~||.Buried In Darkness.||~A SanDhir FanFic~||Dark + Thriller||On hold

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello all!!!
I'm Chandu here...
I would like to present my first dark fiction on Sandhir... May be a thriller but I dont know how to describe it...This is my first attempt.. Tell me how's it!
I have incribed this long ago in my mind and I had a thought of penning it down now...



~*Buried In Darkness*~





Prologue



Mumbai 2015, 5.30 pm

She put on her hat.. Tucked her piston in the pocket of her faded jeans and buttoned her thigh length black shirt, she pulled up her sleeves... She blew her tresses back her ear and tied her hair in a pony... She grabbed her bike keys, pulled up her collar and drove to her destination... She threw her bike, she pulled out her hat.. Fell on the floor in a thud... But her heart couldn't refrain from losing itself .. She collapsed, tears made its way from her swollen eyes to her pale cheeks... "One year... OVER " she yelled...
Mumbai, same place 2014, 5.30 pm
It was just evening but it was so dark, only the dim street lights made the streets visible.. Sounds of moaning, wails of tears and drops of blood.. Corpses lying cold and foul smell made its way from the dead bodies..
"R...A...N...D...H...I...R..." A voice trembled on top.."Kahan ho tum..? " It echoed again... "Randhir... Randhir " There, a girl screamed on top of her voice.. Her face fully flushed with tears... Her eyes blood shot seeing the scenario in front of her eyes...




" Sanyukta... Plz come! Lets go home.. Aao na! This is not good for your health... U r pregnant " a shaky voice called her home... A male voice..
"Parth.. Randhir kahan hai?mera randhir kahan hai?... Aaahhh... " she screamed and fell down unconscious...




Thanks for reading guys! Tell me if I should continue.. Do like and drop a comment if u like it and please feel free to criticise... For PMs buddy me!

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Love
Chandu😳








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Posted: 10 years ago
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Buried In Darkness

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Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dark n thriller my favourite
Proloug sounds intrstng

Would love to read it

Continue soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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While reading the prologue,it give me goosebumps.😲
this was scary + dangerous + thriller=dark
What was parth doing there .Sanyukta pregnant😕
Why was she searching Randhir???
Is Randhir a criminal!!
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow thriller !! My favorite:D
And the concept was a way too amazing !!
Something out of the box
And what sanyu was pregnant :o
And what happened to randhir
Plz update soon
And thnx for the pm <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.. nyc concept.
Prologue is very interesting.
Update soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh wow awesome start dear. dark thriller would love to read it. prologue seems interesting. concept looks fresh. plz update first part soon. n do pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omgg I just loved the prologue!!
Would love to read it further :D
Update soon n pm me is possible :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey chandu,
wecome to writer's dept 😆
hehe

Coming on prologue,
darks are toh always my favourite 😉
Update soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg...
Awesomee start chandana..
LLoved the prologue..
Plz ccontinue...
Update soon

Love
Richa.

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