'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 69

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update... was waiting for it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super nice the character of manik in ur story is so understanding and sweet but in real Mr monster malhotra is anger king ...
But love manik in any mood ...
But hats off to u for the great update will wait for the next one
Edited by zaroge - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zyra

Yayayayyaya

Thanks for the update.
She dozed off because of the medicine. Uuhgh!!
Anyways,
It's Valentine's Day. At least here we'll get what we wanted and not a fight.
ThankYouuu!

I knew u ll b upset
bcz all expected that she ll listen
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Posted: 10 years ago

MaNan's Fear--Part 28

Recap

Abhi accepts his love for Mukti.

Dhruv asks Aliya for dinner date.

MaNan fight

Nandini was angry on Manik bcz he was always pointing that she tries to find ways to stay away from him.

It was dinner time n still Nandini dint get call from Manik so she gets pissed off n throes the cell in bedroom n goes down to have her dinner.

Chachi ,Rishab n Nandini starts having their food as Nandini was taking her medicines so Chachi dint wanted to wait for Chacha n make Nandini eat on time ...

Door bell rings...Nandini tries to getup but Rishab stops her n goes to open the door but he finds no one...

Chachi says may b again kids r playing with the n asks Rishab to leave the door open if Chacha cums again he has to getup ...Rishab leaves the door n comes n joins them ...

On other side Manik comes to Nandini's place n tries calling but Nandini doesn't pick the call n his trick works of making her angry n as he challenged her that he ll land up there if she doesn't pick the call.

N slowly he sneaks in without anyones notice n reaches Nandini's room...n he was the one who rang the bell n was hiding...n luckily he got to sneak in

As Nandini played for sometime with Rishab n went upstairs after saying good night to Chacha,Chachi n Rishab.

As soon as she reaches her room Manik slowly closes the door n locks it without making any sound.

N Nandini takes her phone n finds somany missed calls...n curses herself

N:Shit...Manik ke itne miss calls ...Aiyyappa...how can I forget this...hope he don't land up here

Manik slowly comes near Nandini from behind n holds her waist from left hand n puts another hand on her mouth so that she cant scream

Nandini gets a shock that who came in but feels that it was Manik only

Manik slowly whispers in Nandu's ears:U lost the challenge...

Nandini takes off his hand n turns towards him:Manik what is this...Y u came here

Manik:Arre...first u challenge me n u only forgot...

Nandini:But I m angry on u then how I ll take ur call...so leave me

Manik doesn't leave herbut smiles...

Nandini tries to get out of his grip but then realizes :That means u deliberatelymade me angry

Manik:Smart haa...mere saath rehkar smart hogayi ho...

Nandini makes an angry face n stops struggling :No I m still angry on u

Manik gets naughty n bends towards her to kiss :Really...

Nandini looks at him n turns her face...as Manik pecks on her cheeks

Nandini doesmt give a look to him:Manik leave me...

Manik:No ...it seems u r not happy seeing me here

Nandini suddenly looks at him

Manik:I was dieing to see I Nandini...its been more than 30hrs that I hv met u

Nandini with teary eyes n with low voice:Manik...

Manik:Nandini ...i missed u...

Nandini:Me too...n kisses his chin

MaNan hugs each other passionately

Dhruv sneaks into Aliya's house as he cudnt wait to propose her next day

Aliya:Dhruv tum yaha

Dhruv grabs her :Main kal tak nahi ruksakta tha isiliye...aise aana pada

Aliya:But...

Dhruv:Sshhh...Will u b my Valentine

Aliya feels shy:Yes...

N both of them hugs eachother...

Both of them spends a lovely time with eachother

Mukti spends night with Abhi on his hospital bed sharing about themselves...

Mukti:Tumne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya that u love me

Abhi:Kyunki main khud nahi jaanta tha...

Mukti:What...

Abhi:I just like to spread happiness Mukti I don't like ppl who r broken n cry for silly things

Mukti:...Then how did u came to know abt me

Abhi:Research madam...as I saw ur anti depression prescription so I chose u for giving happiness...but u were tough

Mukti smiles...

Abhi:But slowly I was falling for u n the day when I asked u out n cudnt come that day I felt that I m cheating on u...n myt give u the same pain which u r going through

Mukti:No u will not...bcz we r gonna spend whole life with each other

Mukti n Abhi cuddles in bed n sleeps...wishing each other happy valentines day

Cabir n Navya shares their worries for the first time...

Cabir:Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main Mom se dur bhi rehpaunga

Navya:Humne bhi nahi sochatha ki hum apni maa se aisi baate bhi chupayenge...Pyaar me dhoka,Pregnancy aura b dusre ladke ke saath ek chat ke niche

Cabir:Don't worry sab theek hojayega

Navya:I m sorry cabir humne tumhe bhi mushkil daal diya...

Cabir smiles :Its k...

Manik breaks the hug makes Nandini sit on bed n puts his head on her lap n lies on the bed holding her hand...

Nandini:Manik...

Manik:Hmm...

Nandini:What happened

Manik:I want to stay with you like this forever...

Nandini:Manik...for that still time is there

Manik:So u think I ll change...

Nandini:I dint mean that...but we need to understand eachother...we still don't know eachother properly...we still fight with eachother every now n then

Manik:But we come more close after every fight na...

Nandini:Yes we do but...

Manik looks at the watch which was about to strike 12

Manik gets up n brings a gift which he bought for her...

Nandini:Wow a gift...but for what...

Manik sits infront of her:I m breaking our friendship

Nandini gets shocked n stops opening the gift n looks at Manik

Manik:U open the gift...but she cudnt...inshort she gets shocked listening those words

Manik helps in opening the gift while Nandini just looks at his face...

Manik opens the gift n gives to Nandini

Nandini smile comes back seeing the gift

It was a jar with fireflies ...

As the watch strikes 12 Manik wishes Nandini "Happy Valentine's day"

In joy looking at those fireflies which were started glowing n Nandini replies "Happy Valentines day Manik"

Manik goes on his knees for which Nandini gets surprised

Nandini:Manik...what r u doing

Manik raises his hand towards Nandini:Will you b my Valentine for rest of my life

Nandini without wasting time gets up n holds his hand and accepts by simply saying Yes...

Manik getsup n hugs her lifts her n twirls her around in joy...

Fireflies keeps on glowing...

Precap

All celebrates Valentines Day at college

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Posted: 10 years ago
This was just too good... Loved HW he entered her house so typical manik
Edited by appy111 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful...loved it...
all jodi's ...so cute...😉
take care...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super cute and romantic as expected ur r an expert romantic story writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update too good...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww Kritika, thanks for the amazin, awesome update !!!
Was literally meltin , when he said '' will u be my valentine 4eva '' ... ahhh

luvin more n more the naughty n jealous Manik 😆😆




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