A Befitting Tribute to A Marriage !

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Saagarika is seriously thinking about Bunty's allegation , she was disturbed

since yesterday .

Why Bunty is suspecting me , obstained from understanding ? Is it because of his over possessiveness towards his wife , or is it because of really doubted my character ?

Sometimes, girls adore the quality of possessiveness; it is as if he is caring and loving me too much . Then, some special care and precautions need to be taken to keep the relationship intact . she knows his nature well. She is trying to know what is bothering her husband ,why he is acting weird all of a sudden? Why are all these changes in his tone and behavior ? why this fiasco in my life ?

Now its time to act. Make him sit and understand that I love him so much, and I care for him . But , he is not giving me a chance to explain ,what I have to do ---

While coming out of the bath room after bath , she was deeply immersed in her thoughts..Bunty entered in to the room wrapped a towel around his waist , both collided and found themselves in each other's arms . For that impact , her Mangalsutra entangled with his chain , which is on his bare chest ,and they were unable to come out of that embrace . The fragrance of the freshly bathed body of Saagarika is seductive ,alluring him , but at present he is a ney- sayer . Only towel is on his body , his tantalizing bare body is attracting her -- But the separating line and the teams , marks and egos all came in to fore front and they realized that they are in a forbidden hug . Tried to separate themselves from the temptation , but was unable to move apart , she pretended to untie the knot , and he realized her ploy and instead of wooing her , tried hard to separate from her but failed . All the family members gathered there after hearing the scream from Saagz because of that unexpected hard hit . Suddenly an idea struck her mind and she removed the Mangalsutra from her neck and gave it to Bunty and said , OK Bunty untie that knot and separate those two chains and tie me with that Mangalsutra again , before the sun set .--- She said these words with tongue in cheek and swayed away from there like a swan . Everybody there stunned . They take some time to recover ,and the first person to recover is Ammaji .

Saagarika ,what is this , you did an unpardonable mistake ---with anger she said .

Daadi whispered in to her ear , "Bahu , by doing so Bahu shown upper hand , so you are going to get more marks ".

How ? Amma whisperingly questioned her .

By resisting Bunty's advances , she escaped from getting lured . Is it not great ?-Daadi questioned,

Though confused , Ammaji agreed with her for the time being .

So we have to give full support to Saagz to save her word .--Daadi said .

Soon it became a competition , some rooted for Saagz and some for Bunty .

Amma ordered her gang to give full support to Saagz .Daadi suppressed her smile , praised Saagz with her eyes and started implementing her plan from that moment .

Now Bunty's main aim in his life was to catch Saagz and tie the Mangalsutra again . From that moment the hide and seek game started between them . While she was in the kitchen he tried to go nearer to her , but there Chanchal helped her to escape , then while she was crossing the corridor , Ratna helped her to escape in the pretext of asking her to help in sewing , then when she was having her lunch , Ammaji saved her from Bunty by making her sit far away from him .

Meantime , Swara informed him about the Resham Singh's incident and why Saagarika hesitated to inform him !

By the evening , Bunty is in the verge of losing his Saagz , and almost forgot to think about Resham Singh , and preoccupied to woo Saagz .

He sat in a corner of the sofa in the hall with a dejected look .

Amma came to Daadi's room for asking more marks.

Sit here Bahu , want to talk to you ---

" You must know what is happening between your son and Bahu !Do you have any idea , how they are struggling to please you ? If you still persist with this separation game , you are going to lose every thing in your life . Realize that !

My son brought this Chanchal to help him , my son is gold but Chanchal is a sly , knows how to deceive . He is not feeling well and already realized that without your helping hand he cannot sustain . He already declared ,he is ready to delete the dividing line and willing to come to an agreement .

Bahu , think about Pappu , you know him , he is a namby - pamby person , you are already witnessed yesterday , while coming back from an Ice- cream parlor , walking behind Rani for convincing her to have one more Ice - cream , he tried to catch her hand on the road , and crowd thought that a roadside Romeo is harassing an innocent housewife , tried to teach him a lesson with heavy blows , but Rani saved him by declaring publicly that he is her husband . Pappu with shaking knees , entered in to the house , you have seen his comic face .

