My Very First One Shot : AY - Page 2

ooh...thnx simrn ash remxrulz fr ur cmmntz.. 😊 .nd nitzie..u bttr read it soon..... 😊 😛
nd yeah...dun frgt hum hai raahi pyar ke is rsa's fav song... 😳

Wooooow awesum tooo gud do keep writin 😃

Okie finally replyingg😳 Got my lappy bkkk

Firstly...even i am shockedd!! :-o:-o:-o I mean the awesum siggie maker turned to an awesum fic writerrr:-o:-o:-o🤗 Hats off yaar... you are multi-talented gurl too😳😳 and on one point even i agree that the gurl who hardly posts a reply with more than 3 lines wrote aweshum AY one-shot😳

Neways now coming to the shot!! Hey bhaggu! I am just speechless...the tension you created was like i was sweating😳 Seriously mind-boggling!😳 Such a cute but mysertious one shot!! awwwwwwwww...i loved it! The part when ashi was like getting bored with yuvi was soo like her...and suddenly her genious mind worked to keep the word 'bore' away from her🤣🤣 that is to again prank my poor yuvi🤣🤣 awwwwwwwww... and the way you wrote yuvi getting scared and stuff...it was feeling like its not yuvi... i am on is place and i am getting scared☺️🤣 Seriously too amazing! and than to scare him more... the loud ashi's ringtone... near the water fountain🤣🤣 and noo ashi around🤣 and to scare more of it...the call was from Soniaaaaaaa🤣🤣 awwwww...my poor yuvii☺️🤗 And i simply loved that hum hain rahi pyaar ke stuff🤣🤣 i think it soo suits the atmosphere🤣🤣

And then when he comes to know about it...awwwww i soo was getting butterflies in my tummy... when he huggeddd her😳 awwwww...it was sooo cuteeeeeeee!! My god...awesum job with the shot pinky...truely amazing job👏 Loved the way you built up the whole part😳👏👏 Aweshum!! and now to definatly u gotta beware from me... coz i am gonna trouble you for more AY one-shots or fics... i am sooooooo in love with this one😳 its just too too good😳😃 Better write more shots!😳

hey pinky,r u sure dis is ur first oneshot?? 😉 😉 is awesome,mindblowing babes 👏 do write more.........

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

hey pinky,r u sure dis is ur first oneshot?? 😉 😉 is awesome,mindblowing babes 👏 do write more.........

yes..its my very first shout...*chin up proud smyl*😛...thnx fr ur kind wrds gal...

Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

Okie finally replyingg😳 Got my lappy bkkk

Firstly...even i am shockedd!! :-o:-o:-o I mean the awesum siggie maker turned to an awesum fic writerrr:-o:-o:-o🤗 Hats off yaar... you are multi-talented gurl too😳😳 and on one point even i agree that the gurl who hardly posts a reply with more than 3 lines wrote aweshum AY one-shot😳

aaah...gimme a break..im srsly tryin 2 break past my 3 lines image....

Neways now coming to the shot!! Hey bhaggu! I am just speechless...the tension you created was like i was sweating😳 Seriously mind-boggling!😳 Such a cute but mysertious one shot!! awwwwwwwww...i loved it! The part when ashi was like getting bored with yuvi was soo like her...and suddenly her genious mind worked to keep the word 'bore' away from her🤣🤣 that is to again prank my poor yuvi🤣🤣 awwwwwwwww... and the way you wrote yuvi getting scared and stuff...it was feeling like its not yuvi... i am on is place and i am getting scared☺️🤣 Seriously too amazing!

aha...my evil deed ws successful..2 scare nappy....lol

and than to scare him more... the loud ashi's ringtone... near the water fountain🤣🤣 and noo ashi around🤣 and to scare more of it...the call was from Soniaaaaaaa🤣🤣 awwwww...my poor yuvii☺️🤗 And i simply loved that hum hain rahi pyaar ke stuff🤣🤣 i think it soo suits the atmosphere🤣🤣

lol...it jus struck 2 me cuz i noe sum1 who sings rafta rafta when she is scared....🤣

