KriYaanshDrabble| In the search of Sunrise| Chapter 13- Pg 38. 5/10

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anjali

@alisha1810

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

wow...its just amazing..

loved it 😆

Plzz update d next part soon 😃

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

damn ... thats what made rey jump in this business ... 😲

to take revenge from shivam... for his crime n the blame game on him... 😳

poor rey ... kitna jhela usne ... 😭

shivam should be beaten mercilessly n hanged till death... 🤬

he killed his own dad ... then he can do even worse to his sister... 😡

awww... kriya is definitely bringing old rey back unknowingly ... 🤗

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

wow just amazing.
the story is full of surprises.
every emotion feels right.
the dilemma of Rey's his past and everything seemed to be so heart wrenching.
you feel for the guy.
it was beautiful.

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

READ ALL IN A GO

JUST AW+ESOME AND AW+ESOME

REALLY ENJOYED YOUR STORY

COOLED MY MIND...

SUCH LOVELY

THANKS A LOT TO SNIGDHA FOR PMS...

DO UPDATE SOON

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Jyoti

@jyoti_arsha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Sorry for commenting late..
aap pe gayi hu... lazy soul :P

Hmmm..*depressed face* to ek perfect scene.. tabha(destroy) kar diya gaya.. ek acchi khassi kiss reh gayi.. mujhe laga hi tha.. ye nahi hoga.. kyonki i know.. rey is a jerk gadha.. kiss karke shooting shooting khelta duffer..😡

n thnk god shivam ko nai pta chala dat she is with rey.. :)

update soon di.. n as always ahmazing update.. i loved it.. dark story i always admire :*
thnks for d pm snigs n upi di..;)

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Arsha4eva99

@Arsha4eva99

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

vry nve update..

plz pm me..:)

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Arsha4eva99

@Arsha4eva99

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

vry nce update..

plz PM me..

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

OMG!! What did i just read 😲..

Kria was turning out to be more observant , Giving all those glances to Rey , Seedha mun pe bol rahi thi 'bout him being this stern n all , Being so expressive...

But how can everything turn out to be this Romantic n all 🤔...

Ek bande ne sb barbaad kar diya ...

He would have kissed her , He was changing but nai how can everything be so easy...

Ab toh Kria bhi dar gai , ab understanding kahan se hogi 😔...

Khair , it's quite mazing how u summed-up all those emotions , feelings , Changes in this part 👍🏼...

Really Fabulous the story is 😃...

Love it ❤️.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Hey finally caught all the parts.

Awesome updates and story!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Feeling sad for what happened with Rey!!!!!!!!

But now Kria is source of all his happiness and she will alive that Rey who has been lost somewhere because of his sour past!!!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

I hate this Shivam and how can he be so cruel for his sis????? 😡 😡 😡

Do update soon!!!!!!!!!!

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#220

I read all the parts in a go...

Damn!! Upsana how much I missed reading your works. I don't know if I was lost somewhere or you stopped writing but one thing is for sure that the happiness I get after reading your works is indescribable!

This Drabble is written so beautifully that I lack words for its praise.

I'm just loving it!!

The storyline is so interesting and capturing. I can't wait for the next update now :)

Yeah and how come I didn't get any PMs. Not Fair :( I was your regular reader and I want PMs next time. ;) Plsshhh!!

Love,

Soha