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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapters

They do know how Maan is, then why blaming him ?
Geet very well know him, he has been always open about his affairs.

And its so unfair to blame him for everything.
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Posted: 10 years ago
What to say yaar plsss na Richu stop torturing geet ab bas hua
oh god my heart went out for her pyaar karne ke aayse sazza matth de...

thank god geet nd baby both r safe ...I love dev he is really a gem...
seriously this maan is impossible he has nothing to do wid geet n baby gosh it's high time he need some
reality cheack ...I know Rich u made him suffer double for sure the pain that he is giving her he will burn in sa me hell.I don't know how he is going to recover his sin for hurting a pure soule...
chalo I get glimpse where he gonna missed her bcz he is now dependent on her yaaksss
I don't know kya planned kiya h but I hv full faith on u n I'm goanna enjoyyy it ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
he is actually badly addicted to sex wth different person. .i think he needs treatment
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor geet
achi watt lagi maan babu ki
good job dev
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Posted: 10 years ago
i want to slap this maan 😡 😡 koi jiye chahe mare isse koi matlb nai h isse bas apni aaiyaashi se matlb h...jb isse kisi se koi mtlb nai h tho jyu jabardati geet ko apne ghar me rkha hua h...kya hota agar servants time pe geet ko nai dekhte n dev n meera ko bulate nai tho...isse tho koi fark nai padne wala na
jb ye kisi k liye badal hi nai skta tho kyu geet ko jaane nai deta...
mujhe aacha laga jb dev ne maan pe apna gussa nikala...ye bohot sahi kiya dev ne k jaane se phle saare servants ko instructions de diya k koi b emergency hone pe seedhe unhe call kre na ki maan ko call kr k time waste kre
eagerly waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Am a huge fan of ur writing n the concept of ES is really gud Pls update on weekly base
pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yuck maan is such a jerk...poor get feeling so bad for her...Dev gave nicely to maan gud work Dev...think god Dev and meera r that fr geetu baby...awesome update jaanu.muuuhhh.cont.soon'''''''
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Posted: 10 years ago



PART - 22



DEV left his mansion in anger,with Meera. Soon both reached to KM where Alya's crying sound welcomes them. Meera quickly opened the door and ran at full speed. She was hanging in Dadima's arm. Parth stood besides her almost ready for his school. Little soul craving for her mother's warmth only,thats why all fails to calm her. Meera quickly washed her hands first and snuggled Alya near her chest. Alya's was hell angry so she patting her legs and fists,kicking Meera showing her anger for leaving her for this long.

Parth tried many attepmts to calm his sister. Least he aware that what she wants. Dev too joined them and his anger rosed more. Dadima's eyes searching ans of her questions on their angry and gloomed faces.


'Dadima she is fine now. Dont worry.' He said briskly,not in a mood of talking much.


'papa i want to see Geet aunty. What happened to her?' Parth asked,shaking his faher's arm.


Dev took him in his arms. 'not now son. She needs rest. When she wil be ok we all go to meet her ok?' Dev settled his collars and moved out. 'main Parth ko school drop kar k aata hu.' He told both and left with him.


Here Alya's anger to calmed and soon she slept in the arms of her mother. Then Dadima asked from Meera and she told her all the details. 'hume samjh nahi aata aap dono ko zarurat kya thi Geet ko waha chhodne ki. Le aana tha na usko yaha.'


In reply she only bow down her her head as they know Maan bound her with him in a contract and Geet will never go against him.


Before going near to Geet,Maan fresh n up first. Today he got such a weird treatment which he never ever imagined. His own sibbling shout at him and his servants who terrified with his single glare,today showing attitude to him,which wont be digestable for him. He was letting his anger out of his mind standing under shower.

His fists tighten hard on crimp. 'what they are think of them selves? If i want they will beg for their lifes.' He fumed and frowned. 'but Geet... she is my responsibility.' Maan clenched his eyes and turn off the shower.


Maan changed and went towards the room she was resting. Maan saw her sleeping. She looked pale and fragaile. Her natural glow was vanished completely. Maan sat near her. His aroma filled her nostrils and she opened her dizzy eyes to got his glimpse. Due to seductive it would took time and she blinked several time.

Maan caressed her hairs. 'dont force yourself.'


'i am sorry. Because of me you were late for office.' She still cares for him only and Maan's eyes widened.

He leaned over her,and took her limp hand,which was paining due to drip. 'i am not going office today.'


'Maan sir pls aap kisi pe b gussa nahi hona. They are suffered because of me thats why behaved like this. Sply Dev sir and Meera. Doc scold them badly,and Dev sir poured it on you.' Geet wont able to talk properly,her breath still chocking,he could see by her expression. Even in her worst state she was only thinking about others.


