. No hesitation. Rey who are you? I look at him again and close my eyes trying to absorb the harsh realities. Yes! I am not that mature. Yes! I've taken some childish and unsure decisions in my life. But this time? Choosing him over Shivam? I don't know but my heart says that I am doing right. I hardly know him. I know he is dangerous. But will he hurt me? I look at him again with my watery eyes. Will you hurt me Rey? I want to ask him but I know this is not right nor he's gonna answer this.


*

I am afraid Kria... from so many things which you can't even imagine. I know you are having so many questions lined up. But...I won't ask you to trust me. Ever. Please don't trust me Kria. Please.

Taking a sharp turn I slowed down the car. Breathing heavily I turn towards her sleeping frame. Her angelic features, her long deep breaths, her pink lips. NO! I close my eyes, maintaining my composure. Cutting down the engine, I pull up in the parking of a local motel in the out skirts of city. It was not grand but big enough for two of us.

"Kria..."I speak softly, trying to wake her up. Strangely my voice sounded weird to my own ears.
"Kria.. Wake up." I try to harden my voice but got no response from her. Ugh! This was irritating. Why girls are like this? Taking a deep breath I walk out of the car in the rain towards the reception of the Motel to check the availability of rooms.

*


Sound of rain drops hitting the car roof reached my ears. So it is still raining? Good. I love Rains. Vibration of the moving car was no more. I try to open my eyes. It is dark outside and it's raining like crazy! Holy. When did I sleep actually? I sat upright, clueless as Rey was nowhere. Outside it is raining heavily and inside I am losing my hopes. I check out for his phone and stuff. Nothing. I find nothing. Not even his gun. Did he go for some shoot-out or fight? Is he alright? Or hell...He left me here alone purposefully? No! Or maybe he did. His gun is not here. Not even his purse. He left me? Did he?


I step out of the car. Rain drops hitting me hard. I try hard but end up crying. No. What is happening to you Kria? You were never so weak. My insides scream but nothing reached my ears. The only thing which I can feel is, the cold water. So, Is this the end? I fall down on my knees counting the number of times I've been deserted by the ones whom I love. Mom. She left me when I was 3. Dad. He left me when I was 16. I needed Dad to help me discover myself. I needed his love. Shivam. My only brother. Who never considered me as his sister just because our Mothers were not the same lady. My Step Mother. The lady who showed me big dreams only to crush them later and to gain the confidence of my Dad. I am a trash. A helpless trash.


"K-Kria...?" His soft words brought me back to reality. I look up. He was standing there with so much of concern in his eyes. Lines of tension forming on his beautiful face as he sees me horribly broken condition. And I crashed myself in his embrace. Holding him close.
"Please don't leave me ever."I sod into his chest.
"I thought... you left me...A--nd... I got scared---I---" I try to speak but end up stammering as the darkness was overpowering me. "Shushhh.. I am here. I am here"


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Edited by SuckerPunch. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Res😆

Unres will take time😆

---Unres---

I LOVE LOVE AND LOVE THE WAY YOU SHOW KRIA's VIEWS HERE! :*

The way she wanted to know who was Rey but still trusted him over Shivam.

'Will you hurt me Rey?' was so innoncent<3

Rey's POV was beautiful too.

The way he doesnt want her to trust him and him noticing her sleep.

Rain and Kria's state was penned down really amazingly.

She breaking down with the fear of losing..

And the moment when Rey came to her and she hugged him.

It was PERFECT.

Loved the update🤗
Edited by Snigs. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
reserved

Unreserving


This is such a sweet wonderful scene..I loved how you made Rey confused... Mujhe laga woh Bridal style utayaga but nahi kiya usnaiii

And the rest Kriya's fears taking over her and her trust upon Rey.. <3 <3


Edited by -FrozenRain- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
charan kaha hai apke maate...
nd i thot tu update nai karegi...
bt u did..freaking hell u actually did...
though very very short..as itna tym liya...bt a good one...
he dnt want her to trust him..bt she already trusts him...
now m waiting for things to unfold...eager very much...bhoolna mt

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