And then when he comes to know about it...awwwww i soo was getting butterflies in my tummy... when he huggeddd her😳 awwwww...it was sooo cuteeeeeeee!! My god...awesum job with the shot pinky...truely amazing job👏 Loved the way you built up the whole part😳👏👏 Aweshum!! and now to definatly u gotta beware from me... coz i am gonna trouble you for more AY one-shots or fics... i am sooooooo in love with this one😳 its just too too good😳😃 Better write more shots!😳

ooh thnx babes...nd sowwie fr nt seein ur reply....im sooo aargh sumtyms...

hey Pinkz...... rilli rillii rilii sorry was not able to reply initially, but now I am in masti AY mode today...waooo..... so can reply even to the Presiden't letter which is getting eaten up by insects in my letter box, yeh..its true......😉, well as I am yr Gyan mata in this one SHOT, advance mein Yr welcum.......😃 and now I wanna tell you.... you are a freak... a total scray baby, you acctually made me sit closer to my PC man, yu know, ths is the very first fic that i read on PC, haanji, else all are taken print outs, dekha... me chow chow chowwwwwww dumby baby.....😛 GRAVEYARD, wao..... it can be romantic only for our AY, and thats what happened over here to..... you know, this shot of yours, reminded me of the ABOVE THE GATES SCENE... oh my gosh.......😍

drenchd in sweat uv strtd cursin himself fr wtching "the Exorcism Of Emily Rose" last nyt...as he ws puttin da sign down he hears a loud sound ....he had heard it before.. 🤣 where da hell did yu steal dis frm????? hey bhagguu... to tooo cool gurl..... but the scary part now begun...BABY JOIN E IN DEATH....wao....wat a ringtone, has to aapni AASHI ka re..... all set by her to scare the master mind haan??? or rather master musician....😳 but I am truely gonna kill you..it was chowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww cmall......😭 not happening...... but hey baccha, the end was just...... awwww awww awww..... total AY style.... I love dit, on thw whole, beautifully written, and as for the very first time, brillianlty written yaar Pinkz... you rock wid Shots, do write more...want more situations, so ia mever ready, and you know, I'm such a sweet bholi bhali massom si choti bacchhii.. who never ever troubles nebody😛, ohkies Pinkzzyyyy.... write moreeeeeeeeee... me wanna read, and as for yr next shot which yu have posted, will be replying soon to it too... CHAO !!!! 😊

thnx natasha fr bearin my 1 shot...

nd my inspiration...the person whu askd me 2 ryt n ay shot when every1 else ws jus thinkin me as a sig maker....aapke verdict jaanke badi khushi hui....arre shrt tha...sry...kya karu..m jus a mere beginner....
really wnted 2 speak on sum pts...
"drenchd in sweat uv strtd cursin himself fr wtching "the Exorcism Of Emily Rose" last nyt..."
bhaggu swear this muvee scares the wits out of u....i mean i noe uv is nt tht darpok bt afta seein this muvee ...shit yaar....aap jaise chote bacho ko nahi dekhni chahiye....nd i cam 2 noe abt dis one jus a few weeks pehle..perfect fitt fr fic..nd guess wt..last min addition thi ye lyn...
" the scary part now begun...BABY JOIN E IN DEATH....wao....wat a ringtone, has to aapni AASHI ka re..... all set by her to scare the master mind haan??? or rather master musician"
dnt say this sng is scary...ohk..lyrix thode hai bt mann...this song is divine....vid bhi thodi weird hai bt srsly...song is awesum....nd i chose dis sng cuz this sng has been in my playlist fr the past mnth...i listen 2 it everyday fr cryin out loud...awesum track ....do hear it...

nd ol in ol thnx fr the protsahan...luv ya gal.......