Maan snuggled her to him. His body heat soothing all her pain. 'Geet what stress you have? Tell me why you are playing with yourself and my baby's life? Why dont you tell me that your health is not ok. Geet itni carelessness.'


Geet glance at fice with her dizzy eyes. Her heart pouds with his softness. She always needs this warmth but never got it. She already told him that she love him but Maan had no emotions so she dont wanna mock herself again and again. 'stree nahi hai. Accident k time kuchh internal injuries hui thi. To thodi swelling aa gai hai. All wounds are cured but remain one swelled suddenly last night.' Geet told him the reason of her condition due to which she suffered to death last night.


'wanna sleep?' He asked and she nodded yes. Maan enveloped her in his arms and she got her heaven. Maan turn off his phone to so her silent sleep wont disturbed. He too slipped by her side. Her cold breath fanning his chest exposing from his shirt. Her proximity testing his patience.

He caressed her temple with his tips,pushing her flick behind her small ear. 'sleeping with me wasn't your requirement. It should not had happened.' He took a deep breath,trying to relax his body. 'i had to stop on that night,then we escape this situation in which we both struck now.' Maan staring at her pale but contend face. She was weak but not angry. All blamed him except her who actually suffering.


Knock sound on the door alert him and he glance back. Vinny was there with her medicine and food. Maan allowed him in and he told that its a time of her medicine. Maan look at her. She was in deep sleep so he thought not to awake her right now. Maan asked Vinny about her medicine timings. He gave the info and leave. Maan text his new secratary and put asked his mobile,laid snuggling her again.

Dev reached to his cabin and Maan's secratary asked for the permission. He allowed her in and she passed the msg of Maan to him. 'sir,Maan sir have 3 meetings today. And he cancelled two of them. But he wants you to attend meeting with the ceo of steel comany as it is more important.'


'where is bro?' Dev asked rudely.


'sir he send msg that he wont come today,so on his behalf you must carry on with these clints.'


'hmm. Give me file and alert me when client arrived.' Dev's forehead squeezed as he was trying to analyise the situation. She handovered the file and left. 'bro what you want exactly?' he was so confued with his brother's behaviour but happy to as Maan staying with Geet.


Mid noon and she awaked in his arms. Maan gave her support,so she sat back. He passed water and medi first. Then her meal which was recommonded by the doc. She denied but his one glare and she intake whole food without uttering a word.


'aap office nahi jaoge?' she asked but Maan instead of replying lift her in his arms. She was so confused and asked. 'where we are going?'

'in my room.' he said in a content voice. Geet's hazels told him about her queries. No need of words. 'from now you will be stay in my room with me.' He cleared the mist of doubts.


'but why? I mean i have my own room.' Still shattred,her mind in chaos,she asked haltingly.


'till you get over your illness you need care. And staying far away its not good.' she noticed the tense look on his face,while he was staring in his eyes. Both glancing and talking while walking through the corridor.



His intoxic eyes spelll bound her to him. He entered in his room and kicked back to closed it. He placed her on his confy bed,leaned forward and gently kissed her. Geet's fists firmed,her knuckles white with the force she applied. 'sir there is no use of staying in your room so let me go.' She doesnt want more complications for herself.


'sorry.' Maan wont get her.


'sir whole day you were busy at your office and afterwards with your...' she stopped as its hurting her. 'i mean sir you have your own priorities so it doesnt make a difference where i stay.' she tried to stood up but he grapsed her both arms and push back on bed but gently


'i promise from now i wont go leave you alone in nights and try my level best to came early from office,as soon as possible.' Maan glancing straing inher eyes to make her believe on his words.

Geet's jaw dropped a bit. She not sure how to react. 'no no. Its ok sir. I am fine and will take care of myself and my baby. You dont need to force yourself.' her head is lowered and voice is meak. But he got her signal. She was talking about his night out with other girls. 'sir dont made such promises on which you regreat later.'


Maan was sexholic and never want to change himself. All are aware of his habbit and Geet dont want to bound him forcily. May be because of morning he took this decision but how long will he able to control his desires. She scared of the consequences. Two three days and he again went to satisfy his raw lust. So why giving false hopes to herself.



'sir subha ki wajhse,aisa koi decision mat leejiye jisse apki raat kharab ho jaye.' she said in her innocence and her eyes filled with pain which was noticed by Maan. He was staring her,having no expression on his face.


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Posted: 10 years ago
maan try to change himself for geet nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
poor geet what on earth she has done to deserve such a kind of man
she loves him but he does not wow.. will he ever understand what love is, and how much geet has suffered

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