Now see what happened to this young couple . Because of you they are suffering since their marriage , now Bahu is ready to leave your son , what people on the street will say ?

This Ammaji is creating problem between the couples , and not allowing them to have a happy life .

Just imagine , your daughters -in - law will leave the house , if no girl will come forward to marry your sons , then your sons will have to sleep in the foyer putting their hand under their head , is it good ?

And think about our Damaad ,[son- in- law] how weak he is , after eating that tasteless food he will become invisible in front of my daughter . This is not correct to keep them away from each other for long , if he goes back to his house without our " ghar ki beti ", what will happen ?

You are ego-centric and my son is adamant , since marriage,both of you are like that , at any moment you will be separated . That is the main reason I am living with you here , leaving my husband there , and going to meet him yearly once ,for one Ratri , that is Shiv Ratri .

At least realize now and unite them and run in to your husband's room and take care of him , before Chanchal took everything in to her hands . He already deleted the dividing line with a wet cloth , and ready for a truce . Bunty is eager to tie the Mangalsutra around the neck of Saagarika .

Anyway , Pappu is always ready to run in to his wife's room !

Now my son is coming here . Save your grace and agree for a truce "---

Daadi came out of the room and saw Saagz is going to have bath in that evening time .

Daadi went there and asked Saagz to bring a spoon full of honey for her immediately from the kitchen . She went out to bring honey . Daadi did the needful work and waited there for Saagz's coming .

Here it is Dadi . -

She take the spoon from her hand, feed Saagarika a few drops ,and apply the remaining on her face , smiled and went away .

With confused looks Saagz went in to the bath room and closed the door .

Daadi went straight to Bunty and told him , Bunty beta , this is the time to win your lady back . Go and try your luck .

Bunty went inside ,closed the door and sat on the bed , with the chain in his hand .

Saagz searched for the clothes after the bath , thought that she left those outside , so covered herself with the towel and peeped out , nobody is there , thank God , she stealthily came out and about to take the clothes from the bed , but from her back Bunty came silently and hugged her , and shown her the chain ,she realized that she was trapped in that highly romantic situation . You can't run anywhere now , remember , you are almost nude , so ask me to tie the chain again !

No way Bunty , I won't ask you , I can't put my self-respect at stake . How can I flirt with an unrelated person ?A teasing smile on her face .

It is almost impossible situation for him to control himself ,

He whispered , "please Saagz allow me to ..." , difficult for him to talk , he pulled her towards him .

Bunty , I came from a cultured family , how can I give you permission without that chain ?

Then , please Saaagarika , allow me to tie this now itself , his voice was pleading , but his hands are declaring liberty .

Sure Bunty , you have to give me assurance that you never do this mistake again !

What mistake dear ? Hiding your clothes ?

Grrr .. Bunty ,suspecting me again ?

Please excuse me dear , now don't punish me anymore ,

He tied the Mangalsutra again and with a kiss, owned her .

They are in a befitting attire for their Wedding evening .

Edited by Snehamadhuri - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Madhuri, love it dear, hmmm thinking of becoming a writer ? 😆
Want some more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: riya_ss9

Hey Madhuri, love it dear, hmmm thinking of becoming a writer ? 😆

Want some more.

Thank you 🤗
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beautiful, romantic story! Loved it, you are very imaginative, the way you write your scenes, very good story and great OS!👍🏼
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Madhuri, you are a great writer 👏 good job 👍🏼
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Madhuri, hope some thing of that sort happens in the show. Beautiful story with wonderful emotions.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love to read your OS.😃
hope you join the official team of writers of HHN.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibraj

beautiful, romantic story! Loved it, you are very imaginative, the way you write your scenes, very good story and great OS!👍🏼

Thank you Vibha 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kety76

Madhuri, you are a great writer 👏 good job 👍🏼

Thank you Kety 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ppp333

Madhuri, hope some thing of that sort happens in the show. Beautiful story with wonderful emotions.

Thank you Padmaja 🤗

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