Herez My VERY FIRST attempt to write sumthin lyk dis.....well a shrt intro on how i came about to ryt this...divu madam gav me a ques in heman topic 2 ryt abt ay in graveyard...it strtd off vry small...bt i kept on rytin nd rytin ..addin details here nd dere...nd be4 i knew i had a full one shot ready.....
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T'was a vry misty night..a road ..a desrtd road...suddenly cuttin thru the silence a loud voice booms thru it..."heyy bhagguuuuu".....*hands on head*.."tumne to kaha tha ki yaha concrt hone waala hai....yaha to kuuuch bhi nahi hai.."...
ashi is stndin round a feets distance frm a grgeous red convertible ..uv is givin tht *obviously yaha kuch nahi hai main bhi dekh sakta hu* luk....he mumbles in his head.."wahaan se ryt...den left..".......nd ashi is lyk main kis duh uh ke saath aa gayi nd strtz wlkin away angrily...she sits on a marble stone..seein uv tlkin 2 himslf is buggin her 2 hr wits end.....she luks da oder wayy nd givs n alarmin scream...uv whose hand ws on the carz door is taken aback nd falls ....."aashi ashi...wht happnd..".....he wlks towards her direction bt cnt c her..he sees a grave stone nd his handz strt 2 trembl....he tries 2 say ashi bt chokes without givin ne sound.....he had olways been a lill scared of supernatural stuf nd dis ws lyk a horror muvee he wntd nt 2 b a prt of...how he wishd he had listen to ranveer...bt no...he wntd 2 impress ashi by drivin alone 2 the concrt rathr thn goin wid da gang......slappin himslf in da head he sayz.."stupid uv...ab me kya karunga.."...he strts walkin aimlessly 2 fynd smallst clue of ashii...."ashiii .......ashi plz answr........aashaaaaaaaaa" ...
he sddnly hitz the grnd hard...he hd trippd ovr sumthin...t'was a rock...no..t'was sumthin else...blinkin fast he strechd his hnd nd picks it up...it ws a signpost whose lower portion ws brken..."Graveyard...tresspassers will be prosecuted.."...drenchd in sweat uv strtd cursin himself fr wtching "the Exorcism Of Emily Rose" last nyt...as he ws puttin da sign down he hears a loud sound ....he had heard it before..
".......baby..join me in death...oh baby JOIN ME IN DEATH.."..."ye to ashi ki ringtone hai.."...he strtd followin da sound ..oll passin tombs jus made him more nd more nervous......the song ws growin louder nd louder....he finally found it besid a water fountain which had cobwebs ol ovr....he ws more scared thn ever to fynd her phone soo far away frm where she disappeared.....wid tremblin hands he pikd the phone to find his wrst nightmare cum true....."MUMMA Calling"....
"And we've waited for so long For this moment to come Was so anxious to be together Together in death "...soniya aunty...shit....wht else cud happn now.."Won't you die tonight for love"....wht will he say.."hye sonia aunty...dis is uv...i noe ye ashi ka phone hai...(This world is a cruel place And we're here only to lose)...bt actually woh main uhh ashi graveyard me kho gayi hai nd i cnt fynd her ...." even insyd his mind t'was soundin so farfetchd tht he cudnt dare tlk 2 soniya aunty.....he cud c her shriekin "WHATTTT.."....she wld murder him on spot....shakin frm head 2 toe he ws abt 2 press the bttn when the phone sddnly stppd ringin..givin out a vry loud sigh he thot of dis as the only gud thin tht had happnd 2 himm...he strtd wlkin starin at the phone...he wud hav 2 tell her eventually..wht iff he nvr found her... the thought of it brouht tears into his eyez...bt suddnly sumthin caught his attention...t'was a bright lite.....t'was cumin frm a small cottages window he had amazingly nt noticed be4......"ws this fr real...mayb i imagynd it or .."..dere t'was again.....lukin at the mobyl nd da cottage again nd again.....his feet appeared to hav frozen in place...bt the thot tht ashi myt be dere ws sumthin which gave him da amt of strength 2 move twrds it..bt it wudnt b true 2 say tht he ws nt scared at ol.."hmmm hmm la la.." he strtd hummin to himself..."hum hain rahi pyaaaar ke..humse kuch na boliye.."he strtd singin louder nd louder to contain his apprehension....suddnly ol the noises which had been silent strtd boomin in his ear..jerkin his head here nd dere on each nd every sound of nature he movd towrds cottage nw sprinting.....finally aftr wht seemd lyk ages he found himself stndin in frnt of da door...shakin seemd to be a vry small wrd cmpared to wht he ws feelin den....slowly humming da song he opend the door....with a loud creak the door opened nd he found himself facing a pitch black room...mayb he ws mstaken..."huh...yahan se lyt kaise aa sakti hai...my eyez must b playin trix wid me.."as he ws turnin around sumthin jerkd his hand
he ws lyin on da grnd wid mud ol ovr him......wht appeard 2 b a moanin sound induced panic insyd him...yellin a da top of his voice he cvrd his head wid his muddy hands ........fr a minute he cud nt hear nethin except his own scream..bt when he atlast stoppd screamin nd opnd his eyes he heard a murky voice.."yuuviii....hum tumheee. he he..."the voice suddnly trnsfrmd into n unmistakable giggling sound which ws joind by howling laughter ol around him....sum1 flashd a lyt on him nd he saw da recgnisable face of sid who had tears in his eyez frm ol da laughter....he ws tryin 2 say du...dude....bt cudnt stop laughing...nd now he cud c each nd every1s faces clearly...ranveer tia pri nakool meher..ol wer dere laughin dere heads off....a hand outstrechd frm da bck nd he saw da same ol wristband which meant only 1 thin...ashi....he saw her smilin who said ..."sry uv ..bt u wer too temptin...maine ranveer ko call karke bata ..."before she could compete her sentence uv grabbd her soo tightly repeatin faintly.."thnk u soo much god.".he didn care whu ws wtchin..he didn care wht ashi wud think..he jus had 2 do it.....rest of the gang cudnt help bt smyl ...uv huggd her lyk he had gt her bak frm death...the song ws still goin insyd his mynd.." And we've waited for so long For this moment to come Was so anxious to be together ..."
ashi had no wrds nd felt as though sumthin tht had been missin frm her lyf fr soo long...she had fynally found it...nd cudnt give it up even if she wntd too....
" ahem"...ranveer gav a loud cough tht gt the two luvbrds bck 2 earth..lukin here nd dere...uv sayz "uhh....humein concrt nahi jaana hai.."...still eyin ashi now nd then uv luks at the gang wid a loud expression *hellooo..aur kitna embaress karoge*..oll of dem lukin at each othr grinnin as wyd as they cud quitely leave da shed 1 by 1.....ol of dem go to the road where uvs convertible ws now accopanied by a white jeep....the grp breaks into two nd drive off into the nyt ...sounds of teasin ashi nd uv wid occasional heyy bhagguuu grew weaker nd weaker nd onc again the road regaind its desolation....
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phew...i noe its nt tht gud..but ease in on criticism plz....😊😊
-pinky
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